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Reviews for Teaching Goku

By : Quirk
  • From ANON - Krimson on June 02, 2005
    Every word is a little gem laced together in a glittering jewel of a story. I love your interpretation of these characters. Hakkai and Goku are quite determined to force a bit of self-esteem on Gojyo, but he still isn't ready to accept it. I hope you write many more chapters and stories to come. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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  • From Silverone on June 02, 2005
    So sorry I didn't review the last chapter, though I didn't find it too bad. Though, I was surprised that the confession happened that soon.

    The current chapter though, was quite excellent. The way you potray Goyjo's emotions are always so captivating. And you don't write Goku as some little uke boy who can't care for himself.

    Your interactions are always excellent as well. I feel like I'm watching the show.
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  • From ANON - ZoeyJade on May 16, 2005
    I just wanted to tell you that I love what you've done so far with this. I don't find many Goku/Gojyo fics. And I can definately say this is the best I've ever read. I really really really like it and I can't wait for you to update with the rest of the lesson plans. :) Keep up the good work. I think your keeping them in character nicely and I love that!
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  • From ANON - Cupnjava c[~]~~~*sip* on May 15, 2005
    Very good. All too often people neglect the fact that Goku can get very insightful when left a lone for a bit. You presented Goku’s scattered thoughts very well. I could feel the need to speak before he forgot the thought. Good job with that.

    I like the Gojyo confusion. His reluctance can be read many different ways and each one seems appropriate. His willingness speaks volumes.

    [Is--- is this some weird mother thing?”

    At that, crimson eyes narrowed. “Watch it, monkey.”] ---I laughed! This is great. It shows their tried and true relationship as well as an insightful Goku.

    [He sighed and answered without hesitation as best he could. “Because I think… about the noises… I’ve heard… and I think about… making Hakkai… make those sounds… and then I think… about him drawing those sounds out of me…” The youth sighed again, heavily. “And I get hot… thinking about it… and I don’t want that when I’m talking to you.”] ---The implications of that are boggling. I’m not sure which direction you are going with this, so I’m trying not to read too much into it. Good job.

    The Gojyo/ Hakkai thing – that can be taken a few ways too. The first thing it made me wonder is how does Hakkai really feel about what is going on with Sanzo? Hakkai attitude in this fic smells of obligation – but that might be my angst loving heart speaking.

    I really like how you left so much open. I can see where you are setting the stage for some serious angst – I can also see where you are not. Excellent. I look forward to reading more.
    Cupnjava c[~]~~~*sip*

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  • From ANON - TenshiKaitou on May 12, 2005
    poor Gyojo. things seemed to get more complicated for him. darn, can't wait for the next update! wooohooo~!
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on May 11, 2005
    aww,i was glomped! *glomps back* i feel so loved! *grins* i'm back to review yet another lovely installment of one of the best written saiyuki stories i've read so far. so, its finally out in the open and eveyone knows. whoohoo, now, we can see them getting naughty in public places with the lights on! *smirks* anyway, your delivery of the events that occured after gojyo decided to spill the beans (i was shocked when gojyo decided to call him and goku, a couple after goku specifically asked for them to be lovers)was extremely good. i mean you had sanzo's act done perfectly, hakkai is normal smiling self (though for a second there, i thought he was gonna kick gojyo's ass) gojyo was ...well gojyo and goku had the best reaction out of all of them. when he started babbling about what they had done and sanzo started twitching, i just about died laughing. Oh! and the part with hakkai trying to telling gojyo he deserves better was sweet, too. (i was reading on the bus at the time ^_^) this is definitely one of my fave chapters so far. ahhh, who am i kidding, i like all of the chapters. anyway, looking foward to your next update. keep up the great work! so until next time, ja!
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  • From ANON - CF on May 10, 2005
    I just wanted to tell you just how much I am enjoying this story. The Saiyuki fandom is so overrun with Sanzo/Goku and Gojyo/Hakkai stories that it gets fustrating looking for good fics with other pairings. And make no mistake, this story is very good; it has an interesting premise, grammar and spelling errors aren't bad, and everyone is in character. It's not more of the same type of fics that I pass over on a daily basis and for that I thank you. Until next time, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Crimson on May 08, 2005
    THE SUSPENSE...is killing me. So well written--better every chapter and so...deep and complicated, which is life, after all. I know whats going. Hakkai and Sanzo aren't in love, but they comfort each other during the rain because they understand each other's similar pain best. And now...Hakkai is realizing he messed up and even though he wants Gojyo, he thinks now he's lost him. Ack! More!
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  • From ANON - KaosD on May 07, 2005
    Ah, the almighty "everyone loves Hakkai" effect in action! *laughs* It might ve been an impossible soap opera if he weren't so loyal. And Gojyo seems to be destined to go around being dumbfolded XD
    Don't worry, so far everyone seems to be quite IC. With everyone, I'm waiting for an update, as usual.
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  • From ANON - Terry on May 07, 2005
    Aww! Goku is so forceful! Glad you updated and excited to read what happens next!
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  • From ANON - lady_kail on May 07, 2005
    Wow! I would never have thought that pairing would've worked.
    But it's hot and sweet and I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Azurepoet on April 25, 2005
    I'll start this review off by saying that I really dislike Gojyo/Goku fics, mostly because I'm not a Goku fan. So when I say that I am absolutely addicted to your story you will understand how big of a deal it is for me. Not only do I adore the way you write Goku, but your Gojyo...ahh! So good! You do the Saiyuki boys justice! Please please please continue to supply my addiction!
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  • From ANON - Stephanie on April 24, 2005
    Ack the review above was me. I accidentally pressed the return key and ended up anon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 24, 2005
    Oh my oh my oh my Goku has gone exclusive! Wow, can Gojyo, though? Ya know, I had NEVER thought of those two as a legitimate pairing, long-standing and the like. Now, though, the way you have written it (with both of their characters very much preserved as well ^^) there is an element of natural progression and then something that is just so right about the situation, especially alongside Sanzo and Hakkai's fuckery lol Are Sanzo and Hakkai in a loving relationship in this story, by the way? Maybe you mentioned it, but I just can't remember. Hmm... why does Hakkai have to get in everybody's business ARGH mothering bastard! Sanzo is moody. A moody Sanzo is a sexy Sanzo. I am rambling now but your story makes me get all giddy! In closing I shall say that the scene with the old lady in the store was frickin hilarious. I can totally envision Gojyo wanting to maintain his stallion status even in a place he may never see again. Boys and their egos, eh? I just want to go on and on and on because this story has a strong hold on me but I can't *sigh* Just don't get too bogged down in stressful other things and come back to this story! Updates = Stephanie's love lol!
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  • From kirameki on April 17, 2005
    This was excellent. I normally don't care so much for this pairing but you make it work so well. ^^; The only thing I noticed was you said Goku was 18, but, umm, isn't he like 500? I mean if you count his past and the years he was locked in prison? Not a big thing, just wondering what you planned to do with that.
    I loved the last chapter where Goku staked a claim on Gojyo. Gave me the giggles. ^_^ Can't wait for more.
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