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Reviews for Fundamentally Human

By : KalyxandSoren
  • From promocat on October 26, 2011
    i like this-poor ciel wants sebastian -but he loves sebastian & wants the same in return
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  • From promocat on August 24, 2011
    good job!poor ciel is dancing on a very thin tightrope(thu not as thin as he thinks) & sebastian ia trying to get him off it!(pun intended!)
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  • From K8BNimble on August 13, 2011
    I think this is off to a fascinating start. You've been able to hold the characters well. There is also a lovely lyrical quality to the writing that works well in this fandom. I'm looking forward to reading more.
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  • From LadyLaran on August 08, 2011
    Oh dear...Sebastian should have overheard that one. Poor Ciel!
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  • From fantasyfabricator on August 08, 2011
    Excellent start! Passionate dialog and the characters seem true to their natures. I'm anxious to see where you take this tale and I'm looking forward to another chapter or more, if you decided to carry on with this tale.

    The only thing I caught was this line, "Of all the nativities!". Did you perhaps mean "naiveties"?

    Thank you so much for sharing your work with us!

    ~Necro
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