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Reviews for Sinners: Arc 2

By : Stormborn Apostle
  • From Satoku on July 17, 2010
    Just thought I'd share a fun little toy I found earlier today. Your word usage in Cataclysm (discounting common words like "the" "a" "and" etc): http://www.wordle.net/show/wrdl/2234269/Sinners
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  • From Bishonen on June 09, 2010
    Two things

    1. Is Slash dead or what?
    2. Slash is in this article

    http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/TearJerker/FanFiction

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From ANON - Random_anonymous_user on May 29, 2010
    Great story, one of the best things I've read. I'm now going to note a few things with the plot that could be used to make the story better (or perhaps just different). Firstly, the guy in the desert (Janus?) didn't save Psymakio. You might use this so that either Slash doesn't die from the lack of lifetime, or Janus is forced to save Psymakio if she is going to die. The second thing is more interesting. Regigigas (that is the king, isn't it?) created the Gardevoir species. The ancient Gardevoir (forgot the name, sorry) didn't have children. But, the species is still alive a long time in the future? That could mean several things, most (but not all) of them with the ability to impact the storyline.

    Sorry if I somehow offended you, I didn't try to.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 24, 2010
    just thought you'd appreciate knowing that you have a file on encyclopedia dramatica. in a way something to be proud of as only interesting and/or skilled writers actually get their own insulting file.
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  • From ANON - Max on May 23, 2010
    WHERE ARE YOU? THIS STORY BEST NOT BE LEFT UNFINISHED!
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  • From ANON - erik rockbell on April 09, 2010
    Heya, I decided to look up anything having anything to do with my favorite pokemon Gardevoir one day out of sheer boredom. Thats when a single word caught my attention, the word being "Sinners". Upon reading this goldmine of a tale I was a little unsure of what to expect. But as I delved deeper into this highly descriptive adventure I quickly became immersed in this more "mature" pokemon world as if I was right there with cocky Slash, endearing Psymakio (Whos name is VERY close to that of my Gardevoir "Psykimiko") and the comic relief that is Crawdaunt. Thank you for merely existing because you have risen up as one of the inspirations for my writings (Only to be outdone by John Lennon that is). If I could keep in close contact with you I would greatly appreciate it, thank you. P.S. Why in the hell do your Gardevoirs have tits?
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  • From ANON - Seung Park on March 25, 2010
    I enjoyed your story very much -- both Arcs 1 and 2. It's so much more than simple AFF -- I think that Sinners is on a whole different level than most other fanfics, pokemon or not.

    May I suggest bringing in Jessie and James? Since you mentioned Ash Ketchum in one chapter, I don't think it would be too much of a digression to have them in a chapter, even if they're minor characters.

    I love the way you've portrayed Pokemon and the world that they exist in; you've made it so 3-dimensional. I'm never going to play the games again, since they would be too much of a letdown after Sinners. :P

    Thanks a lot, keep up the great work.


    PS. I have a Gardevoir in Pokemon Emerald. It knows Thunderbolt. :)
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  • From ANON - The guy laughing hysterically at "did I mention your grandmother to a cactus!" on March 22, 2010
    Sinners is awesome and I can't wait for the next chapter, the demon stirs I think you said it would be. I'm almost dying of anticipation, hurry!
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  • From ANON - Hallation on March 09, 2010
    So you played EarthBound, huh? Classic game.

    Not that I want to delay Sinners further, but you should also look into Mother 3. It's also excellent.
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  • From ANON - Hallation on February 10, 2010
    I'm actually quite pleased with this chapter. Kiako(past)'s motivations are excellently built and much better than the "I'm better than god/I rule therefore I SHOULD rule" that he had going.

    The Shadow being a pokemon (or some sort of primordial uber-pokemon-like entity) is a bit of a minus, though. I never liked never-ending-absolute-chaos having an avatar, as it's contradictory to the concept of Chaos itself. Unless it's more of an appointed-avatar, like Nyarlathotep (who doesn't have a fit form anyway). I understand canon be damned, but Darkrai was also a dark-is-not-evil type of thing in Pokemon.
    What IS Darkrai's motivation, anyway? Return all to the chaos?

    Oh, and that Regigigas pic can be found here instead.
    http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=534331
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  • From ANON - emiya on February 08, 2010
    very intersting story it has been along time since i ever read/played anything like this that could make me think abot the story like this, the only other one that made think like this was fate stay/night have you ever played that?
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  • From ANON - SF on February 08, 2010
    Wow!! Awesome!!
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  • From ANON - Max on February 08, 2010
    Good to see some more after the long hiatus, moar is, as always, appreciated.
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  • From ANON - soundwave on February 07, 2010
    wow greate work took a wile to post but the wait was worth it i like how you put kiako now the quetion is will he tried to avoid his predacesors fate or repeit the sycle of pain good work can't wait
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  • From ANON - Mors Mortis on February 07, 2010
    nice, i think i know who the wrathful god is. Also i like what you've done by making Darkrai the shadow, but doesn't that make Cresselia mor epowerful than Arceus?
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