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Reviews for Turquoise Bracelet

By : Zega
  • From ANON - cocoke5 on December 18, 2006
    wow that is great the nawk is goto keep the baby now heiwk go to try make him fall for him. good luck . be wait for more of the story.
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  • From ANON - TheAngelOfWriting on December 17, 2006
    This is an interesting story. I don't normally read the malepreg fics, but for some reason I clicked on this one. This past chapter was good. A few things that could've been better, though I've forgotten them since I've just read all you have up in one sitting. Satoshi seems to have been brought down to an almost pathetic level of devotion. It's endearing, and yet at the same time a reader would sympathize with him. Daisuke is a little too mood-swingy for my taste, though it's explainable through pregnancy. When Daisuke told Satoshi that he hated him, it seemed like the smack it the face this story needed to get it going. The roles seem to be reversed with Daisuke pushing Satoshi away. If anything, I'd think that Krad would have more to say about the whole situation. Lastly, I don't think the baby should be aborted. I don't like the thought of Satoshi giving himself so completely as to lower himself to a servant to Daisuke, but with the way this is constructed it seems as if that would be the only way to go with this story. That is, unless you'd prefer to go with the abortion and turn this into more of an action/hatred fic than a romance/heart-break kind of thing.

    I think I've covered everything...

    Hope to read more from you,
    R.H.
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  • From ANON - YaoiFanGirl on December 16, 2006
    DDX POOR SATOSHI. T____T damn. Screw Riku. Satoshi loves him more than Riku ever could. T_____T. -sighs- x_x; So sad. ):
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  • From ANON - Cake on December 15, 2006
    I can pretty much guarantee that no one who's reading and enjoying this story wants the baby to be aborted...
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  • From ANON - SBT on December 15, 2006
    I like this, I say no to the abortion though both ways would be interesting to write wouldn't they?

    Keep it up.

    SBT
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2006
    ahhh! a cliffy! ...it's such a short chapter, but really good. ^^ keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Prieel on December 13, 2006
    No abortion! I want to see the dirty curse ^^
    I like this fic :)
    Keep on writing!

    Liefs,
    Prieel
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  • From ANON - wizbunny500 on December 12, 2006
    NOOOO!!! Poor Satoshi... T~T Pls continue! I like this story! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - ana on December 11, 2006
    Please don't abort............PLEASE.............WHYS DAISUKE SO MEAN??????????????CAN'T IT JUST BE HORMONES......................DON'T END THE STORY SO QUICK
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  • From ANON - SatoDai(too lazy to log in) on December 11, 2006
    Do whatever you want with the baby; it's your fic.

    Nice installment, though it seemed to end too fast and didn't seem to have too much of a point to it.
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  • From Revu on December 11, 2006
    You know what's interesting in all this is Satoshi has yet to come out and say that Daisuke is the one he loves to him. I keep waiting for Daisuke's reaction to hearing that, though you'd think it would click in his head by now after everything that's happened... Oh that naive redhead... oh right... Guess I'm not one to talk hehe...

    Well if you want my vote, I say Daisuke should keep the child and donate his body to Satoshi's sciences seeing as how a male pregnancy is a technical impossibilty so Satoshi can carefully study him... hehehe... oh sorry... ummm... yeah cool story, but can already see a pretty big family clash coming, Riku and Emiko are not going to be happy campers, nope. Come on, you know they're going to find out! You can't just keep something like a 9-month long pregnancy a secret from all your friends and family lol.

    Really good story, the only suggestion I can really make is Daisuke and Satoshi need to start working their stuff out cause this is just gonna drive them and all of us crazy if it goes on too much longer. "I hate you I love you I hate you I love you I hate you I love you..." The turmoil! AHHHHHHH! Well I wish you luck in finishing your story! We'll catch you next time!

    -Revu (^_~)v
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  • From ANON - Lizzy on December 11, 2006
    keep it. I wanna know about the curse! Krad made me curious!
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  • From ANON - Jaded Muse on December 10, 2006
    Way cool story. I can't wait for the next installment. Niwa can't abort the baby. Poor thing.
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  • From ANON - miles on December 10, 2006
    OMG ! It's so sad...
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  • From ANON - Mystikal on December 10, 2006
    No! Please don't abort the baby! This is a good story! I can't wait until the next update!!
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