Reviews for operation getting in to soldier boys pants

BY : D.M.Alexandra


  • From satomika on September 08, 2014

    Ha~!

    Wow~!

    Wish there's more~!!! ^^

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  • From xex on September 27, 2007

    Awesome story, though a lot of mechanical errors.

    Also, Kaname's hair is black, but that's a minor complaint.

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  • From HumanInfiltrator on April 27, 2007

    *giggle*

    So glad you updated.

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  • From Dave on April 15, 2007

    Woh ! Very Good ! I need More !

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  • From Mr McBob on April 14, 2007

    See previous review.

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  • From Mr McBob on April 14, 2007

    Everyone is so in character it's scary. However, your spelling is so appalling that I can't help but think either (a) you purposefully misspelled half the story, though for what purpose I couldn't say, or (b) you're a teenager who snuck onto the site and really isn't old enough to be here, or (c) English is not your native language. If none of these are correct, then you should probably dictate your fics from now on, until you go back and finish fourth grade. To sum it up, the story was excellent, chaacterization was excellent, spelling was so bad it distracted the reader from the other two things. 2 out of 3 ain't bad.

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  • From Kenjiro Sanga on April 13, 2007

    holy smokes hope you continue this story

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