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Reviews for Patience vs. Persistence

By : onlyindreams
  • From ANON - Sarisia on December 17, 2005
    Yaa! What a horrible place to leave me hanging! :(
    Your writing is lovely and well, sexy as all hell. I love the bit you had with Ritsuka's tail. I wouldn't have thought of it myself. Please continue this soon!
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  • From EmbersEye on November 22, 2005
    Oh my goodness you can't stop there!!! The characters are so perfect and the writing is beautiful. I like how not everything is perfect because nothing is. First love is awkward and all that endearing for it. I really do hope you update this.
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  • From ANON - SetoKaibaWheeler on November 14, 2005
    i'm not signed in but this is one of the nicest, cool stories that i've read for Loveless. I just got into loveless last week, so i'm still confused about it but it's a pretty good story.
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  • From ANON - yume on November 12, 2005
    This is a great story and I am really looking forward to reading more of it.
    The storyline is amazing....and you have kept them soooo in character.
    Please write more and update soon
    Yume
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  • From ANON - Haru on November 09, 2005
    You are soooo mean!!!!
    Please, pretty please Keep writting, it´s so good! Ritsuka is so perfect like you do! Hehhehehe, What soubi will do? Why can´t they talk like normal people, né?
    ja né!
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  • From ANON - Nijel on November 06, 2005
    I really enjoyed your story. You wrote exactly what I thought Soubi would do. Soubi can be a tease, though sometimes I wonder if he means it. It really seemed like you followed the story from the anime. But I hate you for the cliffhanger. Kidding. That was great I will be looking for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on November 04, 2005
    awww, that was a sweet yet frustrating chapter.. i loved the tail part ^__^ but poor ritsuka, feeling rejected by soubi... what's soubi's gift i wonder? i can't wait to see how you progress this.. i look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - vbv on November 03, 2005
    please update, i love your story, it's so beautiful and hot!
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  • From ANON - cinque on November 03, 2005
    Yeahh finaly a new Loveless story! I hope Ritsuka will get his Sobi and dont have to suffer to much. Keep going
    Love ya
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  • From rAiNwAtEr on October 31, 2005
    OMG! I absolutly LOVE this story. It has so much feeling in it! It is so hard to find a really good Soubi and Ritsuka fanfic that has nothing to do with Semi. I beg of you to continue and update as soon as possible. I really can't wait to see the tention rise between these two characters! Bravo, bravo, please update!

    If it is possible could you please send me a review when you update? My e-mail is listed above.
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  • From ANON - Razz on October 30, 2005
    o darling, it's to much suspense!! wonderful fic ;) you portray the characters perfectly and the story... i could so see this happening!! x3 i love it love it love it!! *squeal* ....*blush*......*cough* well... anways, please update soon and i will be sure to read ;)
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  • From ANON - Rubik\'s Cube Cat on October 30, 2005
    T^T This is so good! I love how in touch you are with Ritsuka's emotions. So angsty, that boy. But we loves him! Oh, and IMO, I don't really think 14 is grounds for shota...but I suppose I can see the need for a warning. ^^; Looking forward to more!
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  • From Ashcat on October 29, 2005
    Chpt 2: wow, this story is getting good! I like the tension and issue's you've raised in this chapter! So is Soubi attracted to Ritsuka at all sexually? Maybe not, maybe just that he's his sacrifice like you said eh? Very interesting idea! Please continue soon!
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  • From ANON - Frost on October 29, 2005
    Wow Thats was very fun.....I love your writing style it just seems to flow so well.....Keep it up I can't wait for an update :)
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  • From ANON - Shantal on October 29, 2005
    Wow, one of the few Loveless stories that are not only interesting, but believable, too. Great work. Hope to read more soon.
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