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By : Quirk

From DHaugsby on June 18, 2006
I've been following this story since last fall and as thrilled as I am when I see a new chapter, it hurts to then have to wait for the next one to be written and posted. Can you not clone youself so you could write faster? Yes, yes, this would be a thing to look into...
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From ANON - fuzzybunnytoo on June 18, 2006
OMG This was GREAT. I need a cold shower. I love this and we found our the Hakkai likes Gojyo. What a revelation. There can be come good stuff come from that and I would love ot see that. You are fantastic. And thatnk s for the shout out it made my day.
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From ANON - chaoticcleric on March 10, 2006
Never thought I'd like a GojyoXGoku fic, but this was well written and so convincing! I still winced at the explicit bits and skipped through a lot of them, because I can't really picture Goku in that way... I enjoyed this fic mostly for the interaction between the four ^_^ . I'm really curious to see what Sanzo will do next. You made him such a bastard! I know he's famous for being a prick, but...
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From kirameki on February 06, 2006
O_O Wow, I forgot about this story. I haven't read into the Saiyuki fandom in a long while. Not sure if you even remember me, I think I reviewed way back in the early chapters. I just wanted to say I thinks it's coming along great. Never really thought on this pairing before, but I'm totally hooked. Sanzo and Hakkai were big stupid heads, though. Honestly, what did they think was gonna happen. I love your characterizations too. I think your being pretty true to their characters, And I love seeing Gojyo do sweet things unexpectedly, like buying the bagels. xD SO sweet, and yet he still has that good old Gojyo essence. I hate when people turn the characters into mush fests where they don't feel like the character anymore. But you've really captured the characters. I mean people do change when they fall in love, but not drasticaly, it's all about the little things. I can't wait to read more.
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From ANON - lady_kail on February 03, 2006
I've been checking back almost everyday for an update - and ended up reading all 13 chapters, interspersed with "Bits and Pieces" again in one go.

And I just have to say, YOU ARE AMAZING!!!!

I hope you can update soon - on both fics as I am on tenterhooks about what could possibly be coming next.................Or who :-D

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From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on January 24, 2006
dammnit, i forgot to comment on the extra chapter-thingy! i kinda liked seeing things from someone else's P.O.V. hakkai's response to sanzo's telling him that goku had an orgasm was hilarious. i definitely wouldn't mind reading more of those. but only if it's something that you wanna do. don't kill yourself trying to please your readers, now. there are a lot of pushy reviewers out there. >_< but, yeah, now i'm done with my review. ^__^
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From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on January 24, 2006
hiya!! what's cookin'? i finally got the time to up and review so here i am! well, what can i say that i haven't said before besides the fact that i adore this fic and all the time you've put into it. this is the only fic in this fandom that i look foward to seeing updates for. but i'm sure you knew that already. anyway, lovely chappie. they started to have a talk about the pet names (yay) but then gojyo had to go and start feeling up on goku. (double yay) i loved the part when sanzo told gojyo that he was going to spoil goku. i dont know why but that part just made me go a fangirly. that and the blowjob scene *growl* i can't wait to see where they were invited and who invited them. i have an idea but i might be wrong.

oh!! and i see that you checked out "Haru wo Daiteita". good stuff, ne? those are the two bishies i've got hanging on my wall. (i love Katou, the light-brown haired one) and i've also read "Beyond my Touch" (teh cuteness) and "In My King's Harem". i was kinda iffy on the last one because i don't like it when the ukes are super girly looking, but the book is definitely a keeper. i loved all of the stories and despite my dislike of super girly boys the artwork WAS exceptional. i haven't read "our kingdom" yet but it is on my list for the next time i go book shopping. i limit myself to go book shopping once a month. one shopping trip can be up to $100 bucks no problem if i dont make a list and only buy what is on the list. but i'm rambling, which means it's time to wrap things up. always looking foward to your next update. so until next time, ja! ^__^

~Devi
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From ANON - Abby on January 22, 2006
best fanfic ever! Please update soon!
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From ANON - Gingitsune on January 19, 2006
I wonder where Sanzo's POV was in the course of Goku and Gojyo's relationship. I'm really glad to see the progression of their relationship. It's really sweet. You found Haru wo Daiteita! I love that manga!!!! It's a really great manga and there is so little fanfiction on it. I do hope that you might someday start writing on that.
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From ANON - Dragon on January 12, 2006
Hi! I've been reading this for a while but hadn't reviewed yet. I check for updates every day. I've been enjoying the way that Gojyo and Goku interact and the fact that you've made them sweet without taking away any of the oh-so-Gojyo-and-Goku squabbly interactions. I'm rooting for these two.

I'm really curious to see more of Sanzo's side and to find out about this connection he has to Goku. Where did that come from? When did it start? And to find out a bit more about why he's such a bastard to Gojyo. And did he really JUST go through Gojyo with that kiss to get a taste of Goku, or was Sanzo partly lying when he said he wasn't kissing Gojyo? I'd love to find out in the story.

I love the couples. Of course, if everyone ends up tumbling into the same bed at the same time, I wouldn't have any problem with that either. So I'm going to be happy no matter what happens! :D Thank you so much for writing this story, and I hope you're enjoying it as much as we readers are!
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From ANON - stormyluck on January 11, 2006
that was great.
are sanzo and goku ganna end up doing anything? and as long as there's another chapter i'll stay alive just cause right now my life is kickin me in the face and i need a good smile. keep up the good work!!111
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From ANON - fuzzybunnytoo on January 10, 2006
thanks for the Sanzo pov , i was wondering that myself. Writingis somming along very well and i am enjoying it to the fullest. and thatnks for the shout out made me feel really important and that doesnt happen often. :) pocky to you for it is my favorite thing to do while i readsnack on pocky and enyoy anime.
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From ANON - lady_kail on January 10, 2006
I LIKE that other point of view. Opens up soooo many new vista. (big, cheesy grin)

I'd like to do a real in-depth review of your work, but all I can say, is I LOVE IT! and I'm always checking for an updates.
Here's to waiting for the next instalment. Plus, thank you in advance for all your updates.
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From ANON - Vanessa on January 10, 2006
Sometimes it's hard for me to imagine Goku with anyone, but this just works! Keep it up. And I LOVED reading from Sanzo's pov, and I can't wait to get more of THAT either. Thanks for being so damn cool!
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From ANON - Soka-chan on January 10, 2006
This fic is simply amazing.I love it. I never knew Goku/Gojyo could be this good, it's surprisingly refreshing, from the more obvious and common Goku/Sanzo and Hakkai/Gojyo...but Sanzo and Hakkai seem to be in love with the other two, which makes it even better!!At first I wanted Gojyo and Goku to play around but end up with Hakkai and Sanzo respectively. But now I'm on Gojyo's side!!I don't want them to EVER be apart!!But jealousy is so much fun...and Gojyo being insecure is just too cute^^. Goku is the cutest of them all, but that was a given. Oh, and one thing I'm very impressed with, you depict the relationship surprinsingly real and convincing.They're not sappy, but they're romantic in their own way, and what a realistic way it is. I hope you're having fun writing this, cause I'm sure having it while reading!!
Oh, and this last chapter(really chapter one from Sanzo's p.o.v)was veeeery good, I'd be amazing if you retold events from his perspective!!(the absurd: "Goku just had an orgasm" made me laugh so hard my deaf granma heard it from downstairs-I was quite surprised. Seriously, very good)

Sorry if grammar was bad, I live in Spain, so my english is school's teaching and a bit of talking once in a while.
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