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Reviews for Shades of Mystification

By : Hellagoddess
  • From ANON - Anon on June 02, 2008
    i looooved iiiit!!! XD and totally understandable as to you wont be able to update....still can't wait till the next chappy!!! ^.^
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  • From Yuikey on June 02, 2008
    Poor Raito glad L save him before anything happen. (>_
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  • From ANON - shandy on June 02, 2008
    oh this is nice. i have no words really, all i can say is that i have rarely encountered afic i have enjoyed so thoroughly. and the vid on youtube was pure genius.
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  • From LamicaLee on June 01, 2008
    Raito: Oh look Ducks!

    L:... o.o;?

    *Ducks come closer*

    L: *Flails arms* Get away from my fooooood!!! *Flails arms more*

    *5 minutes later*

    Raito: Huh?

    L: Grr... *Punch* Get away from my Raitoooooo!!!! *Punches more*

    hahaha that was great! L♥ved it! Can't wait for more xD
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  • From ANON - flatpop-chan on May 29, 2008
    OH MY GOD, THE DUCKS!! D:

    Violent L is funny ^^
    I love this story!
    Please write the next chapter ASAP! :D
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  • From Dotowe on May 29, 2008
    I am not, by any stretch of the imagination, fluent in Japanese. But I did know the word koibito and actually gasped, outloud--in fact, very loudly--when Mikami said it. I was already on edge, as I'm sure L and Light were, when Mikami sat down on their blanket and preceded to touch Raito. I was so loud, in fact, that my co-workers were concerned and I had to come up with a quickly formulated and quite clever lie to sate them. I failed, fo course, and even as I'm writing this review, they're staring at me cross-eyed.

    *coughs* THIS IS MY FAVORITE CHAPTER SO FAR!

    I doubled over in silent laughter when L went on about "if you neccessitate sunlight we can eat by the window" thing. That was soooo funny to me. And what sold L was being able to walk around without shoes! And the duck scene! THE DUCK SCENE! This chapter was pure magic! I want more like this one!

    And then L totally kicks Mikami's ass! And I thought you wrote it perfectly, by the way. Sometimes, what you don't say is more powerful. I really liked that we didn't get to hear all of what L whispered to Mikami, only Mikami's reaction to it. It made L seem twice as dangerous and lethal to me. I loved it. Came out of no where, and I loved it. Man! I can't wait for Near to wander back into the story, if this is the kind of L we're going to see when their happiness is threatened!

    Joie and Peaches!
    Gloria
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  • From ANON - Evermist on May 28, 2008
    ^3^ I've been meaning to read this for a couple weeks now, and I finally started it yesterday. It's so good! I loved the duck-chasing scene. Made me laugh. :D Can't wait for next week's chapter! Keep it up!
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  • From ninetailedfoxx852 on May 27, 2008
    aw! i loved this chapter! especially the part about the ducks!-- i totally cannot picture L doing that and thats what made it so dang great!! XD and hooray for love triangles! cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter! X3
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  • From amenochikara on May 27, 2008
    I haven't reviewed in weeks and I am so sorry @______@ I've been reading, but haven't had the time to review (I get the chapter and then get off the internet. Gr.) So...

    Chapter 16

    Gifts?! Haha- I'm interested to see where you're going with the gifts. Even though I feel like I'm so rooted in Japanese culture, I had never heard of those chocolates. Haha. Nor had I heard of the puzzle ring... Oh, L, you possessive man...

    Chapter 17

    Short =( I'm sad I didn't get to see the original chapter. I did like this a lot... hmmm... a "god among men." I bet you it's Mikami! (Well, you know and I don't... haha) Jealous!L is totally legit, for the record.

    Now! To read and review chapter 18 and beg for hella's forgiveness for not reviewing ;_____;

    Chapter 18

    Opening paragraph= love. It's the perfect example of why I am simply in love with your writing. Perfect in character imagery with a slight twinge of humor. Haha. Aaaand L is being a house mouse again. I love his response! Haha. I'm surprised L isn't all OCD about the paint spots... of course, cleanliness wasn't exactly L's obsession. As for using chess terms-- very classy. Very Death Note. =3

    I can just imagine the bypassers' faces as they set sights on L's.... bounty. Haha. And-- awwww.... Raito is thinking about being with L forever... @_@ Awwww...

    Duck! This scene made me beam. And ha! It IS Mikami. I feel cool for some reason >_> Hahahaa-- It's so Mikami. Worshipping Raito's every step.

    Hurray! Sorry this is my first review in weeks... man, I miss being up at school ;_;
    ~Ame
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  • From ThePhantomSockPuppet on May 27, 2008
    Jealous L! You are the MASTER, Hellagoddess.
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  • From ANON - Din on May 27, 2008
    Let me just say that I thought that was a great fight scene, and how DARE Mikami!!!! What a perve! The only pervert I idoLize is L! Mikami is just plain creepy! I loved how you played the possessive L! Way to go, I can't wait till the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on May 27, 2008
    No need to apologize. I love the mental image of L staring at the ducks and chasing them away. It was very amusing. Thank you for updating once more.
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  • From ANON - Kitsuna on May 27, 2008
    *is rolling on floor laughing ass off* I love it! POSSESSIVE L IS JUST FUCKING AWESOME! It was great, I was wondering when he'd snap. Mikami... Always good for a delusional over obsessive romp...
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  • From ANON - lonelydove on May 27, 2008
    muahahahahaha that was funny XD CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPPY!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Katharine Schaefer on May 27, 2008
    How dare Mikami touch Raito?! Raito belongs only to L!!!!!!! hmmm, I shall have to go punish him for that...vigorously ;)

    hehehe, I just knew L was gonna chase the ducks. I do that all the time too! (yeah, people stare)

    Good job as always! Please write the net chapter soon!!!!

    ~Amaya-chan~
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