Reviews for The Killer in You

BY : Lena


  • From Blackivy on April 16, 2007

    Hello!

    I really like your story! the first chapter got me hooked. I find it sweet, that Light wants to convince himself that wanting a man is bad, but fails repeatedly ^^ It was clear that you don`t want to write a PWP, or otherwise the scenes in chap one would have been more graphic. I also appreciate this, I have had enough bad DN PWPs.

    But I must say, the jump in chapter two irritated me at first. Chapter three and four made up for it, though. The thought, that Light is manipulted through the DN is comforting. Who likes people killing without feeling guilty anyway? His struggle to let go of his lover was heartwrenching, and him love must be very strong to even let himself detained again.

    Keep the good work up!

    My regards, Ivy

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  • From ANON - Glasswunda on April 15, 2007

    wow!! i love it!!!please update it soon this fic is excellent.!!!!

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  • From ANON - abeastofprey on April 15, 2007

    Very impressive! I like it a lot. Had I been around to check the site earlier, I would have reviewed then... ^^;; Your use of all the characters makes the story even more interesting, and I'm glad you took time to develop Light and L's relationship - it gives it more depth. Raito's conflict (concerning L's death) was refreshing; it's good to know that the true Light is still around.

    I hope you continue soon!!

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  • From ANON - !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! on April 15, 2007

    good update!
    come back with more soon yeah

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  • From ANON - shadows on April 12, 2007

    Wow, I'm surprised more people haven't reviewed yet. I like your story idea a lot and can't wait to read more.

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  • From ANON - !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! on April 10, 2007

    WAH!!! SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!
    I'M LITERALLY KICKING MYSELF TILL I CAN READ MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    PLEASE COME BACK WITH MORE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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