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Reviews for Concubine Chronicles

By : bsmartfanfic
  • From IMNOTCRAZY on April 17, 2011
    I'm pretty damn sure that Mihoshi wears shorts and a tank top, her panties and a tank top, shorts and a bra, or panties and a bra while she's sleeping for the night. She's been seen sleeping a LOT.

    BTW, the manga? Seriously? It's not canon in any of the canons: the Kajishima, Hasegawa, or Negishi canons. The Kajishima is my favorite, mostly because the second OVA was nearly as good as the first.
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  • From avatoa on February 18, 2010
    What's going on? I just read chapter 2 and it barely has any plot to it. In fact it looks like it was cut off right in the middle of Ayeka's conversation. So what's up?
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  • From darthme1011 on June 25, 2008
    come finish
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  • From Dantes on December 14, 2007
    Great stuff. Post more!
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  • From nekosero on February 24, 2007
    Very very nice! I like the way you built it all up and usually the sex descriptions suck or not as good as I would hope but yours are EXCELLENT! I really hope you continue this story!
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  • From ANON - dragonman on November 20, 2006
    awesome, awesome, awesome! This is an awesome story my friend! I really like this a lot. You are a better STORY writer than I. You said you can't write sex scenes? I disagree. Bravo!
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  • From ANON - TheEndOfAllThingsGoodAndBad on January 22, 2006
    You DON'T suck!

    Where's my update!!! *demonic snarl. Lampshade in the background bursts into flames* AGH! Shit not again!!
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  • From ANON - Blacky on January 18, 2006
    This getting an update anytime soon?
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  • From ANON - Entity on January 04, 2006
    man the little note on the end of the page in chapter 6 is bullshit u dont suck you kickass keep writing!:D
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  • From ANON - naru and tenchifreak on November 04, 2005
    best smut EVER. that's a fact, especially for tenchi muyo! I love it !!!!
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  • From ANON - warai_kitsune on October 24, 2005
    Honestly, what's with all the explanations about why you suck? The prose is wonderful, damn near pulitzer-worthy compared to some of the idiots who don't seem to realize that the english language can be learned past the second grade level. The story is good, the characters wonderfully handled, and far more importantly, they're handled CONVINCINGLY. I could see this happening, and you've made it realistic, made it plausible for something like this to happen.

    Trust me, you suck not.

    One tiny caveat; if you're going to add those little end notes at the end, could you more clearly put down where they correspond to?
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  • From ANON - Alexandrukas on October 16, 2005
    I read all the chapters and think it is a great plot line you should just make it an on going story
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  • From ANON - The Manga Mystic on October 07, 2005
    You did an awesome job with this. I've not seen too many fics that out-shine yours and I doubt i'll ever find one that paints such an amazing picture of love and lust at the same time. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Loneman on September 12, 2005
    come on man, update this story, its got a lot of potential. please continue. please.
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  • From ANON - Devon on September 04, 2005
    This is a killer story, and you have the character's personalities down! I highly encourage you to continue the good work, and hopefully add some new chapters. (By the way you don't suck, your whole story was great.)
    Clubkid62@aol.com
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