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Reviews for On Hire

By : Czmadzia
  • From Viktoria on September 12, 2009
    So is this the end>? THe story has been so amazing and I just adore Katze! I really kept wanting Raoul to be different but the truth is you kept in him character. I wanted him desperately to be someone he is not because its so painful to see Katze in this situation, but its still much more of a life than a furniture can expect isnt it? you write them beautifully together. I especially love the emphisis of their intellectual relationship, discussions, chess. I love how you portray Katze's attempts to deny his own feelings about the situation throughout the story. So Raoul's name is about to be smeared- the thing he cared about the most- I think he still couldnt be any happier and its very beautiful.
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  • From teenrachelsoon on August 02, 2009
    Hi. I've only just finished reading " On Hire " and I must say I'm very pleased to have decided to read it! It was a good and enjoyable read. I've read several RaoulxKatze and most of the time I just can't stand that pairing. However, by the time I finished yours, it seems as though I don't seem to mind them much anymore. In fact, I do believe I'm quite fond of them now. Originally, I didn't/don't like Raoul but now, I see him in a whole new light. lol..
    Also loved that you didn't make them into the second IasonxRiki pairing but instead kept their intimate times actually almost believable. And that you didn't turn Raoul into some amazing sex god that suddenly made Katze weak in the knees.. though I would still approve of that but yeah.
    Good work! I look forward to more of your works! :D
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  • From ANON - oztan on May 14, 2008
    This is really good. It 2am and I just finish reading this. I need get up at 5:30am to get to work.
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  • From Tsunao on March 26, 2008
    That has got to be one of the most devastating ending that I have ever read. But that is not to say that it wasn't good. It was a magnificent conclusion to all this problems. What really irked me though, is the possibility that they won't actually have a emotional ties, and what would happen to Riki and Iason after all this. Can they handle it? Urgh!! Just too much to think about. But I DEFINITELY do NOT regret reading this. I love it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 16, 2007
    Lovely. Absolutely lovely, Lena. Thank you for sharing. I liked the way you portrayed Raoul and Katze. I thought for a moment I was the only one thinking they'd be a good team together.
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  • From ANON - Hestia on January 13, 2007
    Well, I don't like that you ending this not really ending it--why end it so unsatisfactorally and then write a sequel--why not just one big longer work? Oh, well it's your story, but I guess I'm just sad because I thought I was reading a complete story, and this leaves you hanging. I guess it's complete however in that Katze has chosen R. over Iason, however. Anyway, it's very good--I like the Iason/Rikki part a lot. I'm going to go try to find the sequel. I hope you add it here too. I know that the reviewers on the anime section of AFF are really few, but there are readers. It's sort of odd, but I've noticed that each subsection sort of has it's own flavor )the Naruto section seems the best for reviewer/writer love). Anyway, thanks for posting this. By the way I read your Myth post and it was very helpful--thanks. I like your story a lot--I'm just hoping for a happy ending . . .
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  • From ANON - Hestia on January 13, 2007
    Hi! I'm only up to chap. 2 so far, but I just wanted to stop and review and say--I love this!! My introduction to this anime was via "Taming Rikki" the fanfic. I was so disappointed when I read the screenplay to discover that Rikki and Iason die. I hope this is an alternative world were they don't. Anyway, I love this story so far--I can't wait to see how Raoul and Katze's relationship develops!
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  • From ANON - Moussajinx on January 02, 2007
    I Loved this story! You did SO well with the characterizations and WOW, plot idea was great great great! I am at a loss for words as to how good this was. In keeping with the novel's air, you made the world of AnK your own and I applaude your fine work! I have gone to your wonderful webpage as well and am stunned at the dedication you have put into this great novel! Kudoes and many many thanks for that as well! Hope you have inspiration in 2007 as well and you get the happiness and fortune you deserve!

    Moussajinx
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  • From ANON - Gypsy_Willow on September 28, 2006
    This was a absolutely fabulous story! I loved how you seemed to keep everyone in character and came up with a plot that was believable. It was sad at times but it just made you feel all the more for the characters, I can't wait for Delivery to see how the story continues.

    One other thing when I first started in this fandom your myths article was one of the first things I came across and I found it very helpful in having a basic understanding of the story, before it all got ruined by fanfiction.
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  • From Czmadzia on August 24, 2006
    Dzieki, dzieki. Milo dostac recenzje w ojczystym jezyku (chociaz krzaki wykrzaczaja sie koszmarnie). Co do strony, zauwazylam, ze niestety ludzie czesto maja problem by na nia wejsc. Zastanawiam sie od jakiegos czasu nad przeniesieniem jej na inny serwer, ale zawsze mam cos innego do zrobienia. W razie czego moge zawsze fika podeslac mailem.

    To everyone: this lady has just praised me in my native tongue. ;-D
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  • From ANON - Meg on August 22, 2006
    Lena jesteś wspaniała! Znam angielski na tyle dobrze żeby z czystym sumieniem powiedzieć ci – TO OPOWIADANIE JEST WSPANIAŁE!!!! Naprawde trudno znaleźć Fica w którym bohaterowie nie tylko nie wyznają sobie od razu swojej dozgonnej miłości i w którym Riki i Iason – choć to moja ulubiona para – nie są w centrum uwagi a mimo to czuć ich wpływ na losy innych postaci. Dobra robota. :) Oby takich autorów jak ty było więcej!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Ps. Chciałam wejsc na twoją stronę internetową ale pojawia się jakiś problem. Mam nadzieje że to tylko tymczasowe i będę mogla już wkrótce przeczytać sequel.
    Ps2. Swietny angielski ;) (czytać to ja może potrafię ale żeby coś samemu napisać to już inna sprawa)
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  • From yukiuke on August 13, 2006
    Wow, it's hard to believe English is not your native language! This is a very nice fic. If you're inclined, you ought to consider posting it in my archives here: http://www.kirafics.net/fanfics/

    There are a lot of Ank fans who frequent my site so they would really enjoy it, I think.
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  • From ANON - Britt Columbia on August 06, 2006
    I read On Hire earlier today and I can't stop thinking about it. It's hard to believe that English isn't your first language because you write so well. This is the first story of your that I've read and I can't wait to read more. Your writing is well-balanced and mature; your characters real and believable. You made Katze's struggle for dignity so interesting. I could never have imagined myself being interested in the sex life of a eunuch before today. Even a minor character like Reo, with his lonely hope for love amongst his pots and pans, captured my heart. It was so well done. Bravo.
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  • From ANON - miles on July 28, 2006
    Lena your fic is beautiful !!
    I love your site too... Update pleaseeeeeee
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  • From ANON - Vejiita4eva on July 28, 2006
    I never imagined I would so greatly enjoy an AnK series that ended up having so much -bad- sex XD 'Tis a fantastic collection of writing with an admirably daring premise behind its main couple--I really enjoyed reading it ^_^
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