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Reviews for Marine Trap

By : YaoiMuffin
  • From ANON - Koi-chan on June 29, 2006
    :] I love your stories! I suggest you make a sequel! I like your disclaimers and comedy acts. Hilarious. Actually, I don't really care what you do, just keep on writing!! Wanna lnow why? 'Cause I love your stories!! :]
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  • From ANON - TreeStar on January 10, 2006
    i know you want this to be done, but can you write another lemon chapter? i really like yours. i could go on reading them forever as long as you kept them up. i think a lot of people agree with me! i don't even care who is on top as long as they do it, because it's so intence. let's have some mroe teasing! please? i want to see how far one can drive the other up the wall. They've both been in a rush and impatient (understandably), but lets see Zoro plan to tease Luffy or vice-versa so that we can see them really beg for it. or you could do both! one could do it, and then the other one gets revenge later. :) Please?
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  • From ANON - Kuragari Okami on January 02, 2006
    YAY! Updated and finished....I'm glad it ended on such a happy note *sigh* I lurved it!!!!>^.^
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  • From Ludra on December 23, 2005
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! GOD HATES ME!!!!! I KNEW IT!!!!! ….WHY!!!???...T^T *sniff*…why you don’t let Zoro be uke forever???...T^T…anyway…* sigh* I only like the chapter 6. Why always happen this to me!!!¬¬**** sorry I’m disappointment again…*big sigh*. Look, I’ll be very honest, I don’t LIKE your fic!!!!, but don’t get me wrong, you write very well, better than others that I read and the story is not so bad, but I’m very special in some matters. I truly love Luffy/Zoro and I HATE Zoro/Luffy, in other words, I dislike with my heart to Luffy being Uke. Anyway, good fic no matter I don’t like it, I know others (not like me and I know it’ll be 99%....u_u) would love your fic.

    Keep going!

    P.S: ¡¡¡¡¿¿¿Por qué siempre me pasa esto a mí???!!!! T^T

    L.M.N
    Ludra Maco Naít

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  • From ANON - MCC on December 21, 2005
    and again this stupid site removed my review *growls* but I will stay calm, and just wright a new review
    great fic!
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  • From ANON - Noriko Sakuma on December 20, 2005
    YAY! *makes the 'yay-I-got-another-beautiful-and-smuty-chap' dance xD*

    No one can get enough of your fics |3 They're like a drug O.o (a good drug |3)

    Please more? *-* (not necessarily on this fic xD but a fic made by you haha)
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  • From ANON - Noriko Sakuma on December 17, 2005
    They really find them in a pretty ackward pose xD hahaha

    It was hilarious

    I hope to see more of your lovwely fics soon!!! =3

    ~Noriko
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  • From ANON - liera on December 17, 2005
    waaa~~ u wanna see zoro on top b4 u end this >
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  • From SamuraiDevilPirate on December 15, 2005
    oh wow. I very much liked. will there be more chapters?
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  • From Ludra on December 13, 2005
    Hiya!!! XDD

    Wow!!!! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!! YAY okay I was disappointment with the third chapter but only because this was a really good Luffy/Zoro lemon, I can forget it hahahahahahahaha XDDD yay!!! so this fic is Luffy/Zoro after all and no Zoro/Luffy, great!!!! I love that form XD, so if that's case, I'll read them all XDD and love it!!! hahahahahahahahaha

    Update soon!!!!

    L.M.N
    Ludra Maco Naít
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  • From ANON - Kuragari Okami on December 12, 2005
    I....Like it!! YAY!write more!>^.^
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  • From ANON - liera on December 11, 2005
    omg....luffy as seme? O.o It feels strange no matter how many times i see it >
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  • From ANON - Noriko Sakuma on December 11, 2005
    O_____O OH MY GACKT!!!!

    ASDSFSDG!! ÑLKJÑLKHH!! ZXZXCV!! PQIRKOÊI!! X_______X *noriko's head explode*


    That was unexpected... ... ... but awesome XD very well worked... though seme Luffy always cracks me up lol but I liked this ^3^

    Is it... gonna be more?? more pretty please with cherry on top???? *puppy eyes*

    NOW! I just finished your fic! But nobodys want's to help me translate it snif! T___T (they're not a AceLu fans and they think I'm sick .> lol) but I'll do my best to translate it for you!!!! >_____
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  • From ANON - The Empress on December 10, 2005
    Hiya, I love your story. =) I'd like them to get away first and then some action. ~_^ I want them to kick some marine butt, especially the ones that raped them. Please. ^_^

    I could've sworn I reviewed this story before.. It must've got deleted or something. Either that or I'm blind. T_T
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  • From ANON - NorikoSakuma on December 10, 2005
    Zoro.... Luffy.... smex... NOW... O___O

    xD No no, really I'll be happy with whatever you'll write *dance* yay! I'm liking this fic to much! You made my day worth =3

    And actually spanish is my first lenguage lol And I'm still learning english teh heh ^^Uu a friend of mine says that spanish sounds very romantic lol

    anyway, keep up teh great fic!!! *hug*
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