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By : rowen
  • From ANON - bluesnake40 on December 17, 2006
    Another excellent chapt ... I loved your description of what happens when Hakkai removes his 1 ear cuff for the 1st time and his stoned aftermath demeanour. A fic with humor and respect for its 2 leads. Yes!Hopefully, you're pumped up and inspired to keep writing the next few chapts. It's getting quite exciting and can't wait to read what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on December 17, 2006
    **Waves** Heya again! Boy was I happy to see this chapter out, I've been looking foward to it. And I'm glad that my reviews give you joy, that itself makes me smile!

    This chapter was fantastic, I ~adored~ the start with Hakkai and how he changed. I think that vine pattern on Hakkai is ~so~ sexy to so when you were describing it my skin goosepimpled all over. I've got a very pretty picture of youkai Hakkai as my background, hee ^__^ And I'm also happy for Hakkai that the question that started all of this for him has been answered, **Cough** and that he seemed to have fun exploring that aspect of himself lol.

    Also, finally, Gojyo seems to have snapped out of most of his denial. Obviously he's got a few issues about Sanzo, btu as long as he realises that Hakkai's sexy I'll let him get away with a little bit of denial. **Squee** I just love Gojyo, he's so cute and sexy and ...yum! lol. And yay it looks like he's going to be the one who's all befuddled now. Tjough Hakkai is acting very oddly. Hmmm.

    Until next time!
    Velvetina
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  • From ANON - guanyin_kun on December 17, 2006
    I liked chapter 5 quite a bit with one exception: I feel the author should never incert themselves into the story. Remarking on how much you just had to poke fun at male thinking disturbed the flow of the story, which was truly sad.


    I do encourage you to keep writing though, as you do seem to have great talent for it. I like your turns of phrase and imagery. Please, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Primereef on December 17, 2006
    OMG I was entirely happy to see an update so soon! I can't wait until chapter 6, this is getting better and better! I LOOOOOOOVE this pairing, it makes my heart melt. This is a good fic!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on December 15, 2006
    Evil place to leave us. Supremely evil!! That chapter was fantastic and I loved Gojyo in denial but now I'm dying to find out what happens. I'm sure its going to be good so I can't wait for the update ^_^


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  • From ANON - jayree05 on December 15, 2006
    Just stumbled upon your fic and I wanted to let you know that your writing style is really good and your story is awesome so far. Keep updating and I'll keep reviewing.
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  • From ANON - Primereef on December 15, 2006
    eep it coming! I love authors who update constantly! Man, your Hakkai is on point, for sure. Anxious for more.
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  • From ANON - guanyin_kun on December 15, 2006
    I truly enjoy this. Hakkai exploring his darker, but sexual side. "Are Human dicks smaller than Youkai dicks?" Yeah, I can see that going through his head. I can't wait for your next update.
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  • From ANON - vampslyr on December 15, 2006
    Oh my god that was a bad pun. I had to stop reading and comment. Complimenting the bartender on his 'stock'. My brain is blown.

    So, first Gojyo's attracted to girls that remind him of Sanzo, and now he's setting his sights on female versions of his roommate. All things considered, Hakkai is probably more attainable.

    I'm not sure which I would find more entertaining, Hakkai's cock growing longer with each cuff removed, or the build up and let down of suspense as nothing happened until all three cuffs came off. Surprise me. And your writing's improving with each chapter, it's good to watch.
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  • From ANON - shyria on December 14, 2006
    Absolutely loving it!
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on December 14, 2006
    Hehe, poor Gojyo how I do love him. And Bless Hakkai, books are always the way to go in these cases. But he's darn right, whats he going to do with this new knowledge? Looking foward to the next chappie!

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  • From ANON - Car Jack on December 13, 2006
    This is extremely entertaining and reads like a tale. Your take on Hakkai's thoughts and emotions are quite realistic as to how I imagine his reactions would be to his curiosity and worries about his own 'equipment'. I can't wait to read how the tale is told and whether Hakkai gives in to his curiosity about his youkai anatomy. Thanks for posting this story and updating so quickly!
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  • From ANON - dragonkitty on December 13, 2006
    Ho ho ho, I love this story of yours. It's really a unique fanfiction premise for this series, you don't see many stories that take place when Hakkai and Gojyo are living together. And I love Hakkai's inner thoughts and the way he tries to rationalize his facination with Gojyo's penis. Poor him. I like how you added that little bit at the end of the third chapter about Gojyo's one night stand. He seemed a bit freaked out. Would love to read more! =)
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  • From ANON - vampslyr on December 13, 2006
    Funny concept, I'm just waiting for HAkkai to pull his limiters off. I love the chapter titles.
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  • From ANON - gretel_chan on December 13, 2006
    Nice work! I really like what you've written so far. Hakkai's internal monologues are very funny, and quite in character. I'm looking forward to seeing more.
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