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Reviews for Ragnarok

By : puffball64
  • From the42jabberwocky on January 18, 2010
    Looks like my next two cents comes quicker than expected. A very good chapter. Makes me wonder if I should have dealt with the past first instead of going for the present in mine. I know I shouldn't be comparing the two, but I can't help it. It's clear from reading your story so far and one other, that mine may need a complete overhaul. I really like how your spending time filling in the past gaps for our little minds to go WOW at. I shall continue on and see what the rest of this wonderful tale has to tell.
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  • From the42jabberwocky on January 18, 2010
    Due to your review I have decided to take a look see at what you have done here...I must say it is a lot better than what I have for an opening. I am intrigued and wish to read more and shall do so. I am a solid reviewer as that is how I started out so here goes. The opening in log form is very well done, your grasp on emotions and first person perspective is quite good. It's clear that this isn't going to be the happy hunky dory pokemon style we see in the anime or manga. The foundation for future chapters is laid out, and cemented so you have a solid base to build your story off of. I only noticed one grammatical error at the very beginning but quickly stopped paying attention to specifics as I got wrapped up in the characters and feelings of the log entries. I shall continue reading and give my two cents when I feel its necessary. I'm glad someone with your skill reviewed for me, I'm filled with a sense of awe.
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  • From FireBlaster on December 25, 2009
    An update! Balls yeah! Someone finally replaced me! XD

    Very nice though. I love reading people's Christmas chapters.
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  • From ANON - Mors Mortis on December 10, 2009
    despite my somewhat critical review earlier i must admit this is brilliantly written snd i can't wait for the next chapter.

    i apologise if i was too critical but changing the plotline of the original fiction i s a pet hate of mine ever since my first story got flamed constantly for creating a character stronger than the original

    keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Mors Mortis on December 10, 2009
    no offence but Cynthia being beaten is pretty unbelieveable, i've played Platinum and even a few months since completing she still provides a reasonable challenge, and Cyrus is not a very good trainer anyway and the rest of tema galactic are worse still
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  • From daveb on November 30, 2009
    Excellent. Am I sensing a Lyn/Jerry pairing? Because I was really hoping for Noah/Lyn.
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  • From aragdoll on November 26, 2009
    Fantastic. There's never been a time where it hasn't been worth the wait C:
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  • From aragdoll on November 01, 2009
    C'mon espyyyyy, don't leave us hanging!
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  • From daveb on September 23, 2009
    Amazing as always. Well worth the wait.
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  • From aragdoll on September 13, 2009
    Fantastic :3

    Your characters are just so natural and believable, I never get sick of reading about them.

    Obligatory "moar"!
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  • From aragdoll on August 23, 2009
    Come back to us Espy ;-;
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  • From ANON - ragdoll on July 13, 2009
    Master of fight scenes as usual.

    Sorry about the late review - capcha doesn't work on my PSP.

    Anyways, great update and looking forward to more.

    Current Capcha: Courier Brock.
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  • From Perfect Purity on May 14, 2009
    Update yay!!!!!!!

    Nice to see Lyn finally introduced into the story... things are certainly getting interesting. This blackness has some crazy properties...

    I anxiously await the next installment. :D
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  • From on May 06, 2009
    Damn Arbok. When I read it was a snake I was sure it would be a Seviper, if only because of the Zangoose/Seviper thing.

    I'm starting to see how the "plate" thing works. I'm guessing each elemental plate is going to have a "guardian" of that type, probably set in place by the same people that hired the Pikachu guy to snuff out the legendary birds? And the plates are the key to Arceus?

    Oh, I'm rambling again. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Ragdoll on April 26, 2009
    Good to hear from you, Espy. Looking forward to the next update.
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