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Reviews for Beauty and Disclosure

By : Lunamaria
  • From ANON - TK on February 10, 2006
    I like it. I don't know why. Some how I find this story very cute and streaming. Something new and wounderful at the same time. Thanks. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 11, 2005
    Most interesting POV and a good, untypical ending. I like it.
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  • From ANON - Lucamin on August 12, 2005
    Ooh, that was a lovely one-shot! I wouldn't mind more but it's also good as is. A couple of minor spelling and grammar issues but overall, very well done.

    "None of you"-->"Neither of you" since there is only two people within the fic, neither is more suited.
    "Repeatedly"
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  • From ANON - Snarf on July 05, 2005
    Wow. I really enjoyed reading this fic. It was very very nice. ^_^ I actually felt like I was Tezuka, the way you wrote it. This was great! I can't wait to read more from you. I don't know if you will, but you should write another chapter. Keep up the great work, and I hope to read more from you soon! :D
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  • From ANON - Tsuyomi on July 01, 2005
    It's nice to see something different once in a while! You really pulled off writing in second person beautifully; it can be really hard, and I've read a lot of fics where authors have tried their hand at it, but this is the best -by far- that I've read. I've never seen PoT, so I can't say whether or not these two were in character, but I enjoyed reading this nevertheless. :) Hope to see more of your work in the future!
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