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Reviews for Of Her Nature IV

By : cupnjava
  • From ANON - Beysie on January 24, 2005
    Well, now I can officially say I read everything you've written! Do you have anything anywhere else on the net? If you do, please mail me again... I would love to read everything of yours!

    This story had me a little confused... well, it seemed almost rushed, abrupt? Short, definitely! I'm used to your stories being indepth, yet this one seemed more shallow, although I can't explain why I feel this way. Don't get me wrong, I still enjoyed this one very much! Thea was hilarious. She's Sanzo's kid I bet... the odd colored eyes point to a human (or more appropriately, mortal) parent... father... Shit, now that I think about it, it could be any of the three! I say three because I'm sure if she was Goku's then both eyes would be gold, as Jora's eyes are both gold as well. It's just that the attitudes were so Sanzo!

    Is this the end of the fic? Chapter 7? It was so open ended, too many questions left unanswered you know. I think that's what disturbs me the most... such an open ended -- ending!

    *wails* Now what am I going to do with my time? I have nothing left of yours to read!

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