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Reviews for Return to the Labyrinth

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  • From KaterinaJade on September 30, 2013
    Long time fan, first time reviewer. (I think. I don't remember if I reviewed your more PG-rated stories on ff.net) First, can I say how immensely talented you are? Really, not trying to be creepy or anything, but I find your fanfics to be more engaging, entertaining, and challenging than a lot of published NOVELS I've read. And I like to think I've read a fair few.

    While PS stands far and above my favorite work of yours - for the beautiful character development and romance - Labyrinth, and especially Return to the Labyrinth, have captured my heart and imagination as well. Partly because of their association with a beloved film from my childhood, but mostly because of how the sequel delves so far beyond it, becoming its own creature entirely.

    Which brings me to the point: I am ABSOLUTELY okay with a second sequel. As much as I love Touya and Yue together, I feel satisfied with their resolution in this story. Sakura's and Syaoran's however, still feels unfinished to me. Partly because while I was enraptured by Syaoran's devotion and fidelity to his feelings for Sakura, SAKURA'S feelings toward him changed just a bit too suddenly to be considered as seamless a development as in some of your other stories. Perhaps in the third installment, they could be explored more thoroughly? Anyway, to prevent this review from rambling anymore than it already has, I just want to say, thank you for what you do. This is me adding my voice to the bunch clamoring for more. L3 please!
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  • From Cristle on April 07, 2012
    Hey, this is the one that sent you the message on FF.net! All I have to say is whoa. I absolutely adored this story! There were so many D'Aww moments between Sakura and Li that it wasn't even funny!

    I was a little worried about the ending to be honest, but I'm glad that you made it a Happy Ending for all, including Rai. I figured you'd end up making him not so evil in the end, but there's always the creeping in the back of ones own mind.

    Overall I rate this a 5 out of 5!! And if you still have the plot bunny issue then all I have to say is one thing.

    L3? Count me in!!
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  • From Jenmoon1 on February 28, 2012
    First of all I love all your storys so rich in details thanks so much for writing It
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  • From ANON - Mikomi on February 18, 2012
    I would love the see a sequal to this!! I Love Li and Sakura! Please for the love of god do it!!
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  • From ANON - PhantomAngelofMusic on October 17, 2010
    Hi hi! Me again. Loved Pleasure slave, loved L1, loved L2 and you must must must right an L3! I get your idea of it focusing more on Li and Sakura, but there has to be a way to fit Yue and Touya into the mix too. Ooh i know! What if while Li and Sakura are doing the political thing, Touya "vanishes" (i.e ish kidnapped)? (whip scenes abound?) I mean, first Sakura went missing, then Yue did, I think it's Touya's turn. Sakura's always vanishing. And what about more backstory on Clow? Another possible suggestion, and sorry about this Kero-chan, but Kero's so up and bouncy and happy, maybe a moment of drama or two for him? A (possibly but in the end not really) fatalistic wound and a touching scene for our two brothers? Na.. haha. Anyway,I'd love it if you could hit me up and we could swap ideas a bit.
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  • From ANON - Jessica on May 31, 2010
    I'm REALLY REALLY enjoying reading your fanfiction! I only just found this the other day. At first I nearly didn't want to read it after reading that Yue was into young men. (I never read your first Labyrinth... This is the first thing I ever read from this site. And having my first crush on Jarith from the movie from back in the day almost turned me off this story just on principle) But with the Japanese touches I kept on and am on Chapter 14 now... Very addicting. You're a good writer and I enjoy your comments at the end. I like that Sakura has wings, that rules... I really like how you've made it your own and given it your own things. Makes me wish I had read your other stuff to see what some of the comments are about, like where shield and the peacock are from outside of this story.
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  • From ANON - kettish on November 30, 2009
    Woo! Great story (as always) and I'm always up for Li/Sakura-centric pieces. :D Yes please!

    Loved Touya's riddle at the end there, btw. Totally knew what the question was. ;) Silly Yue!

    Peace, kettish.
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  • From vix111 on April 16, 2009
    It's been, oh so long...
    I can't believe it's taken me so long to sit down and give my final review of this story. But what can I say that has not been said before?
    The finale was epic. Everything about it. From the fight, to Touya's talk with Kaho, to the rough sex softened by that heart-wrenching display of affection at the end. Yet, the best of it all was when Touya cried of happiness! I do believe I haven't read him crying like that anywhere, and I've beeen reading fanfics for years.
    If you do decide to make a L3, you could always make Yue and Touya appear every now and then, mostly as comic relief (seriously, before he found Yue, that was Touya's role XDD). I wouldn't mind either way, it can all be SxS, as long as you tell us from the start that there won't be a TxY to hope for. It's easier for us, the fangirls :3

    It was a great sequel! I'll add you to mu LJ when I return to LJ land XDD
    I've been avoiding it like the plague -_-


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  • From Sairen on February 24, 2009
    I do hope you write a third installment, I love your Labyrinth series
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  • From SharaeNightWalker on February 20, 2009
    just found this story and loved it. please write the 3rd one???
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 13, 2009
    omg please do a third installment! i love your stories! and would love one centered around saku/syao
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  • From ANON - ayachan on February 04, 2009
    omg, I'm so happy to read that. Holy cow, that's adorable!
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  • From ANON - absinthe on February 02, 2009
    Yay!!! Brilliant, this was absolutely worth waiting for, and there should definiately be MORE. I would like to see the story of Li sorting out his relationship with Rai, and how Tomoyo fits in there, and so on.

    I wouldn't mind seeing more of Touya and Yue's story too though, I mean, I seriously doubt anything between them would ever be easy, and unless being in the labyrinth long term unlocks latent magic in Touya, he has one mother of a bullseye painted on him for anyone who wants to get at Yue...hint, hint. There is Fujitaka too, how is he going to react to his son basically dropping off the face of the planet to live in a magical kingdom with a stroppy guy with wings, and the sudden gaining of a 'son in law'. lol, you could always do a Douglas Adams; a trilogy in four (or five) parts!
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  • From ANON - Hinata's Twin on February 01, 2009
    OMG!!(fangirls crying) I can't believe RTL is over I'm so happy Touya stayed with Yue though. Yaaay. On a much more important note, I'm all for a trilogy you're such a good writer I'm sure you'll do just as well. And don't worry about the absence I blamed my brother, he's the reason for all the problems in the world. (holding a leash that leads to a boy in a cage) He won't be causing anymore trouble so go write the third installment, we're waiting.
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  • From ANON - cherrixwolf on January 31, 2009
    And another wonderful end ♥

    It was good to see Touya finally taking charge in the relationship (but still remain the uke), especially with his game for Yue. It really tied up their relationship well. That and Yue and Touya finally actually doing it.

    I can't help but wonder how Sakura's going to handle her little situation with her father haha

    Definitely did not know that Rai's appearance was based off Fakir! I'll keep that in mind though when I read the next installment ;D (For the record, I'll read anything that you write as long as you want to write it~)

    Thank you for all of your efforts, skills and time involved in bestowing the world with yet another amazing story ♥ ♥ ♥

    P.S. Did you know that there is an original english language manga called "Return to the Labyrinth" which is a sequel to the movie? I haven't read it but I already know that yours is far superior.
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