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Reviews for Keitaro Time Bomb

By : takeshi88
  • From ANON - Duncan on May 10, 2013
    I think Motoko shoud be punishd next
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  • From ANON - Duncan on April 23, 2013
    motoko should be punishd next
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  • From Skull on November 04, 2007
    Yo nice story I say do Motoko next give her some nice double pentration for all the shit she has done to Keitaro even do Sarah or Su (God knows I have) But you may not Forcibaly have Sex with Shinobu Maehara without premmision from:Her Parents,Herself,General Bobcat Leader and Founder of Her Kawwiiness Secret Service (HKSS),Raven's Ark Leader Cobray Gordon (Allying Mercs with the HKSS),or you may also get premmission from me DOOM Agent Master Cheif of the HKSS Delta Base. I command Fleet ships that will kill Keitaro and alot of other people if she is harmed in Sexual or Regular ways. General Bobcat ill send the very large HKSS Full Force on you. And Commander Gordon with Rip anyone enjoying he suffering in half. Please write for all the girls EXCEPT Shinobu.*Salutes* Have a good day and update soon.

    -Skull J. Darkmaster "I'm either your friend or your worst nightmare you have the choice"
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  • From JudgeofRokubi on July 13, 2007
    the only one i say to not let this happen to is shinobu, the only girl in the hotel who is nice to the guy. the rest of them deserve it on some level, especially naru, motoko, and kitsune.
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  • From JudgeofRokubi on July 13, 2007
    I say motoko gets it next

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  • From Mangafreak on March 21, 2007
    i say Kitsune motoko, or maybe even sarah( i know i am a sick little man but that is why i call my self twisted). But don't rape shinobu. she is the only nice girl in the series.
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  • From Mangafreak on January 25, 2007
    You had better write another chapter to this. its too god to just stop here!
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  • From ANON - Antoniusan on December 23, 2006
    Great story, good descriptions an so on. And as a footnote, I would like to add that I'm glad Naru got humiliated first. It would be really nice if you could continue this ASAP. Keep Up The Good Work!
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  • From ANON - n/a on December 17, 2006
    make all them suffer nexted should be su
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  • From ANON - n/a on December 17, 2006
    go on with the story start up chapter 2
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2006
    wats takin so long? write more
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  • From ANON - Drkman on November 10, 2006
    I seriously think you should continue this story.
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  • From ANON - fanficfan on July 31, 2006
    Whoa man! Completely OOC. Reading more would be bad for me but I fucking need it! Update!!!!!
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  • From ANON - dancingflames on July 13, 2006
    I think that you should continue. Maybe have something involving the other girls that pick on Keitaro. I can't help but like stories that have Keitaro getting even on the girls. It always annoyed me when reading the manga how they abused him. So please continue.
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  • From ANON - Inu on February 11, 2006
    It about time for him to that a stand and show who bross. U got my vote
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