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Reviews for Turquoise Bracelet

By : Zega
  • From cocoke5 on February 17, 2007
    wow they are have twins and naw is stell see rika i hope that her sister can help get them togeter and i can not wait to hear about the curse. good luck on the next chapter.
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  • From teacupprincess14 on February 05, 2007
    iiiiiinteresting! I'd like to see more of this
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  • From Briryan on January 26, 2007
    Poor Satoshi. I really hope this turn out better for them. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From cocoke5 on January 26, 2007
    oh wow that was good and i hope that nawk up stand how much that sat. love him. i love the part where he slap him and his rika see it. will be wait for more and the story is real good.
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  • From cocoke5 on January 20, 2007
    i hope that satoshi can give his perasten to daisuke . and i hope that daisuke can see how much satoshi loves him. good luck on the story and i will be wait for more of the story.
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  • From ANON - amyrose on January 09, 2007
    Awsome chapt sorry I havn't reviewed for a while beeing having comp troubles... Anyways UPDATE! thats what we all need! Is a good old fashin UPDATE! X3
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 03, 2007
    is riku and daisuke going to have sex? please dont make them have sex! me and my yaoi loving friends love this story but we would die if that BITCH had sex with dai-chan! e-mail me with your anwser.
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on January 02, 2007
    Whew! Daisuke gave me a scare there threatening to abort the baby! I feel so bad for Satoshi tho. Dai is treating him so badly but he just takes it and says nothing. Dai is such an airhead to not see how much Sato cares for him. It brought tears to my eyes when Sato was begging Dai to keep the baby. He was so desperate to get Dai to listen to him and change his mind that it was just heartbreaking! It was the part where Sato said that if Dai would just keep that baby and give it to him after it was born and that he'd never even have to see it again that just did me in! Just heart wrenching! (I've become such a softy! :D) Dai's got just about every symptom one can get when pregnant, doesn't he? :) At the rate he's going, he'll have that baby in no time! (Not that he'll mind I'm sure! :D) When is he due anyway? It'll be interesting to see how much he changes once he feels the baby kick! ;) Now, if only Riku can get run over by a bus I'd be happy. LOL!! XD
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From ANON - WiccanVampire on December 26, 2006
    Oh why doesn't Satoshi just lock Daisuke up and brainwash him; that would be so much more simple. My God, Riku is getting on my nerves so freakin' much!
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  • From ANON - Briryan on December 25, 2006
    Great chapter!) Can't wait to find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Silva on December 22, 2006
    Okey... To be honest, I've always hated malepreg stories
    and yet I kept reading this one. O_o I like the style of
    your writing very much, especially how you've made Krad
    and Satoshi's relationship. It's very realistic. ^__^ I
    really hope there will be more Krad/Sato, because I
    totally LOVE that pairing.
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  • From ANON - WiccanVampire on December 20, 2006
    I'm glad Daisuke isn't going to abort the baby after all. But poor Satoshi; not being allowed to even lay a finger on Daisuke. Oh well, at least Daisuke is living with Satoshi and he is keeping the baby for now anyways. But yesh, Emiko and Riku are such bitches. Not that I care about that jerk-off Riku. I mean Riku's a bitch whom I hate and wish would actually die. Well until next time.
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  • From ANON - Briryan on December 18, 2006
    Yay! Daisuke has moved in with Satoshi. Now it is going to be sweet when Daisuke, finally finds out that it is him, Satoshi likes. Looking forward to the next chapter. I was wondering if you could email me when you post new chapter? Thanks
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  • From ANON - SBT on December 18, 2006
    I offer you my services as a proof reader if you can be patient since I work and don't always feel in the mood. However, if you are willing to have me as one, I shall try my level best.

    Nice job so far, keep going.

    SBT
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  • From Revu on December 18, 2006
    Hey again!

    Well not a long chapter this time, and the biggest thing I have to say about the way it was written is try to proof read it a time or two before posting it to catch some of the errors spell and grammar checkers won't catch, like correctly spelled wrong words. Had a few toward the beginning of the chapter which threw off the rhythm.
    As for the story itself... If the chapters are going to be this short we need to get somewhere faster! This is torture anticipating something for like 4 chapters now! Filler is great and everything but we need to get down to business! lol
    If the next chapter is about this ball that Satoshi is taking Daisuke to, allow me to make a suggestion then, Satoshi needs to tell Daisuke about his feelings right then and there! There will be turmoil, mixed feelings, and confusion, but that's the good stuff!
    Well don't know if that'll happen or not, but here's hoping for some action! Woo-hoo!
    Till next time,
    Revu
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