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By : RWO
  • From keithcompany on September 15, 2008
    May i first point out, i appreciate your review of Pygmy.

    Second, it is hard to drop you a line if your email is hidden.

    Thirdity, The sequel, Pygmies, is right here: http://original.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544203521
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  • From CrazyIvan on November 19, 2006
    You're more than welcome, my ideas are yours to command...

    that is, as long as you have my permission, otherwise I might have to come a knockin, if you know what I mean.

    Now, as for your wedding dilema, I'm afraid I can be of no help here, that stuff is way outside my jurisdiction. So, you're on your own for now.

    I'll be looking forward to more updates, and hopefully I'll get around to updating and uploading my own stuff.

    Well, this is CrazyIvan, signing off for now, sepher phi, carry on.....
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  • From ANON - CrazyIvan(Loggedin?Ithinknot!) on August 17, 2006
    Well, what you may want to do, is, well depending on if this is the last part of the previous chapter, or the beginning of a new chapter, you'll want to place it acordingly, if it is the start of a new chapter, remember just to add on directly to the chapter, not put it in a whole new one. A good idea is to type everything up on word processer, spell check, then cut and paste, I've done that ever sense I kept getting ticked off at aff for auto logging me out while i typed the chapter up.

    And as for permission on my idea? Well it was a suggestion, meaning you're free to use it with no obligations. Although make sure you don't use Rhett from my other fic, he isn't a truck driver, I'm not looking for a guest staring either... Hold on...

    (Scene and outfit change)
    CMON DOWN TO CRAZY IVAN'S CRAZY DEALS!
    In adittion to the 2005 Mack Semi including trailer and fuel, we're now supplying the driver too! You get your very own Paco the Mexican Truck Driver! He comes complete with papers, licences, and even a green card! If you don't like mexican's we have other drivers in stock too, yes in stock, this is CRAZY IVAN'S CRAZY DEALS after all.
    You can choose from (Insert list of countries here) to go with your truck! Remember, choose CRAZYIVAN'S CRAZY DEALS for all your anything needs!
    (Back normal)
    Eh hem, yeah anyways, I look foreward to seeing the updates, as for me, well I'm starting my senior year next week, so all my updates will be even further spread out, not that I care, it's not like anyone is depending on me writing to survive... and if they are, tough shit for them.
    Holy crap this is a long review, (must be the ad), Oh well, this is CrazyIvan, signing off for now.....
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  • From ANON - CrazyIvan(doesitlooklikeimloggedin?) on August 16, 2006
    Um, well, uh, sure.... This is kinda I dunno, half assed? I suppose it is better then nothing though, but it's definatly half assed. I feel sorry for the trucks :( poor poor trucks. So how exactly are they gonna get together and deliver the food? I have an idea.
    (set stage change outfit)
    Right now for a limited time CrazyIvan's Crazy Deals is renting out this beautiful 2005 Mack Semi Tractor Trailer! A turbo diesel engine and 15000 pounds of torque, it'll haul anything you need anywhere you need to go! We'll even provide a free trailer and fuel! Call now! supplies are limited! Remeber CrazyIvan's Crazy Deals for all you super needs!
    (back to normal)
    Eh hem, anyways, just thought you might wanna know an idea, totaly up to you if you use it or not, but i love it. Anyways, this is CrazyIvan, hoping the next chapter is better and the love will be great! Ivan out!
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  • From ANON - Josh on July 16, 2006
    Hey well I haven't read this one in a while but hope to see a long chapter up and shows them all going on with there journey and hope to see them all get along but can u tell me what goes on when you decide to write a story for any show. JTB8834@aol.com
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  • From ANON - CrazyIvan on July 09, 2006
    Definatly needs a little more work, great effort though, continue on.
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  • From ANON - Josh on July 02, 2006
    Hey great story but what happend to 10 it had something else but whatever u do keep up the story and hope to see an update soon
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  • From ANON - CrazyIvan(no!notloggedindamnit!) on June 18, 2006
    Wow, i like, it the reformating is much much better, spank you very much, wait, no don't, but you get the idea. untill next time, this is CrazyIvan signing off for now....
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  • From ANON - CrazyIvan(notloggedin) on June 12, 2006
    I have a complaint. The chater structure and format. Um, it's extremely fucked up very very very bad. I think instead of spreading out a shit load of two paragraph sections, you should rehash this mother, and combine several together. That way you would be putting more on a chapter, and you could do it fast then be lazy later. Just take a section, copy it, then paste it below the text of the previous chater, and vwala! Anyways, nice premise, few errors, fucked up formating, and funny machoke scence, I give it a 5 or 6 out of 10. Alrighty then, this is CrazyIvan, signing off for now.......
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  • From CrazyIvan on June 07, 2006
    la ded a de da do ma. wow, that is quite odd, can you say mafia disregardations? No? I thought so, any ways, nicely done well executed.... heh heh, executed heh heh, mafia. Er herm, well, uh, looking foreward to enxt chapters, later.
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  • From ANON - CrazyIvan(notloggedin) on January 07, 2006
    Well written story you got here. Relatives can be a bitch ey? Well, Battle field1942 is a great game, i perfer more modern combat genres, butt i dip into ww2 every so often. I have a solution for your caffine problem, or energy deficeet, call it what you will. First off, get 5 packages of smarties hard candy, one amp energy drink(or bottle of mountain dew), and one redbull crush the smarties into powder, pour them into a large glass with the other two drinks stir, and drink, i promise you won't be sleeping for at least a week! Any way, I got to get going, great story, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Evan Allen on December 15, 2005
    wonderfully written, good opening and great characters A+
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  • From ANON - ME, Fogu on November 10, 2005
    MOUNTAIN DEW RULES ALL!
    It has kept me awake, or lulled me to sleep.
    origional, code red, live wire, pitch black (taste like a wine cooler), pitch black 2 (with the sour bite that is more of a tang).
    Slurpees are good too.
    Live wire and code red are better frozen in my opinion.
    but you can drink the origional hot, room temp, or cold, there is no end to the possibilities.
    it even mixes well with hard candies, or the chewy ones, even kool-aid. I like to put blue sweet tarts in mine every now and again.
    no other soda has so many possibilities.

    i usually follow a long MD kick with a short burst of Dr. Pepper, root beer, or cream soda... that way when i get the mountain dew again my body has lost a bit of the tollerance to the large ammount of caffene in MD.
    Makeing the kick that much better.
    With all the money i spend on MD, i should invest in pepsie company.
    The only disappointment i had from MD, was amp... it didn't even taste like MD, and it wasn't even any good, no rush, bad flavor.
    I forgive them.

    But I'll never forgive coke for comeing out with their nasty ass energy drink they dubbed FULL THROTTLE!

    wel, with that out of the way, i'm gonna get me a glass of MD.
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  • From ANON - CrazyIvan(notloggedin) on November 10, 2005
    MOUNTAIN DEW IS THE BEST SODA POP EVER!!!!!!!!! ALL HAIL MOUNTAIN DEW!!!!! AND ALL HAIL THIS AUTHOR FOR HIS GREAT AGKNOLEGEMENT!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - wheyz on October 28, 2005
    Excellent start. It sounds good so far. :-)
    I guess my suggestion would be to get a beta reader. There's an excellent Yahoo group for that purpose. http://groups.yahoo.com/group/AdultFanFictionBetaReaders
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