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Reviews for Love comes in Unexpected Ways

By : Wannabeanactress
  • From WiccaSilverFox on December 14, 2010
    Ok ill admit yeah sure the characters may not be exactly emotional towards the actual anime. BUT people forget this is ADULT FAN FICTION meaning these authors make up their own stories based on their favorite pairing of characters. To me nothing is wrong with that. I just turned to the next chapter and saw you backlashing at moronic commenters. Your the author, and producer of ideas to the story. If people hate the storyline stop reading it but dont ruin it for everyone else who reads someones work.
    Anyway I am enjoying thus far.
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  • From Crystal07281987 on December 17, 2007
    This is very difficult to read is there someway you can separate the paragraphs? If not then you don't have my vote as a good story. I was getting into to until the paragraphs started to run in to each other like a car accident. Please go back and edit so it's much easier, and not for me but for everyone else.
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  • From DavidsGirl841444 on February 14, 2007
    Hey I read your story what happened after A took her inside what happened I am just wondering? But yeah good the story kicks butt you should totally keep going.
    Maria
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  • From ANON - mary on August 30, 2006
    update now the story is cool

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  • From ANON - Cassandra on August 22, 2006
    I thought it was good~
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  • From ANON - killercloud on August 01, 2006
    I like this story and well, don't see too many major problems besides the paragraphs. then again i am not the world's formost grammer master. please keep it going!
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  • From ANON - Shido38 on June 25, 2006
    This is really good. I hope you update soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - Conde on February 10, 2006
    Really cool!!!I believe it is very original and interesting ^o^ Congratulations!!!!!! ^_-
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  • From ANON - aleerasuru on February 09, 2006
    your stories are well wrighten so dont listen to jerks
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  • From ANON - AxS on January 25, 2006
    It was nice, but Anderson is a priest, he couldn't do that :/
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  • From ANON - liquid_grace on January 22, 2006
    AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! YOU HAD TO STOP THERE???? Its coming along great!!!! Keep going!!! poor seres :(
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  • From ANON - Demon Pickle on January 18, 2006
    Ok, you really do suck......GET A LIFE!! ...... NO..I'm just kidding! That was good! hope to hear more from you soon!
    DP
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  • From ANON - K on January 16, 2006
    I think it would be better if your chapters were a bit longer. Besides that it is a good story thus far. In my opinion talent is not needed in this world. I know people that have very interesting stories, but they aren't real good at writing. Just keep up with what you are doing and you'll be better. Even though it is a good story. ja ne
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  • From ANON - adrienne on January 15, 2006
    Wow. I personally like your story. It shows a different look on the characters and...well it just makes it a little more 'intense' if you want to call it that. So what if you swtiched a couple things around or made the characters ooc just by a hair. A good writer can do that and still make a good story. So I say you should keep up the good work and add another chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - Lantherien on January 14, 2006
    Unexpected...it is quite good but you need more paragraphs so it's easier to read. Do you need a beta?
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