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By : SoftxHeart
  • From ANON - Melissa on March 30, 2005
    I thought it was wonderful, real sweet. As I've read the manga I've sometimes felt like this was the situation actually, but I've never really admitted it I guess. Loved your writing style.

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  • From ANON - Super banzai on March 23, 2005
    Best. Hiro/Shuichi fic. EVER!!! *applause*
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  • From ANON - Midnight on December 22, 2004
    Hmmm.... I liked it.

    But maybe you coulda had a bit more.... hmm... detail here and there.

    I am avaiable if you ever need help. So don't hesitate. ^.~ I love helping newbies!!

    GJ and write mor please.

    --Midnight--
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  • From ANON - girlie on December 21, 2004
    this is awesome nice job. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Chirpy on December 20, 2004
    HOW SWEET! I love Hiro/Shuichi pairings too and there just are not enough of them! Thanx for writing one! It was a great ending and a great one shot! =)
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  • From on December 20, 2004
    I actually liked the ending. It was kinda sad, but fit the story well. There were word choice errors and sentence structure problems, I think, but I'm no expert. Nothing major. Overall, it was a very good story. Bonus points for it being Hiro/Shu, and you would've gotten double bonus points if more happened involving pocky.
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