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Reviews for Ragnarok

By : puffball64
  • From ANON - Ragdoll on March 15, 2009
    Really looking for that next update, Espy!
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  • From daveb on March 10, 2009
    My joint favourite Pokemon fic, along with Sinners and Equilibrium. Please continue soon.
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  • From Perfect Purity on February 02, 2009
    Hello! Good to see you've updated! It was nice to get back into this story after a break. Very strange things happening...

    Also I'm wondering now if the pairing will be Noah/Luna or Noah/Lyn. Or perhaps you'll throw us a curve ball and do Luna/Lyn, lol.

    Until next time =D
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  • From Perfect Purity on November 17, 2008
    I almost didn't review because I was gonna say the same stuff as before - awesome read.

    I, too, was amused by the word choice in Noah's description. :]
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  • From ANON - Ragdoll on November 15, 2008
    I love this story :3
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  • From FireBlaster on November 14, 2008
    You already know how I feel on the story, it's awesome. lol

    I'm just commenting so you don't forget... That word choice for "Well endowed"... makes me laugh every time.

    I can't believe you never thought about it like that... :P
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  • From Revu on November 14, 2008
    Wow, this is turning out to be very entertaining. I'd say you're an excellent writer, but that would be an understatement in this case. You've put just such exquisite detail and time into your story, it really makes it special. I just finished reading over all the chapters posted so far so I'll try and fit go over a few things overall for the story.

    The development you've poured into Noah really takes him out of the pages and makes him feel more real. My heart has gone out to him during his times of trauma and at the same time I've wanted to slap him and make him talk about his dilemmas so he can get over them already. It's obvious he just bottles things in way too much. I'll admit I almost shut the story off when it reached the part that Noah shut himself away for three years but looking past it I saw that the way he drags the problem out just adds more to his character From the looks of things it won't be changing any time soon.

    The way you depict the danger in the story also feels very intense. Beyond the graphic zombie like gore even. And on that note I could help but unscramble the language before reading past those parts... Freeeeaaaaky...

    You've also got some many things going on at the same time. I'll come clean and say I've never played the diamond/pearl games and had no idea about Team Galaxy or their leader Cyrus until the interest in your story made me go research them. What I found out about them ate away a small piece of my soul... but that's for a different story. Then there's this secret society behind High Noon with their mysterious and powerful leader, not to mention this new character who just appeared in the latest chapter. I wanted really bad to throw in my wager on who I think they are... but I'll refrain for now.

    As always time is enemy to us all. I hope you find the time to continue giving this story the affection you've poured forth thus far. I can tell it will be amazing!
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  • From ANON - Ragdoll on October 28, 2008
    Please more ;-;
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  • From ANON - ragdoll on October 13, 2008
    Waaaarrgh we want moar!
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  • From Perfect Purity on October 07, 2008
    Nice addition. I noticed a few grammar errors, such as passed/past and there/their, I think. Also, "criteria" is plural; the singular form is "criterion."

    Other than that, looks great! :>
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  • From ANON - Ragdoll on October 02, 2008
    Excellent. As always. I look forward to chapter 10 (:
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  • From ANON - Ragdoll on September 26, 2008
    Warrrg moar damnit.
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  • From Perfect Purity on September 08, 2008
    Hey, finally getting a chance to leave a review. I read the chapter a couple days ago.

    ...don't really know what to say. Good stuff, as usual. Can't wait for the next action-packed installment :D
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  • From ANON - Ragdoll on September 07, 2008
    Awesome chapter - keep them coming :D
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  • From ANON - Ragdoll on August 16, 2008
    Loving the way these two characters interract. I never expected the love interest to be a Zangoose :P

    This story really should have more exposure than it does, though I suppose when the lemon starts flowing, it'll find it's way onto a chan and the chan will find its way here.

    Every Anon loves pokemon, no matter how much they yell about it :P

    Also, damn your education. Write this full time pl0x.
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