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By : LovelessAngel23
  • From ANON - Azzy on August 20, 2014
    Oh god. PLEASE tell me you'll read this. I need you to keep on writing. please tell me you have another account and continued to write. You are just so good.... it's the first time i read fanfics so authentic.
    Tell me you'll keep on, i'll even draw for you if you like T___T
    We think so alike, i really like you!
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  • From ANON - anon on October 28, 2012
    your story is listed twice just so you know
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  • From bookworm4ever81 on December 15, 2011
    This was really sexy and I loved it. I think Kaname is getting in a little over his head if he actually called Zero his. I can't wait to see where this is going. Please update soon.
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  • From sachihaku on March 19, 2011
    good one
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  • From runoutofaname on August 02, 2010
    I love it! Keep it up. =)
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  • From JADEPRINCESS on May 14, 2010
    Wow!!! that's all I can say. Oh and it's a good wow lol ; ) You're very creative please write more on this
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  • From wiper on December 25, 2009
    i must say this is very good .o) even the M/M is sexy in this fic and i dont like read M/M .o)
    please continue
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  • From EverSearching on December 09, 2009
    Ooo! I have an idea! Why don't you have Kaname cut Yuki's neck lightly and that draws him in to join in on the fun. Lots of reluctance and second guessing, but Kaname is controlling him with the bloodlust? Lots of coaxing. I doubt, though that Yuuki would need a lot. She practically does anything Kaname tells her to. This was a great story. Kepp writing please!
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  • From KristopherRothschilde on November 16, 2009
    The story so far is pretty decent as far as writing goes. Originality is a bit eh, but that's to be expected with using characters of another artist or author. I must commend the author however, for putting in some ideas that I myself had wanted to see from the beginning. The creative use of blood lust bringing on about a sexual lust, though a common idea, is normally described in most narrations I've read, but rather hinted at, or vice versa, the sexual lust brings on the blood lust. I'm enjoying the short story so far, but a bit of constructive criticism, some of the sentence structure is repetitive, but by no means detracts from the over all feel of the plot. Kudos to the author for being the first fan fic author in a while to keep my attention for more than a chapter. I look forward to the next one.
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  • From Darkesthour on November 04, 2009
    I'm thinkin... Zero should Join in... >:D
    Very good story and very well written. Keep it up! and I'm looking forward to the next chapter up soon?
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  • From sandyroses08 on October 28, 2009
    I would have to vote on ZERO joining.
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  • From phoenix682 on October 10, 2009
    Just wanted to let you know how much I am enjoyng this story. Love the interaction between characters and the sexual tension. Had to get out the chips to keep reading. What a place to end the story I hope that there is more.
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  • From aluguts on September 21, 2009
    2 and 4
    Zero watches and then joins in.
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  • From MissAimi on September 03, 2009
    I'd rather Zero get pissed and storm out, more in character you know=)

    love your story! cant wait to see what you decided=)
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  • From aherohasfallen on August 15, 2009
    What I've read is great so far. But please spell YUUKI's name correctly, it's not yukki. Sorry when I'm reading I want to call her yuck-y because of your misspelling. But the story is great do far.
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