Reviews for My Life

BY : Jez Morgan

  • From ANON - loops on March 06, 2010

    it's an interesting idea, but doesn't read like a finished work. it's more like your outline. each paragraph could be it's own chapter. begin with his history and then flash forward to when Yuki starts to suspect. what are they doing? why is there no dialog until the end of the 2nd chapter?

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  • From eleniofme on October 30, 2009

    great story update soon if possible

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  • From chochowilliams on May 22, 2008

    Nice start. Like it.

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