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Snooping Around Pays Off

By: haruharaharu
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Snooping Around Pays Off

DISCLAIMER: I do not own Love Hina or any intellectual property associated with it. I am not earning any money from this work.
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Snooping Around Pays Off
by Haruha_Raharu


Kanako slid open the door to Keitaro's room. She knew that it would be empty, as she had seen him go to take his bath for the evening. This was her daily time to go through his stuff, hold them, touch them, smell them. She wasn't stupid; she knew that what she was doing was weird and more than a little creepy, but she couldn't help it. Keitaro was never responsive to her advances, and this was the only way she could get close to him.

The room was barely lit, completely dark except for the light from the hallway going through the paper on the door. Closing it, she went to his futon, which he hadn't bothered to fold up that morning. She sat down on it, running her hands over the sheet, closing her eyes and imagining him holding her on top of it. She started to get wet, but she resisted doing anything about it, saving that for later when she would return to her own room. She stood up and walked over to his desk where there was a pile of his clothing that he just shed before going to the bath. She was disappointed that they didn't still have his body heat on it, although they were still slightly above room temperature. She held them to her bosom and smelled them, getting more and more turned on. She placed them in the corner where all of his other laundry was.

Suddenly, the door slid open once more. Could it be that Keitaro was done with his bath already? Not wanting to get caught, Kanako quickly jumped into one of those empty bear dolls that was conveniently in the corner some rooms of the Inn. Still hidden a little by the darkness, she tilted open the top to see who had entered.

To her surprise, she could see the silhouette of Shinobu in the open doorway before she entered and quickly shut the door again. Her eyes already acclimated to the darkness, Kanako could see that she was nervous, holding her hand up to her mouth. What was she doing here?

Shinobu meandered over to the pile of laundry. Her eyes were fixated with it, which was a good thing, because Kanako was hiding right next to it. She picked up a pile of clothes and held it just like Kanako had done seconds before.

"Mmmm... Urashima-senpai's scent..."

Kanako didn't know whether to be enraged or to laugh out loud. Of course, to keep her cover, she did neither. But this was her territory! She was the one who was supposed to be doing that! On the other hand, finding a cute and innocent girl like Shinobu do the same strange thing that she was doing was extremely hilarious for some reason.

She kept watching as Shinobu slowly walked over to the futon. Again, like Kanako from before, she sat down on it. She stayed there for a little bit before lying down and rolling around on it. Kanako's emotions of rage and hilarity grew higher and higher. This was the type of stuff you saw in badly written fiction.

"Ahhh... it's no good... I can't help it..."

Shinobu muttered to herself. Kanako saw her get back up, sitting on her butt and facing away from her. Her left hand was behind her on the futon, supporting herself, but her right arm was not visible.

"Mmm... senpai... Urashima-senpai..."

Shinobu quietly whispered. Alarm bells were ringing in Kanako's head now. This situation was too ridiculous. But also extremely amusing. Watching Shinobu's right shoulder shift and move about, Kanako could easily tell what was happening. A thought suddenly popped into her head. She silently thanked herself for having the foresight to plant her various disguises in the bear dolls.

***

"Huh?"

Shinobu turned her head abruptly at a noise. She put her right hand besides her on the futon in order to get up, but what she saw froze her. It was someone who looked very much like herself, stepping out from behind one of the shelves.

"Wh.. what is this? What am I doing, touching myself in Urashima-senpai's room? I'm not that kind of girl!"

The new Shinobu looked at her, appearing just as surprised as she was. What was going on? Was that Shinobu actually her? Then who was she? Thoughts like this ran through Shinobu's mind and caused her brain to lock up. Indeed, the new Shinobu was a perfect replica of her, right down to her voice, tone, posture, even her facial expression. It was only her clothes... they were ones that she had never worn before. In fact, that shirt and skirt were always worn by...

Of course.

"Ka...Kanako-senpai?"

The new Shinobu's face changed from the shocked look of before to a more ambivalent one. Realizing that her ruse was up, Kanako now spoke in her own voice.

"Heh, had you there for a second, didn't I, Shinobu?"

"Wh-wh-what are you doing? Pretending to be me... were you just trying to fool me? Th-that's mean!"

Shinobu spoke to her angrily, even as tears started to form in her eyes. Kanako smirked.

"I think the more pertinent question, Shinobu, is the one I asked before; what are you doing here in onii-chan's room?"

Shinobu's face went red at the question. She had no idea when Kanako had started watching, but what she said before meant that she had seen enough.

"Well... ummm... ah...."

Shinobu lowered her view to the floor while trying to think of something to say. There was nothing. Nothing would let her weasel out of this situation. All she could do was stammer while feeling her head get hotter and hotter.

She was interrupted when without warning, Kanako walked to her and knelt down behind her. Wrapping both her arms around her, she held Shinobu close to her body.

"Shh...shhh.... it's okay. Let Kanako-nee-chan take care of everything."

With that, she lowered her right hand to between Shinobu's legs and began to stroke her slit through her wet underwear.

"Ka-Kanako-senpai, what are you doing!?"

"What, this is what you were doing before I interrupted you, wasn't it?"

Kanako began to rub the area more roughly as she felt Shinobu's juices start flowing again and saturate the cloth between her legs.

"Mmm..! Senpai...! Ah...! Please stop...! This... this is wrong!"

"What's wrong? Weren't you saying, 'oh, senpai, oh, Urashima-senpai' just a minute ago?"

Kanako smirked, pushing her cheek up against Shinobu's. With her left hand she found the clasp on Shinobu's skirt and unwrapped that article of clothing from her.

"Nnnn...no...! I didn't mmmm...mean you...!"

"Hehe, I know. But still, I don't see you fighting back?"

Kanako was right; from the very beginning, Shinobu had made no move to get away from her, and she was now clawing at the futon, her arms and legs shaking involuntarily from the pleasure. Kanako removed her hand from between Shinobu's legs and stuck it into the front of her underwear before resuming her movements.

"Mmm... ah! Senpai! Please, stop this!"

"Shhh.... as I told you, it's okay. Kanako-nee-chan will make you feel good..."

Kanako used two fingers to rub the little nub of flesh that was Shinobu's clitoris. Using the slipperiness caused by Shinobu's lubricants to her advantage, she moved her fingers around and on top of it mercilessly, as fast as she could.

"Mmmm!!! Mmmmfff!!"

Kanako wrapped her left hand around Shinobu's mouth to keep her voice down. The pleasure having shut down her brain, the little girl was completely helpless now, like a doll for her to play with. Kanako continued her assault with her fingers while whispering into her ear.

"Feels good, doesn't it? Maybe after this, I can help you get what you really wanted... but for now, you're my plaything."

"Mmmmmmmm!!!! Mmmmffff!!!"

Kanako felt Shinobu's shaking stop and her body lock up. The only things she could feel from her were the vibrations on her left hand from Shinobu's humming and the juices making her right hand more and more wet.

"Mmmm...! Hmmm.... hmmmm..."

Finally, Shinobu relaxed, slumping backwards and leaning on Kanako. She breathed heavily through her nose, her mouth still blocked by Kanako's hand. Seeing that, Kanako returned both arms to Shinobu's torso and hugged her close.

"See, that wasn't so bad, was it?"

"Hah, hah, senpai... Kanako-senpai..."

Shinobu couldn't reply. The intensity of the orgasm had got to her, and her mind was still spinning from just how ridiculous a situation this was. Even when she had gotten her bearings and was supporting her body with her own hands, she didn't know what to say.

Kanako slowly moved her right hand up, holding it in front of Shinobu's face for just a second before putting her fingers into her mouth, licking them clean.

"Mmm... you taste good, Shinobu."

Walking on her knees, she got up and moved herself to Shinobu's front.

"I think I want some more... from the source..."

With both hands, she pulled on Shinobu's panties, trying to pull them down her legs. This finally got Shinobu to speak.

"N..no, senpai, please, you need to..."

Shinobu fought back this time, moving her legs about and pushing Kanako's face, which was getting closer to her torso, away. But being rather weak, and holding back in order to not hurt her, Shinobu was no match for the older girl. Kanako had her panties down to her knees before they were interrupted by the door to the room sliding open.

Keitaro, clad in only a towel around his waist, stepped in and closed the door before his eyes had become acclimated to the darkness of the room. He reached over to his desk to turn on the lamp and turned to walk to his dresser in order to change for bed. Then, he, like the people before him, froze.

Before him was perhaps the most bizarre sight he had ever seen in his life. On top of his futon were two Shinobus, one pulling the panties off of the other.

"Senpai."

The fully clothed one said. The other one, like Keitaro, was still frozen, too shocked to say anything or even move at all. The Shinobu who spoke got up and walked over to him, shedding her shirt and skirt on the way. Clad only in a white bra and panties, she wrapped her arms around his neck and stood on her toes to kiss him. She held her body up against his, and when she finally let go and stepped back, the action caused the towel around his waist to fall, revealing his growing erection.

Having his body revealed like that caused Keitaro's frozen brain to start working again, and it hadn't taken him long to figure out the only way that what he was seeing could happen.

"Kanako?"

Keitaro said, quickly reaching for the fallen towel in order to cover himself. But as he was picking it up, "Shinobu" grabbed his wrist and stopped him.

"*sigh*, I was hoping to keep you confused a little longer, onii-chan..."

Kanako now spoke in her own voice.

"But wouldn't you enjoy something like this?"

Still without taking off any of her disguise, Kanako knelt down and put his half erect penis into her mouth. Using Shinobu's voice, she began to let out soft moans and hums while looking up into his eyes and trying to make as cute a face as she could.

"Mmm... sen-, senpai, does this feel g, good?"

Kanako said, emulating Shinobu's timid way of speaking, while stroking his growing penis with her right hand.

"Or maybe you'd prefer the real thing?"

Kanako once again spoke using her own voice and stood up. She positioned herself behind him while continuing to stroke his member, which had now reached its full size.

"Ka...Kanako...! Stop this, st, stop this right now...!"

Keitaro blurted out.

"You're welcome to walk away any time you want, onii-chan."

Kanako leaned over and whispered into his ear. She received no reply, and his lack of reaction was all the consent she needed.

"Now, Shinobu, he's the entire reason you came in here, isn't it? Don't you want to make 'Urashima-senpai' feel good?"

Shinobu had been watching the two the whole time, mesmerized at watching what looked like herself talk to and seduce Keitaro. Even now, ignoring the voice, it looked like she was the one who was pleasuring him. It was a little disturbing seeing someone else act as her, but it was also like watching her own fantasies realized. Well, her fantasies always involved Keitaro being the one to seduce her, but still, seeing herself do anything sexual with him was enough to make her impossibly turned on.

Shinobu finished taking off her panties and walked over to where her older roommates were standing. Her eyes were glazed over, her mind still blank. She wasn't sure what to think, but she knew that Kanako was right. Like Kanako before her, she got down to her knees in front of Keitaro.

"Shi...Shinobu, don't, ah, do this... you don't have to listen, oh, to, her."

Keitaro muttered out, Kanako's hand still making his breaths shallow. Shinobu's face was right on top of his penis, and he could feel her warm breaths on the head.

"It's... it's okay, senpai... I want to... to make you feel good..."

Shinobu stuck out her tongue and lapped up the pre-come that had been steadily flowing out the tip. Keitaro flinched at the contact but still made no move to stop either of the two. Kanako moved her strokes to just the shaft, leaving the head free for Shinobu to play around with.

Seeing that change as an instruction, Shinobu took the glans into her mouth and began to suck it in until Kanako's hand started to run into her lips on each up stroke. She began to bob her head slowly, letting about a centimeter leave her mouth before sucking it in again.

"Ahhh...! Shinobu...!"

Shinobu wasn't particularly skilled, but the warmth of her mouth was enough to make Keitaro squirm in pleasure and lose his mind for just a moment. Shinobu moved her eyes upwards, wanting to look him in the eyes. She was disappointed that his eyelids were tightly shut, but seeing that also made her feel proud, sending a feeling of warmth through her body. She closed her eyes and hummed in satisfaction while reaching down with her right hand to rub herself.

Seeing that, Kanako smiled and momentarily let go of Keitaro's shaft from her right hand, which was promptly replaced by Shinobu's free one. She needed both hands to remove her wig, mask, and bra. Having stepped back to take off those items, she stepped back to her position behind Keitaro and hugged him, pushing her bare breasts against his back.

"Looking at your reaction, onii-chan, I would guess Shinobu is making you feel quite good. Am I right?"

Kanako once again whispered into his right ear before beginning to lick and nibble on it.

"Hah, hah, y... yes... Shinobu.... y... you're really... really good at this..."

Shinobu's cheeks reddened at hearing the complement. She looked up again, and this time she got the eye contact she was looking for.

"Hear that, Shinobu? Onii-chan really likes you. So, you should stop doing it so half-heartedly."

Kanako lowered her hands from Keitaro's stomach and placed them on Shinobu's head. She grabbed clumps of her hair and started to tug, pulling her head closer to their bodies. Keitaro watched Shinobu's eyes widen in surprise as his penis was pushed deeper and deeper into her mouth.

"Mmmfff..! Mmm...!"

Shinobu made a few sounds of panic when she felt the tip reach the back of her mouth, but she didn't struggle against Kanako's hands, wanting to do everything possible to make Keitaro feel good. Relaxing her throat, she eventually had the entire organ in her mouth, her bottom lip touching the top of his testicles and her nose tickled by his pubic hair.

"Oh... oh god...! Shi...Shinobu...mmm... are... you... okay...?"

Even as the tightness of her throat sent greater pleasure into his body, Keitaro tried to check up on how Shinobu was doing. Her eyes that were looking up into his were wet, and he could see a small drop of tear come out of her left eye.

"Mmhmm..."

Unable to speak, Shinobu merely hummed assent and tried to nod slightly.

"She's just fine, onii-chan. But, if you don't think she'd be too comfortable like this, we better make you feel even better, because I get the feeling she won't want to stop this until you come."

Kanako started to move Shinobu's head up and down in quick, short strokes. So fast and so small, the movements might more accurately be called vibrations.

"Nnn...! Oh... god...! Shinobu!"

Urged on by Keitaro's involuntary moans, Kanako pushed on his butt with her hips, forcing him to thrust into Shinobu's mouth even as she kept moving her head up and down.

"Hehehe, onii-chan, you sound like you're getting close..."

Kanako giggled into Keitaro's ear.

"Hah, hah, nnnn...! Y...yeah... oh...!"

Keitaro replied, his breathing getting faster and more ragged. Needing something to grab onto, he put his hands on Kanako's wrists.

"Hear that, Shinobu? That means you're doing a good job and that you're about to be rewarded."

Kanako, still tightly gripping Shinobu's hair with her hands, pulled Shinbou's head back up Keitaro's penis so that it no longer reached all the way to the back of her mouth. Kanako might have been forceful, but she did care about Shinobu's comfort after all, and she didn't want her to choke.

"Oh, Shinobu... I'm gonna... I'm gonna...!"

Kanako felt the grip on her wrists tighten.

"Ready, Shinobu? Here it comes, make sure none of onii-chan's goes to waste!"

"Mmff...!"

Shinobu was surprised when the first load exploded in her mouth. It filled it up, and even though she tried to swallow it, the strange texture and unfamiliar taste made it difficult. She tried to back off, but Kanako's strong hands kept her head in place. When Keitaro's penis twitched in her mouth and expelled more of his semen inside her, she was forced to open her mouth and let some spill out and down her chin. His penis fired a third time, although the amount of semen that came out was negligible. Kanako loosened her grip of Shinobu's head, letting her pull her head away and disengage from Keitaro's penis. She moved around his body and knelt down next to her.

"Bad girl... I thought I told you not to waste any."

Kanako said while licking up the semen that had gotten out of Shinobu's mouth. It had flowed down her chin and to her neck, some even staining the neckline of her tee-shirt. She dutifully lapped all of it up, leaving Shinobu's face and neck wet with her saliva. Shinobu merely sat and accepted it, breathing hard through her nose, the physical exertion of pleasuring Keitaro having caught up with her.

"But still, Shinobu, you did quite well for your first time. I'm sure onii-chan would agree."

Kanako looked up at Keitaro, but he was still shaken from his orgasm and in no position to reply. Kanako turned her eyes back on Shinobu and kissed her with an open mouth, trying to suck and scrape out whatever semen was left over in her mouth.

As it turned out, Shinobu had barely swallowed any, but seeing Kanako try to steal it away from her made her jealous. She returned the kiss and sucked and tongued back, swallowing the semen in her mouth and trying to take back whatever Kanako had taken away. Like that, the two kissed and fought for a few moments before all had been swallowed.

"Well, onii-chan, do you agree?"

Kanako and Shinobu both looked up now. Kanako smiled knowingly, almost slyly, while Shinobu gave him a more nervous smile, looking for approval.

"Ah... y...yes... Shinobu... you... it... it felt incredibly good..."

Keitaro's breathing was still scattered, but he managed to reply. Shinobu blushed again and looked away in embarrassment, happy that she could get such a reaction out of him.

"Yes, Shinobu really made you feel good, didn't she, onii-chan?"

Kanako spoke while standing up. She also lent Shinobu a hand and helped her get up.

"But don't you think you should return the favor? It's not fair that you're the only one who gets to feel good."

Kanako turned to Shinobu.

"What do you think, Shinobu? I noticed you couldn't help touching yourself when you were pleasuring onii-chan. Wouldn't you prefer to have 'Urashima-senpai' help you with that instead?"

Shinobu's face reddened further, and she looked at Kanako for only a moment before averting her eyes again, but she nodded.

"Y..yes... I... I love you, Urashima-senpai. Please, I want you..."

"Well, then, it's settled!"

Kanako grabbed one hand from each of them and pulled Keitaro and Shinobu back to the futon. She sat down on the sheets and pulled them down so that they sat on either side of her. She gave Keitaro a light kiss on the lips before pushing him down onto his back. Then, having grabbed Shinobu by the waist, she dragged her to him so that she was straddling his face. She helped her take off her tee-shirt and bra and threw them onto the floor.

"You've made onii-chan all tired and small, so this will have to do for now."

Kanako said while still hugging Shinobu from behind.

"Senpai..."

Shinobu looked down nervously at Keitaro, who looked back with equally nervous eyes. Shinobu's hairless crotch was right in front of his face, close enough to lick if he just extended his tongue. The inside of her thighs were already soaked with lubricants that had been flowing from the very beginning, and the smell was intoxicating to him. Before Keitaro could act, though, Kanako grabbed Shinobu's sides and pushed her down.

"Mmmf!"

Keitaro's yelp of surprise was muffled by the flesh that suddenly blocked his mouth. Still, he regained composure quickly and began to lick around Shinobu's genitals while his lips encircled them. He alternated between licking along the crack between her labial lips and lightly flicking her clitoris.

"Mmm... ohhh... Urashima-senpai..."

Shinobu moaned softly as Keitaro's tongue and lips began to send her small jolts of pleasure. She placed her hands on his head and started to slowly roll them around in his hair. Tilting her head back, she closed her eyes.

Both of them felt Kanako move from her position of straddling Keitaro's chest behind Shinobu. Neither of them paid much attention to her, but Keitaro was soon forced to when he felt first her hand and then her tongue on his shrunken penis. He wanted to turn his head and look at what she was doing, but there was no way he was going to stop concentrating on what he was doing to Shinobu. Still, even without looking, he could plainly feel Kanako gently stroke and lap at the head of his penis which was starting to become erect again.

Feeling the excitement and pleasure return to him, Keitaro decided to change his motions to thrust his tongue into Shinobu's vagina.

"Mmm-aaah!"

Feeling a foreign body enter her for the first time, Shinobu reacted with a sharper moan. The inside was hot and tight, and Keitaro found it to be almost painful. Still, the saliva on his tongue and Shinobu's own plentiful juices made moving about easy, and Keitaro enjoyed the taste. He began to rhythmically scrape around the walls with the tip of his tongue while roughly rubbing against her clitoris with his upper lip.

"Ooohhh....! Senpai...! Urashima-senpai!"

Shinobu's voice came out in squeaky gasps as she tried to keep her voice down. Still with her eyes shut, she leaned forward and clamped her hands onto Keitaro's hair like claws. Kanako stopped her ministrations for a moment in order to look at the little girl squirm about it pleasure.

Shinobu had been very turned on from the moment she had watched Kanako confront Keitaro, and it did not take long for her to reach her peak. Feeling her orgasm coming closer, she opened her eyes to look into Keitaro's.

"S...s...senpai... I'm...I'm going to come...!"

Shinobu managed to squeak out. Just as she removed her hands from Keitaro's head in order to cover her mouth, her orgasm hit.

"Mmmmmm....!!! Mmmmmm!! Urashima-senpai!"

Shinobu's screams became hums as the air was forced to go through her nose, and even when she called out Keitaro's name, it was heavily muffled. Her body froze as all of her muscles contracted. Through her shut eyes she could see fireworks as the pleasure spread out and pulsed all throughout her body. Keitaro stopped his actions and lowered his head a bit, letting his tongue out in the process. Then, even as Shinobu was in the middle of coming, he began to very lightly lap at her clitoris.

Eventually her orgasm subsided and Shinobu relaxed and opened her eyes.

"Sen...pai... hah... that was wonderful..."

Shinobu quietly breathed out those words as she lowered her hands to stroke his head. Keitaro had stopped completely by now, and both could see all of each other's face. Keitaro smiled up at her.

"Yeah...? I'm glad, Shinobu..."

The two stared in silence, just smiling at each other. That stopped when Keitaro grimaced his face in pain.

"Hey, let's not forget what we originally came here to do!"

Kanako interrupted their moment, giving Keitaro's penis a quick but tight squeeze. She had succeeded in getting it back to being fully erect, and it was throbbing almost violently in her hand.

"Come on, Shinobu, this is what you wanted, isn't it?"

Shinobu turned her head back to look at Kanako, while Keitaro's vision was still blocked.

"Umm... y... yes..."

Embarrassed by Kanako's bluntness, Shinobu muttered out while averting her eyes.

"Shinobu..."

Keitaro looked up at her, not quite sure what to say.

"It's okay, senpai. As long... as long as it's with you."

Shinobu turned her head back to look at him. It took all of her courage to look at his eyes and smile while saying those words, and she quickly moved her eyes away as soon as she finished.

"Eek!"

Shinobu let out a yelp as her body was once again moved by Kanako without consent. She was pulled down backwards only to be caught and supported by Kanako's body, and both of her knees were grabbed as she was dragged backwards by the legs until she was straddling Keitaro's waist. Kanako then repositioned herself in front of her so that she was facing her with one leg on either side of Keitaro's stomach. Hugging her with one arm and holding Keitaro's penis with the other hand, Kanako gently guided the two bodies together.

"Nnnn....!"

"Ohhh..."

Shinobu and Keitaro moaned together when just the head entered. Despite the copious amounts of Kanako's saliva and Keitaro's pre-come that coated his penis and Shinobu's fluids that still clung to her genitals, going in was difficult. Keitaro felt pressure on his penis like never before.

"Hmm... this might be a bit more difficult than I expected..."

Kanako wrapped both of her arms tightly around Shinobu, pressing their naked chests together while slowly guiding her down lower and lower. She could feel Shinobu's labored breaths on her shoulder.

"Nnn... Kanako-nee-chan... it hurts, it hurts..."

The feeling wasn't as painful as it was straining, but still, it was uncomfortable enough to make her cry out.

"Shhh... there, there... it'll start to feel better soon..."

Kanako tried to reassure her as she forced her body even lower. By now, most of Keitaro's penis was hidden inside of Shinobu, and the heat and tightness had made his mind go completely blank. Breathing harder, he just watched his step-sister hold Shinobu without having any sort of comprehension of what was happening.

"Mmm...!"

Shinobu let out a sharp moan as she finally reached the hilt. The entirety of Keitaro was inside her now, and no amount of pushing could move her any lower.

"Haaaa... haaa."

She began to breathe deeply. She had never felt so filled up before in her life, and she found it pleasing. Knowing that it was Keitaro who was filling her up sent another sense of warmth throughout her body.

"Does it still hurt?"

Kanako backed off and looked into her eyes. While her words were of concern, her face was smiling, as if she actually didn't really care.

"A... a little... but it's... also... pretty nice..."

Shinobu spoke, looking back at her with tearful eyes.

"Here, maybe this will help."

Kanako removed her right arm from around Shinobu's body and began to stroke her clitoris while at the same leaning forward to kiss her. The move was unexpected to Shinobu, but she began to return the kiss as Kanako's fingers made the pleasure return to her body and the thought of the pain slowly melt away from her mind. Unconsciously, she began to move up and down in short strokes, getting used to the feeling of having Keitaro inside her and letting the pleasure get to her.

"Hah, hah, Kanako-nee-chan... it... it's starting to feel good..."

Shinobu spoke, breaking off their kiss.

"Good. Well, how are you doing, onii-chan?"

Kanako replied before turning her head back to look at Keitaro. Keitaro's mind was still frozen from the pleasure, and he was staring at them blankly, the feeling of Shinobu's tightness moving up and down on his penis filling up his brain and pushing out all other thoughts. It was only when Kanako spoke to him that the gears started turning again.

"It looks like onii-chan is enjoying it too, Shinobu."

Kanako turned back to Shinobu. By now, Shinobu had her hands on Kanako's shoulders, using her for support as she moved more and more rapidly.

"Mmm... ah.... that's... I'm... glad..."

"But Kanako, what about you?"

Without warning, Keitaro hooked his hands around Kanako's thighs and pulled her upwards until she was straddling his face, like Shinobu before her except facing the other way. Her right hand was taken away from between Shinobu's legs, and Shinobu's hands fell to Keitaro's chest as the distance between the two girls grew.

"Huh, onii-chan?"

Kanako reacted in surprise as she lost control of the situation for the first time.

"It's like you said, it's not fair when someone gives all the pleasure without receiving any."

Keitaro spoke while massaging her genitals through her wet underwear. The cloth of her panties between her legs was completely soaked, to the point that it was translucent enough to let him see everything.

"Oh, onii-chan..."

Kanako had fully expected Keitaro to concentrate on Shinobu while ignoring her, and this came as an exceedingly pleasant surprise. She shifted to get more comfortable while Keitaro moved aside the cloth between her legs in order to give him better access to her private parts. Hesitantly, Keitaro began to suckle on her clitoris.

"Mmm... onii-chan... that's good..."

Kanako reached out and intertwined her fingers with Shinobu's, as the pleasure made her want to hold onto something. It felt incredible, even better than she had fantasized. His technique lacked finesse or subtlety, but the concentrated attack on her clitoris and the knowledge that it was him doing it without even being asked was enough for her.

Without being able to support her hands either on Kanako's shoulders or on Keitaro's chest, Shinobu was forced to slow down her movements. By now, all discomfort had disappeared, and even without Kanako's fingers helping out, the scraping of Keitaro's penis inside her was making her feel better and better. The pleasure was different, more intense, than before.

"Mmm.... senpai...! Urashima-senpai...!"

"Onii-chan! You're...you're so good, onii-chan!"

Both girls called out as they felt their orgasms approaching. Despite having started later, it was Kanako who came first, the simple knowledge that Keitaro was pleasuring her being enough to reach her peak extremely quickly.

"Mmmmm....! Mmmmm!!!"

Kanako's hands squeezed Shinobu's tightly as she leaned forwards to kiss her. The wave after wave of pleasure that hit her as she came caused her to moan into Shinobu's mouth even as their tongues entangled and wrapped around each other. Shinobu kissed and squeezed back, wanting her to enjoy her orgasm as much as possible. After seeing Kanako's body freeze and lock up and hearing her loud, uncontrolled moans turned into hums, Keitaro stopped his assault on her clitoris.

"Mmm...! Aaaaah.... onii-chan... hah..."

Finally, Kanako let go of Shinobu's hands and lips and began to breathe deeply.

"Onii-chan... that was... good..."

Kanako scooted herself back so that she could see all of Keitaro's face before speaking to him. Facing him upside down, she lowered her head and kissed him on the lips.

"Ah!"

Keitaro let out a yell when he felt Shinobu put her hands on his chest and start to pound her hips up and down faster. Concentrating on pleasuring Kanako had allowed him to take his mind off his own pleasure, but with that done, it had now returned in full force. Unconsciously, he took his hands from his sides and placed them on Shinobu's butt.

"Mmm... yes... now it's your turn"

Kanako smiled when she raised her head to watch both Keitaro's and Shinobu's eyes start to glaze over. Lowering her head again, she continued to kiss and lick Keitaro's face and lips.

"S, senpai... Urashima-senpai!"

"Oh, Shinobu...! Shinobu, you're so good...!"

Keitaro felt his orgasm quickly approaching once again. Through Kanako's hair, he could see Shinobu, her face strained, her dark blue eyes blank, completely lost in the pleasure. Added on top of the feeling of the intense friction of Shinobu's insides rubbing his penis as well as the warm slipperiness of Kanako's tongue on his face, it was enough to make him finally reach the threshold and push on through.

"Mmmm!! Hhmmmmmm!"

Kanako stole his lips just as he came. Thrusting up with his waist, Keitaro felt the first load of semen shoot up and into Shinobu's vagina. His penis twitched and fired a couple more times before stopping, although the pleasure of the orgasm continued. Overwhelmed, Keitaro eagerly sucked on Kanako's lips and tightly squeezed Shinobu's butt.

Shinobu had been on the edge, and when she felt Keitaro's penis twitch and the first burst of his semen hit her insides, she too achieved climax. It wasn't the physical sensation of those things, which were tiny compared to everything she was already doing anyway, but rather the knowledge that Keitaro was coming inside her, that she was the one making him come inside her, that sent her over the edge.

"Nnnyaaaaah...! Nnnnn....!"

Shinobu tried to keep her mouth shut, not wanting to make too much noise. She dug her fingernails into her palms, balling her hands, still on Keitaro's chest, into little fists. She froze her movements and lowered herself to impale herself as much as possible Each time she felt his penis twitch and more semen enter her, her pleasure increased, making her tightly close her eyes. She could feel her vaginal muscles contract erratically, massaging Keitaro's penis and sucking more semen out.

"Mmmf!!?"

Suddenly, she felt a pair of lips on her own. When she opened her eyes, she saw that it was Kanako, who had left Keitaro's face for hers when Keitaro had stopped responding. Indeed, below, she could see that he was relaxing now, having come down from his orgasm and become exhausted. As the two girls kissed, Shinobu slowly felt her orgasm subside as well.

"Mmm... hah, hah, hah..."

Shinobu raised her hands and pushed Kanako's face away from hers in order to catch some much needed breaths. Kanako smiled at the sight.

"So, Shinobu, what do you think of onii-chan?"

"Mmm... yes... senpai... you were... incredible..."

Shinobu looked down into Keitaro's eyes as she spoke. Feeling Keitaro's penis shrink inside of her, she raised herself and lied down next to him, placing her face on his right arm.

"Thank you, Shinobu... you were amazing as well..."

Keitaro looked down into her eyes while speaking. He leaned his head forward to kiss her. Closing their eyes, the two started off slowly, with light pecks, but by the end, the two were making out passionately, with Keitaro holding Shinobu's body to his with his left arm around her back. The two finally disengaged when Kanako moved to Keitaro's left and took hold of his arm in order to lie down like Shinobu had.

"But you surprised me, onii-chan... does that mean... you're okay... with me...?"

Keitaro looked away embarrassedly at Kanako's question. He had completely lost himself to the moment back there, and it was only now that Kanako was forcing him to think about what he had done to her, on his own volition. He didn't quite know how to respond to her.

"Well... um... that is... Kanako... I..."

Kanako interrupted him by putting her lips onto his. When Keitaro looked at her confusedly, she said,

"It's okay, onii-chan. You don't have to tell me anything... as long as you love me with your body... it's enough."

After saying that, she resumed kissing him, as intensely as Shinobu had been before. During their kiss, she opened her eyes and glanced to her left to see Shinobu watching intently.

"Heh, are you getting jealous, Shinobu? Come on, come here..."

Like before, she grabbed Shinobu's hair and pulled her head towards theirs. Moving her head aside a bit, she let three pairs of lips collide, making a small triangle as they each kissed two people. To be sure, it was a bit uncomfortable for all of them as their faces and noses squished against each other, but it was also oddly pleasing. Kanako backed off a little bit before she stuck her tongue out and into the mouthes of the other two, causing them to follow her lead. The three tongues mixed and intertwined with one another, until Keitaro finally moved his head away and started laughing.

"Hahahaha!!"

"What is it, senpai?"

Shinobu looked at him with confusion.

"No, it's nothing. It's just how uncomfortable and contrived that was just now."

Kanako smiled at the statement and started to giggle as well.

"Well, I enjoyed kissing both of you..."

Shinobu turned her eyes away.

"We all did, Shinobu."

Kanako reassured her.

"But, I agree with onii-chan, there are better, more comfortable ways to... show our affection..."

Reaching with her left hand, Kanako began to lightly caress and stroke Keitaro's flaccid penis. Still coated with Shinobu's juices and his semen, it quickly dirtied her hand, which she brought up to her mouth to lick clean before bringing it down again to repeat the process.

"Onii-chan... please... I want you... inside me... do you think... you could... one more time...?"

Kanako asked between licks.

"I-I don't know, Kanako."

Keitaro honestly didn't know. After what he had just gone through, getting erect a third time would be a challenge.

"Please... I'll help you..."

Kanako moved her body down his in order to suck on his left nipple, even as she continued to clean off his penis. She felt it twitch in reply to the strange sensation it sent him.

"Yes, onii-chan, I think you can. Shinobu, could you help, too?"

Shinobu took Keitaro's other nipple in her mouth and gently lick and suck on it, trying to copy what she just watched Kanako do. Seeing that, Kanako stopped her own ministrations and moved over to between Keitaro's legs. Still holding onto his penis, she softly ran her tongue all over it, cleaning it of all of its remaining fluids. She could see that they were being effective, as Keitaro's penis began to grow more and more firm in her hand. Still not yet at full size, she had no trouble putting the entire organ into her mouth.

"Oh, Kanako... Shinobu... you're both so good..."

Keitaro couldn't help but speak as he felt his heartbeat rise again. With his penis in her mouth, Kanako continued to flick and fondle it with her tongue, twirling her slippery muscle all around the head. She was surprised by how quickly it was growing in her mouth now, and she was forced to move her head back if she didn't want to choke like she had made Shinobu do earlier.

"Kanako... Shinobu... you can... you can both stop, now..."

Keitaro patted Shinobu's head, causing her to raise it from his chest. Kanako removed his penis from her mouth, but she continued to lick and stroke it lightly as she watched Keitaro raise his head to kiss Shinobu. He was fully erect now, and she found the rhythmic throbbing of it in her hand to be comforting.

"Onii-chan, please... I want you, now...!"

Kanako spoke a little desperately while turning around on the futon to face away from him. On her hands and knees, she looked over her shoulder into Keitaro's eyes with her own, glazed over and unfocused.

"Go ahead, Urashima-senpai. It's Kanako-nee-chan's turn, now."

Shinobu helped pull Keitaro up as he positioned himself also on his knees behind Kanako. He grabbed Kanako's soaked panties that were still on her and pulled them down to her knees, before he placed both his hands on her waist. Shinobu guided him into her as he pulled her butt closer.

"Oooohhh..."

"Mmmm..."

Thanks to Kanako's juices as well as her saliva, Keitaro had no trouble entering her, and his penis slid all the way inside easily. Shinobu sat back and watched as the two enjoyed the feeling of each other for just a moment.

"Hah, hah, Kanako... you feel so good... this is what you wanted, isn't it?"

"Yes, yes, onii-chan... I feel so full inside..."

Slowly, Keitaro started to move his hips, stabbing into her vagina over and over again. Kanako, too, moved her hips in rhythm with his. She tightly gripped the sheets on the futon as she felt the pleasure grow amazingly quickly.

"Mmm... nii-chan!! Don't stop, nii-chan!!"

Shinobu watched Kanako shut her eyes and shake involuntarily. Unconsciously, she moved her hand between her legs and began to masturbate, turned on by the sight of the older girl overcome with pleasure. Every once in a while, Kanako would open her eyes and look at her, but it never seemed to actually see her, always unfocused and quickly closing again.

"Shi...Shinobu... come here... it's better... ah... if we do it all together..."

However, Kanako was still taking in information through her eyes, and she managed to gain enough control of her body to guide the younger girl in front of her, even has Keitaro continued to slam into her from behind. She lowered her head to between Shinobu's legs and started to lick and fondle her with her mouth violently, the pleasure making it difficult for her to control her actions.

"Ahhh! Kanako-nee-chan...! That's too rough...!"

Kanako ignored her protests and continued her oral assault, feeling the pressure of the coming orgasm grow within her. Her moans were stopped by Shinobu's crotch, sending the younger girl small vibrations each time.

"Ohhh-onii-chan... I'm gonna come...!"

"Me... me too, Kanako... I'm... I'm so close...!"

Keitaro also felt his pleasure growing and orgasm approaching. The fact that it was his third round that night had held him off until now, but the feeling of Kanako's vagina wrap around him and seeing her so lost in ecstasy made it feel like it was his first again.

"Onee-chan!! Kanako-nee-chan!!"

Shinobu tightly grabbed onto Kanako's hair as she felt herself coming. Her body froze and her jaw closed shut, allowing only a loud hum to come out of her while she rode out yet another orgasm.

"Mmmm...!!! Nii-chan!! I'm coming, onii-chan!!"

Kanako shouted into Shinobu's flesh, and she, too, locked up, squeezing the futon's sheets so tightly that they were about to rip. Her vagina convulsed erratically, squeezing Keitaro's penis every which way.

"Nnn...!!! Kanako...!!"

That was enough to send Keitaro over the edge. He fell over forwards onto Kanako's back and wrapped his arms around her body, squeezing tightly as he felt himself fire several times into her. He kissed the side of her neck tightly, rubbing his head on Shinobu's leg in the process.

Almost simultaneously, the three relaxed, Shinobu falling over onto her back, and Kanako letting the strength out of her arms and letting her body fall onto the futon with Keitaro's on top of it. Kanako's entire back had a light film of sweat from the physical exertion, causing their bodies to cling together. For a few moments, all three could do nothing but breathe in ragged gasps.

Keitaro was the first to act; he took his again flaccid penis out of Kanako and rolled over next to her.

"Hah, hah, Kanako... you were great..."

Kanako got up onto her elbows and faced him, blushing at the comment.

"Really, onii-chan? You, you were great as well."

She leaned over to kiss him. Her face, like her back, was wet, although from Shinobu's juices, causing Keitaro's face to get a bit dirty in the process. Unfazed, Keitaro licked his lips and whatever part of cheeks he could, cleaning his face while Kanako did the same. They then moved onto each other's cheeks, helping out where they couldn't reach.

"Shinobu, are you okay?"

Keitaro looked up and asked, worried that the only movement from her had been her breathing until now.

"Ye-yes, senpai... I'm fine... I'm just... tired..."

Shinobu answered slowly, taking time to take deep breaths. She was completely spent now, and her eyes had a hard time keeping open.

"I... think... I would like to sleep, now..."

Shinobu weakly crawled over to Keitaro's side and put her head on his arm like before, before promptly falling asleep.

"Umm... hey, Shinobu?"

"Shhh, onii-chan, you'll wake her."

"But-"

"This is fine, here."

Kanako got up and went to the dresser, getting a blanket and a couple pillows. She covered both Keitaro and Shinobu before wriggling herself under as well, next to Keitaro. She placed a pillow under his head and put the other one next to it, although she decided to use Keitaro's arm as a pillow instead, as Shinobu had.

"Aaaaah..."

She yawned.

"I'm getting sleepy, too, nii-chan... aren't you?"

"Y-yeah..."

In the back of Keitaro's mind, he wondered what would happen if they should end up being awakened by someone, but with both his mind and body exhausted, he couldn't bring himself to care enough to stay awake. The two slowly drifted off to join Shinobu, enjoying each other's warmth.
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Whew, that one took a while. Google Docs tells me that it's ~7900 words, which is about 1900 more than the ~6000 of my first story. It translates to about 26 double-spaced pages, at 300 words per page (I think that's about normal).

Anyway, I didn't spend nearly as much time editing this one as my first one (Interruption to a Bath), so you'll likely catch a lot more typos and word repetition. I APPRECIATE CRITICISM, SO IF YOU CATCH THOSE, PLEASE LET ME KNOW! Any criticisms about the literary style is also much appreciated. I feel like the sex scenes in this one are a lot more streamlined and concise - the extra length is due to having a third person involved, as well as having a longer overall scene, and even though the closing is a lot shorter than my first story's, the opening is a lot longer than its opening. But I also feel that by making them shorter (if you read the notes on my first one, I was concerned that they were too long), they might have been downgraded somewhat, losing the intimacy and detail that is helpful for such scenes.

Similar to my first story, the reason for this was that I didn't see enough stories with Shinobu either. And not nearly enough with three or more players. So I decided to do what I can to contribute. So I'd really love it if you could at least leave some rating and maybe a short review if you have the time. This is also pretty clearly a one-shot; a sequel would probably involve Keitaro being killed every which way imaginable once he's discovered by Naru and/or Motoko.

Also, any ideas for better titles for either of my stories would be nice. I suck at coming up with titles, so I just wrote vague descriptions that popped up into my head.

EDIT:
I decided to read over this story one more time, fixing some grammatical errors, as well as making some stylistic changes in order to make it read a bit better. Nothing major, just some small changes to the syntax here and there.

If you enjoyed this, make sure to check out "Garden of Thanatos," my 3rd story, which i put up on anime>Misc. The Miscellaneous section gets very few hits, so I'd like all the readers I can get. It's based on characters from Tsukihime.

Hatemail, death threats, etc can be sent to haruha.raharu{at}gmail.com

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