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Reviews for Bobbing for Apples

By : PureFluff
  • From animekid on September 12, 2008
    bah you're nutter than me

    well it was a trill but damm you and your open writing....it leaves a taste in my mouth

    still good show; there were parts that made me go 'mmmmm dammit that made no sense!' but it was fixed...later on

    well...well.....*shrug*

    just make more stuffu
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  • From animekid on September 12, 2008
    mello raping near....

    ............

    try MeroNia MAX (sp?) doujinshi; it has mello raping near smexing

    but besides that.....haven't reviewed in a while >< sorry. Still reading this off and on and it's just a new twist without completly mental raito in thiz XP

    I personally own a crapload of death note doujinshi...

    still good story
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  • From SParker on July 28, 2008
    about #12...

    This chapter ACTUALLY pushed me to sign-in..and I don't like signing in!

    I loved how it ended with the conversation between the two before L [who has a
    pretty last name] laid the ''whammy'' on Light/Raito. :-)

    Now, I wonder what will you do for an encore. Personally, IF you ever decide for
    a Part II or sequel, I would bring them back full circle to Japan, as a test of
    faith & willpower. Can Light/Raito resist temptation?

    By the way, what's up with you & the freakin' stairs???
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  • From Kuragari75 on July 10, 2008
    wow.... after the last two chapters that's all I can say... wow... Anyway, love it!!!! totally love it!!! can't wait for the next chapter! I would vastly appreciate it if you could send me a notification so I don't miss it? PLEASE!? e-mail: leobdollin75@yahoo.com. love it!
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  • From ninetailedfoxx852 on June 15, 2008
    omg! i am completely in love with this story-- read the whole thing in one go! XD i almost cried when Light wrote down L's name! and then i cried again (but out of happiness) when he appeared in that doorway! this story has so many suspenseful moments i dont think that my heart can take it! XD cant wait for the next update!
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  • From spoon10488 on June 11, 2008
    Awwwe so cute. I feared the worst after Light writing L's name, but I like the way this turned out. I can't wait to read more.
    =)
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  • From spoon10488 on May 17, 2008
    Awesome chapter. I can't wait to find out why the death note didn't work.
    =)
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  • From lexjamandme on May 14, 2008
    Well... I'm glad he's not dead but at the same time... how's Raito going to talk himself out of that I wonder. "Ah, so yeah, I tried to kill you. About that... how are you here again. And... ah... forgive me... I know not what I do?"
    As always, looking forward to more.
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  • From spoon10488 on May 06, 2008
    Awesome chapters. Very hot lemon. I like the house and the house arrest/kidnapping thing. Can't wait to read more.
    =)
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  • From choticati on May 01, 2008
    I really love your story since the beginninng! Did really Light doubt the gender of L?
    Anyway the lemon was really hot!
    let's see what will happen next...
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  • From PlantangelJchan on May 01, 2008
    Yay good chapter and nice plot twist at the end. Keeps things interesting. Maybe they'll get to some angry sex soon. Angry sex is fun. ^_^

    -L
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  • From animekid on April 29, 2008
    still reading this in spurts but it's still funny how L thinks of everything

    hope you get over those stupid writing/net issues :3
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  • From spoon10488 on April 28, 2008
    Awwwe. Poor L, poor Raito. So close and yet so far. I liked how he found Whammy's though.
    =)
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  • From spoon10488 on April 21, 2008
    Awwweee... poor L. I feel bad for him. I hope Light finds him soon. I can't wait for the nest chapter.
    =)
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  • From lexjamandme on April 21, 2008
    Awwww... that was probably the best ever inner-L monologue I can remember reading. Perfect. Looking forward to more.
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