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Reviews for Riki's Submission

By : DrkDreamer
  • From ANON - Yearning out of heaven on July 07, 2006
    WOW EXCELLENT FIC GREAT ONE!!!!!!!!!!
    Keep it up!!! ^_^ haaaaaa

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  • From ANON - mishap on June 24, 2006
    Review is for entire series
    This is a great story very much in line with the story line of the dvd (not that I in anyway object to non canon). i truly enjoyed and there is never enough AnK fan fiction to go around. I hope to see more your writing is very good, by the way have you ever seen or considered writing in the Loveless fandom? I am a very bad reader and almost never review, but your story and your writing (in my opinion) needs to be encouraged to flourish and more, more, more...please?

    Just one thing I have to say and I can't help it is an uncontrollable pet peeve (forgive me) you might want to watch the words taunt and taut. i.e. 'his taunt stomach' I just can't help but read it as 'his insulting stomach'. I'm sorry, I'm sorry, mea culpa, mea maxima, mean culpa. If you had any idea how many insulting stomachs, thighs, arms, legs, etc. that I have read about... I realize that it was probably a typo, but my evil half made me say it.
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  • From ANON - mara on June 20, 2006
    Please it can't end!!!! No, I know this is the perfect end to this story and I loved every line of your work!!!! However it is bitter sweet, since you did such a great job with Iason and Riki that I had hoped it would last longer! Your way of capturing their relationship was just great. It was also just the right mixture of anger, fear, submission, attraction and love that it actually seemed still realistically possible for these characters to actually go through this development!!! You should write more!!! If not more AnK then more of something else! Maybe something original!!! I love your writing style and the storyline was very sound with no abrupt turn of weird events etc. like you can often find it. Very, very well done and one of the best AnK fics I have read (and I try to hunt them down!!!!)
    Do us all a favour and write more (Please!!)
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  • From ANON - Mara on June 20, 2006
    First I have to say that I am very glad you decided to continue this story after chapter 11. I think there is endless potential with these two and you are great at capturing them. I love the way you have them slowly realize their feelings, yet still they don't admit them to each other. I thought especially in this chapter it was very sweet what they wanted to say, but remained unsaid and what they actually did say. I even chuckled a couple of times. Iason was also sooo sweet in this chapter and I like him like that!! Anyway, keep up the great work. I hope there are many many more chapters to come!!!!!
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  • From sesshomarunaraku on June 06, 2006
    this is a great stoty!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - chibineko69 on May 03, 2006
    OMFG!!! >< I LOVED IT!!! It was so sweet how Iason protected him!!!! I was like >_< to CUTENESS!!!! Are you going to write anymore stories soon?XD
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  • From ANON - Sianeka on April 29, 2006
    I wish I'd been able to read the other chapters - you captured the feel of the characters from the movie so well. I want more. =)
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  • From ANON - Chicken Ice Cream on April 17, 2006
    The perfect end for an extremely well-written fanfiction. I loved reading this story from beginning to end, this last chapter summed it all up perfectly. Thank you for posting this story, it's inspired me with both the character development and the writing style. In other words, you just rock. Here's hoping you write other fanfics for other anime, or even do the world a favor and publish a book someday with original characters, the litterary world would certainly benifit from it!
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  • From ANON - Ri on February 11, 2006
    May i say i read the entrie story in one sitting and i love it! please update! I want to read more!! Great job! I love it
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  • From ANON - Chicken Ice Cream on February 05, 2006
    HUZZAH! You updated yet again! I am overjoyed! Very sexy chapter, and very cute! Thank you! Can't wait until the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - tokageMusume on February 04, 2006
    Chapter 14 -- Well, they're both pretty much gone on each other now, aren't they? I'm getting a kick out of how you have Riki flip-flopping back and forth with the 'cant help touching him' and the 'i hate him forever'. It's cute. I look forward to more of your story -- it sounds like push is coming to shove and Iason's going to get into trouble with his boss ...
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  • From ANON - AnonnaDonna on February 03, 2006
    This was my favorite chapter, too--so far. Quid pro quo is the name of the game is all (real) relationships, I guess.
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  • From ANON - chayron on February 03, 2006
    Yes, you’re quite right – not only Riki, here they both, Riki and Iason, had to give up on some things to be able to coexist together. Both too damn prideful to admit that they need each other more than anything else. Yeah, what a surprise it had been for Iason when it appeared that a mongrel, a scum, had enough pride to feed them both, heh What an intrigue for a Blondie…

    Anyways, well written! Waiting for the next chapter!

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  • From tokageMusume on February 02, 2006
    Chapter 13 -- A pet for his pet. LOL This seems to be more about Iason's training... Seems like the trade talks are exposing his unusual relationship with Riki to more eyes... What would his peers do if they knew he was having sex with a pet! Goodness!
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  • From tokageMusume on February 02, 2006
    "Iason realized Riki must be fighting him, refusing to be aroused" -- I like the guerilla warfare turn this has taken, with Riki using all the small weapons he has and Iason struggling to NOT deal with having actuall....*gasp!* feelings!
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