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Reviews for Rhyming Games

By : rowen
  • From Velvetina on February 23, 2007
    I lurve it. Poor confused Gojyo, I'm sure it will turn out great in the end though which is what matters. **bounce** I so love these two!!
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  • From JHatt87 on February 22, 2007
    Good god! this has to be one of the best saiyuki fics I've ever read. Okay it's the best. First off, you got both Gojyo's and Hakkai's personalties almost perfectly. Secondly, your vocabulary is simply fantastic. I'm a bit envious. Thirdly, your narration style is simply wonderful. You're a very good story teller my child. This is your first fictional work? God, I wish I was that lucky when I first started off. You're doing a wonderful job and I hope you update soon. That last part with all Hakkai was thinking was .... YES!.... made me laugh so hard it isn't funny. I definately think Hakkai would have thoughts like these. Never underestimate the quiet ones! Gojyo...gosh your Gojyo is so fucking wonderful! So much so, he's making me say the f-word. Now you know, I pervert like me always wondered just how big Gojyo-sama was but man, you're gonna have me daydreaming all day long. keep up the work!
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  • From AnDesha on February 09, 2007
    Your wit continues to catch me off guard and amaze me in a "slap in the face with a wet fish" kind of way. Keep going my sharky goddess. Wouldn't your mother be proud ;)
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  • From sohmamomiji on January 30, 2007
    Love the progression so far! ^_^ Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From Velvetina on January 28, 2007
    Oh my, you're back!! It feels like I've been waiting forever to read this. Its just as fantastic as I hope it would be but I am now dying to read the next chapter, please tell me it won't be such a long wait. Pretty please!! Demon Hakkai is just too darned sexy and it is going to be amazing!

    Hugs! Velvetina xx
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  • From fuzzybunnytoo on January 28, 2007
    my youkai brain is thinkig about the 6th chapter and the need for the 7th and saying........NOW!
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  • From cupnjava on January 16, 2007
    This is really good. I'd suggest not interjecting author's notes in the story, it messed with your beautiful flow and pulls the reader out of the story. You're writing it well enough that we don't need it. :) This story is so very graceful and beautifully written. Thank you for sharing.
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  • From cupnjava on January 16, 2007
    I'm still reading so I'll be back, but I want to make sure I tell you this. I postively ADORE how you handled the Hakkai reading and thinking in the first chapter. That was priceless!
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  • From ANON - J'dee on December 29, 2006
    Hey gurl I stumbled across this and found I couldn't stop readin your interpretation of Gojyo and Hakkai is so wonderful I feel like I'm actually reading the manga... please let me know when you write more I'm looking forward to reading it o.^ a wonderful story so far... you have a knack for it ^^=
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  • From ANON - fuzzybunnytoo on December 22, 2006
    This is a very different fic and a very interesting one. I am enjoying it to the max. Just found the chapter 1-5 and read then so now you got to give the that 6th one, I am hooked on it. It is so invigerating.
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  • From ANON - sohmamomiji on December 20, 2006
    Ooo! Very interesting so far! ^_^ Can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^ (585 fangirl squeal!)
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  • From ANON - krimson on December 18, 2006
    The story is light hearted, but there are some deeper running themes here that add a great deal of depth to your story. I think you have the characters spot-on as well. I especially liked Hakkai's musings in Chapter 4. Looking forward to more chapters.
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  • From ANON - vampslyr on December 17, 2006
    Sheesh, wanted to smack him over the head for being clinical about the transformation. I'm glad he finally gave in to explore the new sensations. This body should be a monument to life, he needs to relearn how to live. He does need to learn control of course, but life should be reveled in and treasured. Describing him as 'high as a kite' is exactly the state he should be in after that. Very good chapter.

    Don't worry, I loved it. Puns make me groan, but I secretly love them.
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  • From ANON - gretel_chan on December 17, 2006
    It's a pleasure to see that you've updated. Your description of Hakkai's transformation (and focus on control) is quite lovely. Poor Goyjo, in so much denial.
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  • From ANON - Davyn on December 17, 2006
    Wheee! This is coming along so well! I'm so happy to have good fanfiction to read
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