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Reviews for Snooping Around Pays Off

By : haruharaharu
  • From Ugleboi on August 07, 2007
    I'm sort of reading these backwards so I have not gotten a hold of your other fics. If you appreciate criticism then you'll appreciate this. Great story! I especially liked the part where Kanako lost control of the situation even if it was for a little while. I fell in love with Love Hina when I saw a revamped short video clip of Naru and Keitaro.
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  • From ANON - Franz on July 23, 2007
    Keep up the good work. Hope you can turn this story into a good plot. I must admit, it has great potential.
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  • From ANON - anon2 on May 27, 2007
    This is probably the hottest story up here right now.

    You really oughta continue. Given how meek Shinobu and how intimidating Kanako can be I'm sure they could keeps things on the down-low.

    Hell, Kanako has shown that she has no problem dressing other people up, so getting out of being cauht shouldn't be as impossible as one would think.
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  • From thebigW on April 29, 2007
    "Snooping Around Pays Off"... Pays off!

    I really like what you did with Kanako/Shinobu/Keitaro, with Kanako as the instigator to everything. Given her character, we knew she wouldn't stop until she got what she wanted, but you had her accept and integrate Shinobu fairly seamlessly (but who can help but love our dear Shinobu, anyway?).

    Keitaro, lucky bastard that he is, just stumbles into things, the beneficiary of your wonderful setup.

    'Eh, what's this? Two cute girls want to have sex with me??? Well, then...'

    Sometimes I want to kick him in the pants.

    I'll have to check out your other stories.

    Ja.

    W.
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  • From ANON - Ero-Bontenmaru on April 25, 2007
    This was really hot! It was great how Kanako acted as a perfect link to keep the threesome together. I hope you find inspiration to write other fics with Kanako instructing Shinobu into the arts of sex.
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  • From ANON - Archimedeas on April 23, 2007
    I enjoyed this story very much. I hope you write something else soon.
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  • From Mangafreak on April 09, 2007
    Freakin' awesome dude. you have a hell of a way writing these stories. can't wait for the next one!
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  • From ANON - D4rK on April 08, 2007
    Sweet and juicy fic, i like your idea of a threesome, it was really cool and hot well written, you should writte a sequel but no one shot this time, my original language is spanish too by the way
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  • From ANON - John Maverick on April 07, 2007
    My original language is Spanish, so I hope you excuse me if there is some error in this review. Even so I read this wonderful fic and the previous one, with difficulties, but it was worth the effort.
    The scenes hentai were very good. As you had said there is not many fic of this style with Kanako and much less one with shinobu participation for what I encourage you to continue.
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