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Reviews for HOW DO I?

By : YamiTenshi
  • From ferlerrr on March 04, 2010
    Where is the second chapter?? You can't leave me hanging here and now?? Please, write the story *begs* I do want to know why Shuichi did it. I loved the first chapter: the way you captured Eiri, and I think you could characterized Shuichi as well.
    So, please...
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  • From ANON - Crmy on December 18, 2006
    WOW< UPDATE SOON PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE
    Cheers
    Crmy
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  • From ANON - Jerusha on February 10, 2006
    okay you have me interested. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Ame on February 09, 2006
    your fanfic was good, well written, Yuki's personality is a bit off but it is still good. And you have good suppense, i really wanna find out why Shuichi would do that.... and i completely follow you on the want to "borrow" Yuki, lol.
    hope you update soon ^.^
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  • From ANON - Krystal on February 07, 2006
    Usually, I don't like stories written in the first person. Yet, this one managed to captivate me. I suppose when it's done correctly, the reader can get drunk off the emotions of the person describing the events around him. And I could definitely feel the emotion there. The words were well-strung together, and the transitions were relatively smooth.

    Can't wait for the next chapter. ;)


    }x{ Krystal [xxx]
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  • From ANON - Alethea on February 05, 2006
    Ahh, i love
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  • From ANON - Kelly on February 05, 2006
    This is new to me- a fic with a suicide attempt that is. You handled that very well and I know it's a touchy subject so I commend you for that. :) Poor Shuichi, I wonder why he wanted to take his life? :( You're such a good writer, your first sentence pulled me right in! Not to mention the summary was intriging in itself. I never read a fic with a bad summary, and yours completly peeked my interest. I'm glad it did too, because I'm seriously loving this. Keep it up, I'm looking forward to the update. I'm so curious, I want more! ^^
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  • From ANON - luciology on February 03, 2006
    Eiri sounds settled and comfortable in his relationship with Shuichi so I am somewhat intrigued as to what pushed Shuichi over the edge. Nicely written too.
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  • From ANON - sansty on February 02, 2006
    wow.....throroughly confused at this point. why DID he do it? is it another cliche or is it something different this time? WAAA I AWNNA KNOW!!!
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  • From ANON - ladyfiend on February 02, 2006
    BEAUTIFUL writing style...very detailed and visual...loved it a lot! please update soon, i'm really interested into seeing where this all leads...(^_^)

    again: nice job!!!!
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  • From ANON - Blinky on February 02, 2006
    Wow that was good i cant wait for more!!!! keep up thr good work!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - i love athrun on February 02, 2006
    IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER!
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  • From ANON - fuzzybunnytoo on February 02, 2006
    Good start but you need to get busy with it to keep readers.
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  • From ANON - Jill on February 02, 2006
    Hmmmm mistery...Shu seemed happy with the prospect of the night...so why did he do that???
    Oh I can't hardly wait too read the rest!
    Thank you for writing!

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  • From Ashcat on February 02, 2006
    Chpt 1: This is an interesting take, so he's happy to go to dinner but slits his wrists? No note either or at least they haven't had time to find it. It makes me think that maybe he didn't slit his wrists eh, but someone helped him with it - now that would be an interesting story! Looking forward to the next chapter.
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