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Reviews for An Alluring Conspiracy

By : loche606
  • From ANON - kimimisae on January 20, 2006
    I just wanted to let you know that I loved your story and like the that you write. I look forward to reading more from you in the furture.
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  • From ANON - Lyrona on November 15, 2005
    OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHH NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i cant believ you did that! oh no i am so taken aback and amazed and that was so unexpected! You Rock did you know that? YOU TOTALLY FREAKIN ROCK! That was just WOW you know? ok I m ok. I just was so shocked at that. Wow you are a very daring writer i cant wait to read your continuation in the othe r story. ACCLAMATIONS and Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Houseki is baka! on September 25, 2005
    hahaha ok, yeah i said 'chap three' at the end there lmao!! oooooook must be gettin tired again :p ok so you knew i meant chap two...but hopefully there'll be a chap three too! okies i'm done now rofl!!

    Love,

    Nic
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  • From ANON - Houseki on September 25, 2005
    Ooooooooooooooooooooooh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dooooood I so loved it Ren!! *huggles Ren for putting the three together!* Yeah dood you can seriously do more with this! What will Yuki's reaction be?!?! Muwahaha! And damn dood, they cracked the wall!? That was some serious pounding right there *smirks* Ok, I reviewed so NOW you can get on to writing chap TWO!! Woooooooooooooooooot!!! Oh and the part w/ Touma on the street! Aiyaa! Yeah Shuu talked the smack, but Touma just smacked! hahahaha! It was a sad scene though!! Evil Touma hurt my Shuu! *huggles Shuu* *wants chap three so this time I can partcipate with Shuu and Ryu* >:) hehe

    Love ya babe! Good work! Matane,

    Nic
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  • From ANON - Tamago on September 24, 2005
    lmfao, that was awsome! XP
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  • From Ashcat on September 24, 2005
    Overall.. great first effort! Criticism: Please use spacing between paragraphs.. it makes it ALOT easier to read.. please define the japanese phrases you are using (it sucks to have to google them while reading not everyone can read the romanized words), break the story up a little more.. I think after the first night wiht Ryu would be a great place to end "chapter 1" and start yuki home as chpt 2... it just felt too long especially without spacing for the paragraphs! Your last lemon scene was 200% better written than the ones in the beginning of the fic. Also you have Ryu mark shu's neck and possibly bruise his back before yuki gets home but you never addressed this later in the fic. Overall great fic and I can't wait to see Yuki's reaction!
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  • From ANON - Shawnell on September 23, 2005
    That was awesome! I thought your writing was great and I loved your story. You should continue it.^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 23, 2005
    Is this the end? I'd really like to see Yuki's reaction to what happened.
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on September 23, 2005
    yay! it's posted!! i love it, it's soooo yummy ^__^ and thanks to you, i'm so not about finishing mine right now cuz i'm all about the ryu/shu instead of the ryu/tats heheheheh anyway, i liked how you ended it (which, of course, you know :p) but it makes me want moooorrrreeee *poolyryueyes* *evil grin as i see the ryu eyes working* muwahahahaaa
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