Reviews for Thunder

BY : Yami Bakura


  • From ANON - Shishio on May 24, 2008

    -Aws- That was so sweet! I love fluff, but most of the Mello and Near stories on here are angsty. Your story was an oasis in the desert. ^___^ I absolutely adore it, expecially the last line and how both boys ended up saying each other's real names. I do not think it was horrible at all, you portrayed their personalities quite well considering you had not yet read the part of the manga with them in it. You should write more like it.

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  • From ANON - oztan on April 27, 2008

    More of this pairing. I like this.

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  • From EllieF on December 23, 2007

    Hey! I wanted to thank you for your kind review, but I'm a newbie to AFF and couldn't find how to reply. It's just as well - I'm glad I read this. It's very cute, and I loved Mello's snarkiness. Plus, I'm a sucker for any time the boys use each other's real names. :-) Anyway, thanks again, and I really enjoyed your story!

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  • From ANON - Awesome-o on November 18, 2007

    Good story - Near's real name is Nate though, not Nathan - and seeing as it was written in the manga as "Nate River" I assume also it's not short for anything.

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