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Reviews for Teaching Goku

By : Quirk
  • From ANON - MoOdSwInG on February 15, 2005
    Sorr...y..cant say a...anything...bu..sy hold..ing klee...ex *MAJOR NOSEBLEED*
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  • From ANON - Lazuli on February 14, 2005
    The thought of sex and Goku is rather odd, yes--but you've written it better than a lot of people tackle it. For one--you don't have him all knowing or anything like that. You kept a lot of his personality with it--and even with Goyjo's personality. For a lemon/almost lemon--it was very good for the pairings. :) Goku and Goyjo make a good pairing if there has to be any pairing at all.

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  • From ANON - Sorchafyre on February 13, 2005
    This was a really nice story. I agree, it's hard to write Goku and sex, but you've hit just the right note of curiosity without taking either of them out of character. The decision to set it in Gojyo's viewpoint was a good one, and the dialog is completely believeable.

    If you write more, I'll definately read it.
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on February 13, 2005
    oh yeah!! make that sexy kappa teach you some tricks, goku!! then when you've learned all you can, you go after sanzo and hakkai, eventually working your way up for a group orgy!! *smacks herself in attemps to drag her mind out of the gutter........and fails miserably* lol. very nice job! loved how goku turneed the tables at the end. please update soon! i cant wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From SoftxHeart on February 12, 2005
    ahh!! i LOVE goku x gojyo pairings and this was -so- well written!! GOOD JOB!! I loved it ^^
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  • From SayuriNakamura on February 12, 2005
    Nnnniiiicccceeee.....*low whistle* Very good first chapter--I loved every word of it. Update soon, I wanna read about the '2nd Lesson'...^_~
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  • From ANON - BKFan on February 12, 2005
    Cool, I like this! Your writing is pretty good, and I like the idea a lot^^

    Goku and Gojyo are really hot together in my opinion, and I'd really like to read more of this! Post again soon~
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  • From ANON - Terry on February 12, 2005
    Wow, Goku is a very good student. Please update soon. That was a very hot lemon.
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  • From ANON - Cupnjava c[~]~~~*sip* on February 12, 2005
    Very well written! I agree with you Goku in a lemon most of the time makes me cringe, and because of that 5/9 tends to be one of my least favorite pairings. You wrote it so well that you just sucked me in.

    All too often this pairing is handled with a flippant air, which has it’s good points, but I really like how you let the bickering and juvenile behavior get suspended once things turned serious. And yet! True to form, once the moment had passed, that known relationship dynamic came back -- good show!

    I think your characterizations are very well done. You have a good mix of child and man in both of them. Gojyo being the playful older brother that can turn tried and true friend in a heartbeat and Goku being the kid that in a flash becomes a man. Good show!

    The pace and flow of this chapter was excellent. The verbiage was grand!

    Is it just me or does everyone just love a water scene?

    I’m looking forward to reading more of your work, thank you for sharing.

    Cupnjava c[~]~~~*sip*
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