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Reviews for Patience vs. Persistence

By : onlyindreams
  • From CrimsonFox234 on October 28, 2005
    No! Please update soon! I feel sorry for the confused Ritsuka *sniffles*. I'm glad to see that Soubi has some morals, but he better break them soon if he doesn't want to hurt Ritsuka's feelings and risk loosing the popular cutie.
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on October 25, 2005
    awwww soubi where are you? you need to come to ritsuka!!! this is a good start, i like it, i hope you have more soon ^__^
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  • From BlueUtopiah on October 25, 2005
    A very promising beginning, you paint very beautiful images with your words and I'm glad you made Ritska a bit older. I'm looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - B on October 25, 2005
    Awww. I can't believe youleft it like that. Now I'm sitting here sniffing. Although it could be a combination of the cold and the way you left your story hanging! I love it please update soon. Don't leave Ritsuka like that for a long time. That's just to mean.
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  • From ANON - katie on October 25, 2005
    Awww. Poor Ritsuka. Damn that Soubi. Anyway great fic. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From Ashcat on October 24, 2005
    Wow, I like your fic so far.. poor ritsuka! Your dialogue is good and I think your Ritsuka is spot on! I'm glad that your making him older than 14, b/c even that young seems pretty creepy! Can't wait for you to update!
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