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By : Capitalist

From oboe88 on October 22, 2018
This was soooooo good! The writing was really capivating: I couldn’t put it down! I loved the constant push and pull of the master/slave situation. Y/T is by far my favorite pairing of CCS. I also love how thorough this story was. Nothing drives me crazier than a story that’s getting fleshed out and is either abruptly ended or never finished. Kudos!

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From JuyJuka on March 29, 2018
Hello Capitalist,
10 years ... perhaps even longer for you. But I still remember this story, this work of art, fiction and fantazy. In retrospect it shaped me way too much. :-) By now I know Card Captor Sakura and still don't want to know any details about any gay sex live ... it is such a wounder, such a random fluke that I was allowed to find, read and enjoy this story. I am curious if anyone else ever returned to this story.
Greetings
Juy Juka

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From ANON - Asps on June 16, 2016
Hello there, do you still get reviews from PS?
I am actually surprised I'm reviewing this, after all I'm not one to review,anything, even when I love a story much as I did with this one.
But I also don't usually read the autor's note as much as I read yours. it was like a separate story I also looked forward reading. My congratulations on that, you got me reading insesantly for 4 days and as the hungry reader I am for well written stories, this one is absolutetly in my top favourites.
I hope this reminds you how much of a great writer you are if by some chance you've forgotten.
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From ANON - Maz on December 22, 2013
I know this fic was written years ago but I still wanted to review and leave my thanks and love. I adored this story so much, and I haven't even seen any of CCS!! I hope you can see how that makes your writing especially great to have me still devouring it all and loving every moment. The story was amazing, the characters so developed, the plot amazingly thought through. I even loved your authors notes and I hope everything's going well for you today. Another big thank you for your story and I wish you all the best in your future.
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From ANON - Maisie Evans-Scott on December 07, 2013
I WOULD SELL MY SOUL FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER OF THIS. I read this in two days. TWO. DAYS. I have finals to study for, I have papers to write, my stomach is growling but I could not tear myself away from this fantastic story. I just.. ugh. Gah. Wahhhh. WRITE A FOLLOW UP PLEASE? :(

Also I hope that you even get this review - I suppose it's probably been a while since this was posted and it would be a shame if you didn't get to see it. But seriously, I have forgone most necessities the past two days to read this all in one sitting and oh my goodness I am so happy I did. I love it. I love you!
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From DemonsPain on December 18, 2012
Hello there, I'm one of your newer readers..i guess..I'm sure you've long since stopped looking at these comments, but i cannot keep silent any longer....without further ado....

OMGLOLOLOLROLMAO!!! This chapter was a wonderfull read, You capture each character perfectly in this AU! And that "we like eating carrots" bit was priceless! Thank you so much!
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From ANON - SilverWolfe on August 28, 2012
I haven't gotten a chance to really review this story...but, I shall now. First off, the character depictions were perfectly on the spot, especially Touya and the way he watches over Sakura. I can see that if Clamp had actually thought of this, they would make Touya the way you have. Sakura herself is her usual cheery self, but has her moments when she sees the reality of the world, but she doesn't let it get to her for too long. My favorite line, and forgive me if I don't get it completely right, is when she says she tries to be happy because it isn't good to be sad, or something like that (I haven't read this in a while and I'm not up to that part yet xD). But, it really is one of my favorite lines in this entire story because it's so uncomplicated, and yet complex. Anywhoo, back to the characters. Li is amazing in the way he kind of takes on Touya's roll, since he's kind of getting all the lovin' he can take haha, but Li takes over in such a way that it's so subtle you don't really realize it until BAM he kisses her. That was well played, good form xD. Yue, I love him and all of his mysterious glory. I loved him in CCS, and I love him even more in your story since he plays an even bigger role in this than the cartoon series. I'm not comparing your story to the actual series, because, let's face it....this is actually a little better lol.

The plot is AMAZING. In the past I've read a lot of other stories that have the same general plot line, though theirs aren't as intricate and detailed as this....I fell in love with this story the first time I read it, at the very first line. It drew me in, and the plot took over my life! I was an avid reader, but didn't have a username when it was required in order to review a story. Anywhoo, I think the plot twists and turns keep the readers guessing, and you're so good at leading up to something and the BOOM you throw a curve ball and do something we never expect or even saw coming! That's what great writing is about, and I bow to you xD. I love the use of the characters, the speech, the detail, everything. It's so original and kicks all other CCS fics butts!

In the past few years I read this fic at least once (sometimes twice) a year, because I love it so much and have been a fan.....But, anyway, I really hope your plan to get this published as a manga or novel works out, or has worked out. I'm sure we'd all like to know as your fans so we can go out and get it and see what the new characters names are, and what they look like (since you can't use the characters here lol). I would definitely buy it!
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From ANON - Jade lam on December 20, 2011
I just powered through your story within a span of 2 days. All I can say is that you are amazing. To the fullest extent that that word could ever hope to portray. I hope after these few years of finishing this story you are enjoying life. I wish you well. And from the deepest part of my heart I respect and love you.
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From ANON - mj on October 30, 2011
I remember when I first started reading this, years ago when you had first started writing this, but I momentarily lost my love for the ccs fandom and ventured away until quite recently. I was reading this story on ff.net... you might have heard of it? Wildflower? And then I read this other one... oh what was it called... THe rising of the sun and moon?!? Something like that. Anyway long story short I was blown away but also found myself oddly thinking of this story... well I found it again and 49 chapters and an afterword later and low and behold it's peace wish. You write amazingly well, even when it's smut, and my only regret is that SS never got their final love scene (but at the same time i was kinda bawling my eyes out and probably wouldn't have been prepared for anything of the sort...)
I wish I could read more of your work or whatever. But I just wanted to congratulate you on the most epic tale of love and truth and the incandescence of the pure love-filled soul.
You are a literary genius.
A big fan, who won't reveal her ff counterpart
Thanks for the read
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From ajj77sunhawk on March 01, 2011
Im not sure if you know this is an amazing fic, but the spacing and stuff are running. I hope it can be fixed. Really love this story
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From BeginningofDarkness on August 13, 2010
I started your story a year or two back, but then got caught up in my own life and barely over 24 hours ago discovered it again. I was immediately thrilled to find that it was complete(until I finished it and wanted more that is :P). I pulled an all-nighter just to try to finish it. Now it's 4 am and I haven't slept since...but it has totally been worth it. I was hopelessly addicted to this story, (still am) and I can assure you I will probably read it again...and again ^_^ I had the urge to review after every chapter, but I find that if I read a completed story it's probably better for all concerned I just right a loving review at the end
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From lethalSelphie on June 07, 2010
I have been hooked on this fiction for a long time, but have never had any time cleared away to finish it. I turned 18 a year and a half ago, but started reading this probably when I was 15, give or take. I stopped coming here once they put an age blocker on the site with an electronic signature verifying age. I didn't need the government headhunting me over trying to read an awesome piece of fanfiction. I am proud to say that I have read it and sincerely enjoyed each moment. I cried in the last couple of chapters and was in awe at the descriptions of all the parts of the castle. Everything truly had it's purpose in this fic and it parallels the original CCS very nicely. Thank you for your dedication to your writing because it is an inspiration to me, if not all who read this from beginning to afterword.

Best wishes on future projects~!
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From ANON - EmptyWord on April 27, 2010
This was simply EXTRAORDINARY. What a mammoth of an accomplishment you've got on your hands. For two full days, I've been living and breathing nothing else, swept up for the entire ride. Magnificent story-telling. Best of luck to this story's future; I would love to see it published!
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From ANON - oceansong on April 12, 2010
OMG, I simply ADORE your fics!! I actually had a craving for one of your fics again a few weeks ago and so searched you up on ff.net, imagine my delight when I read that you actually had new fics on here!! *glomps* you're the best! I love how you can make me laugh and cry along with the characters. Very few authors can make me do that, so thank you! I had the best 2 weeks reading your fics! PS is now one of my top favourites along with "Lotus Reborn", "Behind the Camera", and "Wild Flower"! =) hope I'll see some more fics some time soon! Good luck on finding a job!

~oceansong
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From ANON - Leu on March 15, 2010
I absolutely adored this fic and I'm so happy you wrote it. I was having a crappy day and this more than made me happy - so thank you. :'D I cried and laughed and had my heart squeezed on so many occasions, not to mention I had to go gather some tissues for more than just tears, but that's just tmi LOL
I know Yue and Touya will have a marvelous life
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