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By : amandatrue

From ANON - ILoveKuramaTooMuch on August 01, 2010
As I am nearing the end of this beautiful series, I just found about your intentions to make a fourth book of AH. Well, I am absolutely excited about it, since I don´t think I could ever part with your amazing mind in these chapters. I just have one plea to you: Please, I hope you will not attempt to make Iason and Riki married to women. I fear that could quite possibly ruin all the beauty about their love. Their fathers are surely great perverts, well, there is no need for two more of such kind (at least I think not). I don´t wanna offend you,just that after all those excellent twists and surprises I don´t feel like being able to process such an arrangement.
But the main thing is: You have written an excellent and very dynamic story, which I quite enjoyed reading. I can only hope you will continue soon. Thank you very much!
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From KatzeRaoul on March 07, 2010
Thanks for the update!! Looking forward to the site being up and book 4 coming into being!! *smiles*
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From barrie18 on March 07, 2010
Coffee and scones for the last time here m'lady.....

Well this is was the long awaited last chapter for this part of the story, and I'm truly glad that there is more to come, because even though this chapter was everything romantic, it still left alot of issues open and many things not covered. It also opened up new areas that will need to be explored when the next book gets up and running.

Except for Yousi and the good Doctor, none of the other characters have as of yet ever sat down and talked to their respective partner about the current past, the ancient past and the present they now find themselves in. Each and everyone of them skirt around the issues that if this were the absolute end should have been covered.

The prime example would be Yui and Raoul. Raoul now recalls, how he found Yui, he has seen Yui's awakening and knows now that he wasn't raped as he had thought, but he had still lost him, he still had been the one to find him, he still lost the plot and went out and killed the Elders responsible and had his mind locked away to get away from the pain. And during the next 50 years with no memory of Yui became Kai's lover. And yet he and Yui have not covered any of this. Somehow, somewhere, someone has to talk about what went on because surely there has to be some repercussions from these memories no matter how happy they are together now. I can understand that Yui being a new empath, hasn't picked up on this information and it wouldn't surprise me if Raoul is able to bury information deep within away from empathic searches. . .but surely somewhere the stray thought would be coming to the surface as he looks at him as memories randomly surface and the current past and ancient past merge. There is also the very real issue of Raoul's household....Yui is no longer an attendant.....where do they go from here?

The same goes for Riki and Iason...think about it. Yes, there was the spanking incident, but that almost became more a prank as Iason submitted to Riki to appease him. There is still the fact that those two haven't talked about the current past in which our now Prince was a mongrel virtually being kept as a slave to a Blondie. . .mind you I can almost except that one, because you could say that this time around Iason kept him chained by his side, because he wasn't going to risk him fleeing again as he did in their previous life....an action with no real meaning until you look at it knowing the facts, just the same sort of reasoning why Yousi went to Jupiter's matrix for no reason......

Yuri and Raiman also need 'talk' time. . .The love is there, but it would seem that there past is more convoluted than we first thought. If I've read this right, she and Raiman never really had satisfying physical relationships because she was considered too delicate to 'handle' him. That must have been very unsatisfying for them both and would have put a great strain on a marriage...almost makes you wonder how she became pregnant. No wonder I always felt that their marriage was more in the realm of romantic love rather than physical ala Scarlett Pimpernel, where they were happy to kiss the hem of m'lady's gown. And how unsatisfying again when the merry foursome got together. I'm sure there had to be moments when it wasn't just girl girl, boy boy, I can't see Kai and Erin not being 'earthy' in their carrying on's while Raiman restrained himself and Yuri was left with 'nothing'. . .

I can see alot of forshadowing here as well, as both Daryl and Raoul aren't too sure about having their empath lovers reading them on a full time basis. . . another issue that will have to be covered somewhere along the line, because I'm sure sometimes a stray thought will come to the surface that won't beable to be pushed aside by the empaths....as Erin has pointed out....no matter how you block it, someone thinking loudly is as good as a shout in your ear.

And now we discover that Raoul is also empathic but only with his twin. . .I'm trusting that you won't take that link to the dark side. . .

So after all that, it was a lovely chapter, but as I've pointed out... it may end the trilogy, but not the 'story'. I'll look forward to seeing the answers in the next book :)

Thanks for putting up with me, coffee, scones and all :) It was a wonderful adventure.
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From LuvLotsaYaoi on March 06, 2010
I must say, My Lady Untamed. This chapter was as expected beyond belief. I am looking forward to book 4 on you website, I will be there wearing a bell *Iason style* if necessary ;) For all who haven't read it yet be prepared for nose bleeds, it is just that good. Thanks for the awesome works XD!
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From barrie18 on February 04, 2010
Well m'lady, we are getting close to the last coffee chat, and yet, I still can't quite get my head around that there is only a part B left to go when there is still so much that has to be covered. . .

There are somethings in this chapter that give answers and yet at the same time makes us ask questions as well. The 4 parents sitting around saying that they are only going to remain in the background while the sons run the show is a prime example of this ploy. These 4 aren't exactly going to sit around and watch the flowers grow. Not with all the change that is about to take place, even if they are not running the show, I'm certain their influence will be abundant.

As to the spanking scene between Iason and Riki, and Riki's reaction, well that certainly moves us away from where this all started and yet still leaves us with the feeling that forgetting the spanking issue business, the Pet issue is going to play a more important role in the new regime. After all human nature dictates that there is bound to be a couple of idiots around who won't be able to forget that Prince Riki's present persona was not only that of a Mongrel, but a Pet as well. And that alone is enough to cause headaches and perhaps heartache in the new scheme of things.

I'm still not too certain about your new little empath and her husband, and what role they really are going to play. . .but then again maybe this is just a red herring for our imaginations to play on as this all comes to a close.

Needless to say, although a lot went on here as the Queens and their husbands find themselves together again, one gets the feeling that things are still not quite in balance as they work their way into the present. As Yuri put it, she really didn't get a chance to grieve, as she was immediately thrust into battle upon her awakening and although she is coping well now, we all know that sometimes unexpected emotions hit without warning.

Interestingly enough both sets of parents display concern over Riki and Iason's awakening, that they were alone when it happened to them. But in truth they weren't alone, because if I remember correctly it happened in the mind's eye to both of them at the same time. . . .once more it is going to be a learning curve for these 4 to realize that because of the experiences of this present life time, these are not the boys they raised. The memories might be there, but experience is a hard thing to leave behind.

So lets finish off our coffee and scones for now and I'll meet you soon for our last coffee :)

A chapter well worth the wait.....

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From LuvLotsaYaoi on February 02, 2010
Hey my Lady Untamed,

I have a few questions first.
What happened the the elder twins "Wyl & Wei" and did "Katze" die? I know he boarded the ship with Erin and I totally forgot him until the end of the chapter upon entering the worm hole and the Amber glow reminded me of the restored, red head and his golden amber eyes. Also I didn't know that there was a second set of elder twins so I miss the mischievous, "young" elders (knowing they aren't really young).

Now that my questions are done I have to say this, first and foremost. "YAY RIKI!" Iason had it coming and I laughed my ass off over the irony. What would have made it oh so delicious would have been a spanking for the unbelievably well built, undeniably sexy, golden-blue eyed, Blondie prince. As for Riki though my heart goes out to him, I feel that he has remembered something from his past or "saw" another echo that is weighing on his own current life's trauma. I hope Iason can come to terms with the amount of pain he cause Riki before it is too late (again). And also is Elder Simon Simone doing well after the battle and did he stay on Yasuo or are they traveling with him in the brig?

I am soooooooooooooo happy you decided to continue writing this story and look forward to the next chapter.

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From KatzeRaoul on January 13, 2010
Sweet, can't wait for the next chappie!!*smiles* And sorry for the ubber short review, I am BEYOND lazy right now. *smiles sheepishly*
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From barrie18 on January 11, 2010
Passes over the usual coffee and scones. . .

Well m'lady, there are certain things about this chapter which don't add to a conclusion.

When a story comes to an end, usually the characters we know are rounded up and we see what is going on in their lives at a point where we can walk away. Since we are one chapter away from the end, I find it very curious that two new characters have been introduced. ..Ai and Elan. And to coin an old phrase....I'm willing to be my sweet bippy that there is more to their coming to join the Mink household than meets the eye. Infact, I am willing to go so far as to say that somehow Ai is going to have Iason's heir. . . But once again.....next to last chapter.......doesn't add up.'

Leaving 'the end' for the moment (passing the scones), lets go back to the beginning of the chapter.

Jupiter is becoming more and more complex/human now that she has left her A1 behaviour. We know that she always had a soft spot for Iason her best and first, and it would seem her creator as well. But I would imagine that there will be a couple of teething issues along the way as well, as the New Amoi is created. Even though she will be the 4th Clan, and this Reconstruction is all her doing, the current Amoi, including Furniture, Pets and Elites was also her creation. I would really like to here how she explains all that to the 4 Royals. Order? Control? And even though she says she wants to return Amoi to what it was, that would mean getting rid of just about everything that she had established. . . wouldn't that also be a condemnation of what she did to make sure Amoi survived? I would imagine a few heated discussions, as the 4 Clans compromise on certain issues. Because the past can't be completely reclaimed and the present can't be entirely wiped out either.

And it would seem that Yui's father is to join the crew as well at some point. . . .does that mean his mother or rather step mother won't be far behind? I think I'm a bit annoyed with you that there was only a swift glance of Raoul and Yui in the previous chapter and none in this one at all. . . So although I don't expect to see a "meet the parents' senario" in the last chapter, I just wonder would anyone think of telling Yui, that he too is about to regain his ancient family? And what would Yui's role be. . . his Attendant Days are over. And I can't see him sitting at home playing with the cat while Raoul is out protecting Kai. . . .

Of course we then have the reunion of the Royals. Raimen's words to Yuri were pure Scarlett Pimpernel. . . all Romance and Purity. . .right down to worship as he kissed the hem of her dress. Of course Kai and Erin's was also warm, but I have to admit I'm still confused over what they were to each other in the past. But no matter, at least this time around, she will be more his strength than his decoration. . . and I would say that Raimen has a few shocks in store when it comes to Yuri.

I think you were spot on in Heiku and Yousi. Never together in the past, and problems galore in the present. And yet Ancient Yousi was able to make that jump to the present and acknowledge the doctor as his lover straight away, once he was fully awakened.

All in all except for the questions at the begining, a chapter that signals the end is near. . .So with one more chapter to go.....thanks for the joining me once again for a coffee, scones and chat...

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From KotoriSensei on January 11, 2010
Hey there!!! Nice to see you around again! Well, a very happy and sensual chapter, eh? Jijijiji. Nice you mostly dedicate it to the Royal couples, who by the way, deserve it.
The new characters (the young couple) what will be their rol? Don't know why, but my memory fly to that moment of Eiri thinking about Riki's children....no? Maybe...but somehow i can't think of them two with someone else...i don't want it!!! Women or men, they can be just with each other...T-T
Jijiji, or maybe it just my cazy imagination searching for bad things now that everything is peace and love...
See ya on next chapter!!!!
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From KatzeRaoul on December 25, 2009
Yay!! Everyone is reunited and it feels so good!!*giggles* I'm glad that that is over now lets get home so Iason can do HIS thing and bring everyone that was saved back to life!!*woot*
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From barrie18 on December 24, 2009
Seasons Greetings m’lady. . .eggnog or coffee??? And of course blueberry scones as per normal. . . :)

‘Sigh’, it really is hard to believe that this is coming to an end, but before a true end is reached, even in Victory, there is sadness. Sorrow for the dead, the innocents and perhaps even for the enemy. I’m not surprised that Simon is forgiven, although I do find Kai’s reaction the more realistic. However, he too, goes along with the group and helps to heal him. However, it is very hard to give up all your beliefs, when that is what you were raised with, so it would be interesting if sometime, somewhere, we see if Simon has changed completely, or if this is just a momentary thing. As we know, people do have a way of talking themselves out of things as well as into.

But there is more sadness here, as Yasuo faces a reformation of its society. The ‘innocent’ who sided with the Elders destroy themselves for whatever reason they have. As seen through Theo’s eyes this is a tragedy, but then again, Theo sees the world in a different way, and I would wonder does the remaining population also mourn those who died because they felt there was no place for them in this new order? Or is it something best pushed aside and lets get on with the business of rebuilding and creating a new life.

Getting away from the social aspects of this chapter, I would have a quick look at our Royal quartet.

To be blunt. . .I’m finding Kai and Raimen, for all their peacocking and strutting around, (excuse the vernacular) piss fart weak. . . rofl

Yes, Raimen has survivor syndrome. . but Yuri who lived for centuries in a war is the one who gives him comfort. It is she who gives him strength to face their reunion and get past it all.
Then we have Kai, (heavy heavy sigh) he has fought in the wars and has been affected by all the death and destruction around him. And now we find out yet again, someone has died saving him. . .If you really want to do a head count, it all started with Erin. . .Raimen was trying to kill Kai when she jumped in to separate them, and accident or not, she died protecting Kai. . .
So Erin who did not fight, who died as the war virtually started, is the one who has to help her lord as he is faced with how the good doctor died and what took place a seconds later.

The Queens haven’t flinched once in all of this, while the men quiver and shake with every memory or guilty thought that comes their way. Is it any wonder then, that half the time they act like buffoons(except when faced with a crisis), while the other half is spent in bedroom antics. These two men have more issues than most and for exactly opposite reasons.

Riki and Iason. . .well at the moment, they are at peace, so I am happy to leave them to their own little world. .

And as to Yui & Raoul, well a few things there that still need to be said, but lovely to see that they are at least now on the same page.

However, in the name of ‘true’ romance (quite different from true love) whatever revelations take place next, or what ever celebrations you create. . .Omi (as I’ve said before) deserves that dance with his Queen. He and Yuri have developed a relationship I would think similar to the courts of Eleanor of Aquitaine, where a knight would sigh over his lady fair’s smile. And that would be enough for the two of them.

So here’s to Happy Endings and Happy Times. . . looking forward to the celebrations. . .

And thanks for sharing another coffee with me :)

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From KotoriSensei on December 24, 2009
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! I JUST GETTING OUT TO BUY SOME STUFFS AND...YOU POST A NEW CHAPTER!!! T-T
I'LL GO QUICKLY AND COMEBACK RUNNING LIKE NUTS!!!!
PD: THIS LITTLE REVIEW IS JUST IN CASE, TO WISH YOU A MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!! (If you dont belive in that just ignore me...)
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From KatzeRaoul on December 07, 2009
Yay, it's finally over, everyone is where they are to be and are safe!! Now we just need to go home and start the prossess of bring the women back. Thanks for the update, can't wait to read the last chapter for this book!! Oh you need to go back and fix Shinjo' name....you go from calling him Elder Shinjo to Elder Shinto.
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From Tlynn on December 07, 2009
Yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy! Everyone back together! Happy, Happy.
Now lots and lots (and lots) of sex!
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From barrie18 on December 07, 2009
Coffee and scones as per normal m'lady?

Well battle scenes are tricksy things because most of the time its action action action and very little of the human element comes across. And it is also a very clever general (author) who knows where all the troops are in the helter skelter of battle.

The action was exciting, plenty of drama, and all our heroes were all front and center playing their part. (even the insane twins got an honorable mention :) )

But what is always the core of your tales even though it wasn't the main focus here, the character interaction was a joy.

Omi and Argent are a curious pair. Was it planned that their 'powers' are the opposite to their natures. I've always thought of Omi as an emotional being, that he hides behind humor and lust shoots off ice blaststs. And Argent who always seems quiet and reserved, cool and collected is the master of fire. Contrast indeed.

Of course the girls are in the mix and Yuri's mouth, let alone her attitude, is going to make life interesting on Amoi. I know Erin was always the fireball, but I can see Yuri also hurling items at her spouse and his partner when displeased with them. . .I think Raimen is going to have to do some major rethinking about his Queen. Because he is no longer dealing with a pretty doll, but a full fledged commando.

(more coffee m'dear?)

As to Raoul and Yui, yes, they held their own on the battle fields, but I do have to admit, I would have liked to see Raoul's face and reaction to seeing Yui in battle. . .I know he knows what Yui did in the past, but even then I believe he saw it more as a subterfuge role as a protector rather than outright battle. As we know there is knowing something, and Knowing something. And I think seeing Yui in action would have dispelled a few ideas he has about him past and present.

(passes more scones)
As to only one more chapter to go. . .Well m'lady, unless it is an epic chapter, or you plan to cut things out, I really can't see it being the last chapter.

Ok, even if you only mention the party on Yasuo (which I keep picturing like the original ending for Return of the Jedi) you still have to get every one back on board the ships. . .and back to Amoi.

Now that sounds easy, but you are dealing with a bunch of horney buggers here, and if they are all at it, what chances are of the ship blowing up in space? Are you separating the girls from the boys on the way home. Because the boys will want to celebrate in their own style (and probably with some of the crew as well) And the girls probably want a chance for their own little reunion as they really haven't had much of a chance of being together.

But once back on Amoi. . oh dear. . .I keep seeing Erin and Yuri wanting a bit of private time with their respective spouses before things get back to normal. And would this take place beind closed doors, or are we allowed a peak in? And although Kai and Raimen are happy to have the girls back, they are going to have to learn to go back to fitting them into their lives again. These two have been 'happy horny lovers' for awhile now, no married partners in the background demanding attention as well. . . it will be a relearning experience for all of them.

And then of course their is Yui and Raoul. . .Yui missed Raoul's awakening, and even though being together is healing, a nightmare or two from Raoul would probably be appropriate, as there are still things to 'discuss'.

(keeps passing that coffee)
Oh by the way. . .while I was waiting ever so patiently for this chapter (rofl over that one) I perused back and confirmed that Yui has parents. And it sounds as if they are alive, as he took the Furniture position to make sure they would be financially secure. Also note. . the last name is Fai. . .past and present Yui's surname. Decendent's perhaps of that family that survived the war of that time? (damn, now I keep thinking of Meet the Parents 2. .. when all the inlaws meet for the first time :) )

So far I haven't even mentioned Riki and Iason. . well what's to say when you are dealing with a team that defies all boundaries. . .even that Echo in Time that seemed unbeatable, can't stand against them. So yes, they too deserve their moment of Romance in that 'last' chapter.'

Pulse to add to your headache. .. you can't ignore Iason's household. They too have loved ones who fought in the battle and need even a slight moment of reunion time. . . rofl. . . are you running towards the hills yet, screaming get this crazy woman away from me.. .

Well after handling a war and major battle scene, surely a major event as a Lord's Dance (hint hint) and everyone falling into loved ones arms, I'm sure a clever general as yourself, will be able to keep them under control so as not to blow up the planet.

Sigh. . .one more meeting over the coffee m'dear to go. . .sigh. . it was fun. . . :)
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