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Reviews for A peaceful Rain

By : cupnjava
  • From ANON - Suicidal Skies on February 14, 2005
    I liked the updated version just as well as I liked the other one. The ending parts were amazing and simply real. I adore this story, I don't know why, but I can honestly sypathize.(sp?) with Hakkai and his emptiness to down right writing then to the lovely blade of answers.

    I did like that scene where he's talking about crimson sunsets, I liked that part, and honestly as I read it over and ova and ova, it's still gonna be a reccomended.(sp?)

    So as Tia go KaBoOm!

    Good job and keep on writing!

    Tia~/Suicidal Skies
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  • From ANON - guanyin-kun on February 03, 2005
    You are one of the few people that can truly rip a reader's soul from them while reading fiction. AAARRRRGGGG....Such anguish. Asking for betrayal, be never recieving it has got to be more frustrating than it being done. Can Hakkai find bigger clubs to beat himself with? If you don't write for a living, you should.
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  • From ANON - Suicidal Skies on January 23, 2005
    Hehe, I liked this, it flowed all Psychoticly and I liked that majorly.

    (Thankies for the review XD)

    Hakkai was utterly sexy in this work of fiction, all fidgety and confused. ^_^

    Good job hehe XD
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  • From ANON - Beysie on January 22, 2005
    *blinks* Wow... dark, angst to the extreme... this is something else! And only one chapter so far... from the looks of things, there is to be more? I hope so, I'm curious to see what everyone does with Hakkai and his suicidal thoughts and all. Yes, in case you're wondering, I'm going through all your works on affnet. I do like how your stories set my brain to work! Please update this soon, ok?

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  • From ANON - Shadowfox_13 on January 06, 2005
    Ah...normally I'm not that horrid at giving a review but I could only think of one word: Wow.

    That story hurt but....it was honest and clean, if sorrow ladden.


    Neath the silvered moon
    An emeral tear falls
    But no one hears it
    It's lonely cry echoing
    Into an empty eternity
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  • From ANON - Jen on November 20, 2004
    Hey your story is great and if you are writing i can't wait to read more
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  • From ANON - Marianne on September 30, 2004
    What a great first sentence! This was compelling. The danger with first person writing, and with any writing of a contemplative nature is to get too little action. The were one or two paragraphs that were too much 'thinking', but otherwise it was a suspenseful read. Not sure what the end meant.
    Marianne

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  • From ANON - Addictedtomarbles on September 12, 2004
    It's dark, it's torturous and there is no real happy ending ... I like it. It's reality angst where it's feeling down and not really knowing why. It's knowing you should have everything to live for and just not. It's about naked souls written down on paper and yet only one facet that appears within the ink. It's about people trying to save you when you don't want them to save you, but you do want them to see you try and save yourself. It's taking something frightening and hideous and making it starkly beautiful. Your story is well written and flows the stream of consciousness well, this one will be put into my archive for rereading. It's dark and hits me to the very core of my soul; like angels wings breaking through tender flesh. You are an excellent writer.


    Sorry for the waxing it's all off-the-cuff. M.
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  • From ANON - Kitara Kir on September 06, 2004
    I loved your writing before. Now I'm just in awe. Not to be mean to your (well meaning)as, as, t het helps you to post the original version, do it! Even if none of your friends understand, if it helps you understand yourself it's worth it.
    Keep writing, for yourself and your fans.
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  • From ANON - Hakuryuu on September 06, 2004
    Wow. Or should I say... "oh". This... beyond words. I don't know what I can say to convey the meaning of what I feel. Your words are like poetry...nobody simply "does" anything. They do it with such grace, yet such realism... Hakkai being unable to correctly tie the knot tcoulcould end his eternal suffering. Were I my lit teacher I could find symbolism like you'd never believe... but luckily I don't believe in raping stories that way. Your characterization was incredible... They all just came to life, right out of the pages. I felt as though I was with them in the forest, or that dingy hotel room... it was truely beautiful, and harsh in its sadness and sorrow. You lead the reader to empathize with Hakkai, but also to reach out to him, to try and help him believe that this isn't the only way. And the way that you showed how he followed Kanans logic without realizing it himself, and yet bng hng her somewhat... there's a saying in Japanese; "todai motto kurashi" or "There is no light at the base of the lighthouse." It, in essence, means that it is hard to see what is going on directly around you. I think you captured it amazingly. The scene with the knife was beautiful. The reflections, the loss of all reason, and just that moment, that one, singular moment, was breathtaking. Absolutely beautiful. Also, the part at the end, with Sanzo... in the anime he says that he chose it because "it was small enough to aim at his temple". Enough said. Thank you for really pulling through this fic, and making it what it is now.

    Even if it never gets read by anyone else, save the original ending. Those are something you never want to lose.

    ...and thank you for sharing. I can see that this is incredibly personal to you, which makes it all the more meaningful. I'm honored that you would share this with me, and the rest of the community here. Please, don't ever stop writing.

    - Hakuryuu
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