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Keitaro Time Bomb

By: takeshi88
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Rating: Adult ++
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Keitaro Time Bomb

Disclaimer : I do not own Love Hina or any of its characters. This is just a story, nothing else.

Warning : Loads of Adult themes, Bad language and Non-consentual sex scenes. Please leave immediately if you are offended by such things. Otherwise please read and review, thanks.

PS This is my first fan fic on this site so go easy on me :)
My email is tdd7788@yahoo.com if you wish to contact me.

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“BAKA YARO!” Keitaro cursed in anger & jealousy as he saw Naru & her new Boyfriend leaving for a date. They were holding hands and looked very happy. Poor Keitaro, the love of his life had rejected him flatly and was now going out with another guy she had met though Kitsune.

It was bad enough that Keitaro’s love for Naru went unrequited, but he still had to bear with her bad temper and beatings. In front of her new boyfriend, she seems like an angel but once she got back to the Hinata Apartments, she would turn back into her usual bad tempered self and poor Keitaro would bear the brunt of it.

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“Senpai, won’t you come to town with us” asked Shinobu. The girls were all preparing to go down town that day as there was a big sale.

“Huh? Oh, not today Shinobu, I still have lots of work to do” Keitaro replied with a blank mind, especially since he was still thinking of Naru & her boyfriend.

“Ok, take care, we’ll be back for dinner!”

Keitaro cursed under his breath. Damn these girls really knew how to enjoy themselves. Sure, he would have loved to go down town and have a good time, but who would do the washing, cleaning, sweeping and all the hard work at the Hinata Apartments? He then looked through his list of chores. The floors had been mopped and the windows cleaned. Oh yeah, there was still that problem in Naru’s room. She had woken Keitaro up abruptly this morning to complain about a crack in her ceiling.

“Chikusho!!” Keitaro cursed again. “She’s even making trouble for me when she’s out!”

He entered Naru’s room and proceeded to inspect the crack. It looked like an easy job to do. He just had to patch up the small crack. But the crack was right up in the ceiling and Keitaro wasn’t tall enough to reach it. He grabbed Naru’s chair, climbed up and proceeded to fix the crack.

“Ahhhhhhhhhhh!” Being as clumsy as ever, Keitaro slipped from the chair while trying to reach the crack. He fell against Naru’s wardrobe, in the process smashing through its wooden door. Some of Naru’s clothes fell out and landed on Keitaro, including some of her lingerie. A pair of Panties landed on his face.

As luck would have it, just at that very moment, Keitaro heard the door slide open.

“Keitaro you Pervert! What the hell are you are you doing!” screamed Naru.

“Naaa… Na… Narusegawa! What are you doing back here so soon!” Keitaro’s face started to turn white. “I was just trying to fix the crack when I fell from the chair and knocked against your wardrobe! I wasn’t playing with your clothes! Honest!”

“Usotsuki!! Do you think I would believe a pervert like you!

POW! BANG! BOOM! POW!

A powerful combination of punches and kicks sent Keitaro flying across the room. He landed against the wall and hit his head hard against it. Blood began to trickle from his mouth. You would have thought Naru would rush over and apologise for hitting him so hard, but instead she ran over and grabbed him again.

“You sleaze! How dare you play around with my lingerie when I’m not home!” Naru raised her fists and prepared to deliver another blow to Keitaro’s face.

Suddenly Keitaro snapped. He grabbed Naru’s hands before she could punch him. He lifted her up and gave her a hard slap across her face.

Naru fell to the floor, completely stunned.

“Kei.. Keitaro… what’s happened to you?” she whimpered.

“URUSAI!! YOU FUCKING BITCH I'VE HAD ENOUGH OF YOU!”

Naru was shocked. She had never seen Keitaro like that before. He looked a completely different person, full of anger and hatred.

Apparently Keitaro had snapped completely. All the hard work, beatings and humiliation had driven him to the point of no return. Yes, he loved Naru and adored her completely, but she continued to humiliate and taunt him day and night. He remembered the day he confessed his love to her, only for her to laugh at him and reply :

“What? You want me to be your girlfriend? How can I ever accept a low life like you! You’re dumb, nerdy, perverted, and such a wimp! And you’ve failed the entrance exam three times! You must be dreaming if you ever thought I would be your girlfriend!”

The hurt and pain from that reply had almost driven Keitaro to suicide. But he lived on hoping Naru would have a change of heart. But not only did she not change her mind, she found another boyfriend and continued to taunt & tease Keitaro.

But now he had completely snapped. The Keitaro Time Bomb had finally exploded. Everyone has their limits, and likewise, Keitaro just couldn’t take it anymore. He felt really good after delivering that hard slap to Naru’s face.

Naru was shaking and trembing. “Keitaro… please.. don’t hit me again… please leave me alone…”

“URUSAI!” shouted Keitaro as he advanced towards her.

“Help! Someone please help me! Motoko! Kitsune! Help!” screamed Naru.

“I TOLD YOU TO SHUT THE FUCK UP!” Keitaro then grabbed Naru again and slapped her viciously across the face. That slap was much harder than the one before and almost rendered her unconscious. “You Dumb Bitch, no one’s home, no one’s going to hear your pathetic little screams!”

As Keitaro was grabbing her again, he noticed her cleavage. “This hot bitch is wearing a low cut dress. She must be trying to seduce her new boyfriend!”

That made Keitaro even angrier. But he suddenly realized a fat bulge had appeared in his pants. The feelings of lust overcame him.

“Take off your clothes Naru”

“NOooooo! Please! Don’t do that to me! Please!

Keitaro looked around the room. He went over to the smashed wardrobe door and picked up a sharp piece of wood and pointed it at her face.

“Take off your clothes or I’ll cut your pretty face!”

The trembling girl complied. She quickly removed her top, followed by her skirt.

“What the fuck are you waiting for! Remove the bra!”

Naru’s face turned completely red. She quickly removed the hooks behind her back and allowed her bra to fall off, exposing a perfect pair of tits.

Keitaro immediately grabbed them and started fondling them. “Ooh yeah… ooh yeah!”

Naru turned started crying but Keitaro didn’t give a damn. In fact he started rubbing her tits harder, pinching her nipples too.

“Owwww… plea.. please don’t do that, it hurts…” Naru cried out.

Keitaro didn’t care. He was enjoying the moment. Then he realized the fat bulge in his pants wasn’t getting any attention. He quickly removed his pants and out popped his manhood.

"Watashi no chinko kata!" He announced to her

Naru was stunned. She was in fear, but even in her fear she gasped when she saw Keitaro’s monstrous cock. It was at least 7 inches long. Keitaro looked nerdy but he was well endowed. He took his eager cock and pressed it against Naru’s hot lips.

“I'm going to fuck your pretty face so open up!” hissed Keitaro as he grabbed Naru’s head by her hair. “And if you bite I swear I will cut your face! Now suck it!”

Naru had no choice but to comply. She opened up and took all 7 inches of his cock into her mouth, sucking as hard as she could. The feeling was indescribable. It was extremely pleasurable. Keitaro was lost in his lust, so lost that a couple minutes later, he reached a mind boggling climax and shot long lines of cum down her throat. He quickly took out his cock and shot his remaining jizz on her face.

By now Naru looked like a pitiful little girl. She was naked except for her panties and stockings. And her face was covered with thick white cum.

“Please… please stop…” tears started falling down Naru’s face again. She thought that Keitaro had had his fun and would leave her alone.

“It’s not that easy Naru” Keitaro hissed again. “I want you to remove your panties now”

“Nooo! Please!”

Keitaro simply picked up the sharp piece of wood and pointed it at Naru. She quickly pulled down her panties.

“Ooh what have we here?” Smirked Keitaro.

Naru’s pussy was indeed a gloryhole. She was shaven, which made Keitaro’s limp cock stand up again.

“Nooo! Please Keitaro! Please don’t! I’m still a virgin! Please don’t do this to me!”

The word virgin made Keitaro’s lust intensify. Now he would have a chance to embarrass her further by taking away her virginity forever. He pushed Naru violently & then climbed on top of her and positioned his rock hard cock at the entrance of her pussy. Naru closed her eyes, tears still falling.

“Ooooohhhhhh” Keitaro cried out in ecstasy as he pushed the entire length of his cock into her honey hole. The tightness of her virgin pussy was driving him to levels of pleasure never felt before. “Ahh… Ugghhh… OOhhhh… yeahh…”

Naru turned her head to one side and bit her lip hard. The pain in her pussy was nothing compared to the pain in her heart. She knew her virginity was destroyed forever. And nothing could bring it back.

In the meantime, Keitaro was humping away furiously. This was the first time he was having sex too. He was enjoying it profusely. Words could not describe the pleasure he was having. He leaned forward and started kissing Naru on the lips.

It was all too much for Naru to bear. The sex was unwanted but she could not control her body. Soon her body started to contract with pleasure. She started groaning softly, tossing her head all over the place.

“OOOhhhh Ohhhh! Ahhhh!” screamed out Naru as she experienced her first sexual orgasm.

Upon hearing Naru cry out, Keitaro could not take it anymore and unloaded huge amounts of cum inside of her. He was still cuming when he pulled his cock out, and unloaded the rest of it on her tits and body. He then forced Naru to open her mouth and clean up his cock, which she did obediently.

Finally it was all over. Keitaro stood up and put his pants back on. Naru crawled over to the corner of the room and whimpered. She looked a total mess. Cum was leaking out of her pussy.

“It’s been nice fucking you, but I have more work to do” taunted Keitaro. “And by the way, have a nice day!”

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My apologies. I have not logged on for a very long time & i'm still amazed i remember my psswrd. And a big thank you to all for your nice & encouraging comments. I will add a new chapter soon. My email is up again so please let me know which girl deserves her punishment next. Take care of yourselves. Takeshi88, 20 Mar 2007
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