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Reviews for My Captain

By : YaoiMuffin
  • From OokamiYoukai on May 06, 2011
    Well, I liked how you have things from Zoro's pov. It's deffinitely nice to get an insight into that guys mind! ^^ It's funny, but it still works.

    I do hope you continue! I'd love to see what you have in store next! =^..^=
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  • From WhiteNoise13 on June 20, 2010
    That chapter was short, but sweet. I liked it. Will patiently await your next update. :) :) :)
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  • From WhiteNoise13 on June 20, 2010
    This is a pretty good chapter for something written at 3 in the morning. Whenever I go back and read something I've written that early I usually have to wonder what happened to my mind, or if it just ran away. :) :) :)
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  • From WhiteNoise13 on June 20, 2010
    So sweet. Zoro and Luffy make such a cute pair. :) :) :)
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  • From kelgadis on July 01, 2008
    Just to let you know, I registered just now for the specific purpose of BEGGING you to FINISH THIS!!! It's ADORABLE!!! Please???
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  • From YoaiCupid1 on June 15, 2008
    I really like how it went so far, are you going to continue this anytime soon? It may have been just seven chapters, but I'm hooked! It was just too cute!
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  • From ANON - Andie on November 20, 2006
    Oh! I really love the ZoroLuffy! and adding Sanji as a rival is a great idea XD


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  • From ANON - Masks-san on October 21, 2006
    omg! Zoro's gay? Just kidding. This story is great! And please, don't worry about the smut; you seem intelligent enough to know these things shouldn't be rushed. I think your pace is fine. The chapters could stand to be longer, but they aren't horribly short or anything. Sometimes when you're writing a story, you just know when you've reached the end of a part. And each of the chapters do have a definite sense of closure.
    I like the way the characters feel in your story. They are very true to cannon, without that kind of forced-ness you get in some other fics. I think you have a really good grasp of their quirks and personalities to be able to retell the story this way. You must have a lot of love in you for the characters.
    Some of the chapters seem like they could have used a bit of revision, like, they're kinda rough in a way, but it's no big deal. Don't linger on every sentence, every word trying to decide if it flows perfect. Your writing is fine; I'm just saying that you could probably make it perfect ^_^. I understand that you actually *gasp* have a life, and can only do so much. Trust me when I say that readers would prefer to sacrifice a bit of quality in exchange for actually getting to read this.
    Mmyeah, that's all I got. I'll try to review again next chapter. Catch you then!
    Love,
    Masks
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  • From ANON - Kai on August 18, 2006
    Oh please, for the love of all things yaoi, PLEASE update soon!! I've been checking this once a month or so, hoping to find a new chapter... please, please, please!!! *cries* I'll give you my Zoro/Luffy doujinshi, just PLEASE!!!
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on August 14, 2006
    ^^ I like this fic! It's cute! Pleae update soon!
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  • From Vampiricblood on February 13, 2006
    OMG!!! that is sooo cute but come on I want to see or rather read some steaming hot sexy scenes lol. Hey dont look at me like that lol.
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  • From ANON - Kuragari Okami on February 07, 2006
    YAY!! chappies!!sooo cute!!!must read more....*drools* hehheh....
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  • From ANON - Liliath on February 03, 2006
    dude, did you notice that your rambling and AN takes like the half of the fic? are we reading a fic or your notice? Im not flaming this fic, no worries, but Im honestly kind fed up seeing that your chapters are actually so sho~~~~~~~~~~rt. I suggest you just take your time writing on chap and make it longer, man, thatd be really better. you dont have to listen to me, woot, you probably wont, but I like this fic a lot but honestly...kill me for noticing petty details like that but hell, Id much rather prefer to wait a week or two longer and getting a longer chap instead of getting a chap where half of it is AN and only the rest is the actual chapter =(
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  • From ANON - kiotana on January 31, 2006
    Awe...me want more. It's sweet so far^^
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  • From ANON - Senera San on January 29, 2006
    *jawn* god.. live is boring.. *glances over at computer* O GOD!!!! A chapter!!!!! thank you!
    hehe.. you agreed to my deal ? fine.. here is a review.. *points at review*.. i like this story.. and i'm looking forward to sanji's introduction.. *grins*
    keep it up!!
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