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Reviews for Proving what belongs to her

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  • From saintraven on November 07, 2009
    God I love this story! Please, will you ever update?
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  • From Review on April 05, 2008
    Oh fuck it's been a long time since I've been here... about a day or so before smitty's review... anyway, onto the review responses.

    smitty: Thanks for the review! I'll try to get back to my fanfictions as soon as I can, but I can't say when. However, both of my stories will get updated, even if it's a year from now. But who knows, maybe my stoy will be on the front page a week from now.

    MrMcBob: This story follows my own story arc, heh. But if we're going off the anime, then it'd have to go in the Diamond and Pearl season. If I've heard correctly, May is supposed to be making an appearance in a future episode that'll air in April for Japan. But, by that time, Ash and co. are probably going to be much farther than Floraroma Town. I THINK they're getting near Mt. Coronet, but I'm not too sure on the details. The only sources I have for my information are a few of the forums I frequent, and some of the posts there are misleading... so who knows, maybe I'm totally wrong, and maybe I'm not.

    Well, with any luck, I'll be able to sit down and work on my stories within the next month. But don't hold your hopes high folks, I can't make any promises at this point in time...
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  • From MrMcBob on April 03, 2008
    What the hell story arc does this follow?
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  • From Review on November 08, 2007
    His Lemony Freshness- As I said before, next chapter should be out before too long. As for Ash...I can't really say anything that wouldn't be a possible spoiler for the future. So I can't say anything there. But yes, I know I could've done a better job in some places. But I didn't want it to get too long, so I had to make some sacrifices. Hopefully the next chapter won't have anything cut out. Well, this is all from me, now returning to Microsoft Office Word...

    KABOOM!
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  • From NinjaDiner on November 06, 2007
    Nice job; you've got me wanting more, and I'm curious to see where you're going with this. As I'm reading it now, it looks like Ash isn't just too stupid to notice; all three girls just flat-out get on his nerves. I hope I wasn't just misreading it, as this allows for the story to go to much dirtier places than boring old reciprocated feelings.
    That said, there are a few places where you're a little too blatant with your writing, where you come out and just say what you could more effectively imply. I'll be more specific if you want; mainly I'll just be waiting for the next installment.
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  • From Review on November 06, 2007
    Yay! People reviewed this! huzzah! According to Yahoo mail, both reviews were submitted at the same time...scary. Anywho, moving on...

    Anon person- Thank you for your input. As for the "action", we'll just have to wait a bit longer. It's so fun teasing Dawn. heh.

    wein6- That's good to know. I tried to mix up the flow of events to keep the reader interested, and I see I did that. Chapter 2 should be that way as well.

    Speaking of chapter 2, it should be out before the middle of the month. If not, feel free to fill my hate-mail box. :)


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  • From ANON - wein6 on November 06, 2007
    You know how to keep things interesting.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 06, 2007
    Excellent beginning! I cant wait to see the Dawn x May action.
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