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Reviews for Mountain Storm

By : ShadowCat13
  • From ANON - Freddy on August 18, 2012
    This is a brilliant story
    However there are a few confusing mistakes in the epilogue like he pressed his check to the crock of her feathery neck wouldn't that be he pressed his cheek to the crook of her feathery neck?
    And this story could (and I stress could) be longer it's fine as it is but I believe that it could be better if it was longer

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  • From Twill on August 18, 2012
    Great story and I'm sad to see it done, but it was very good. Your writing could definitely benefit from some proofreading but it was an enjoyable read none the less. I hope you keep writing!
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  • From WhiteWolfMoonHowl on August 17, 2012
    THis is perhaps the best ending I've ever seen on a story. I'm just sad it is an ending. This was a wonderful story. -WWMH-
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  • From WhiteWolfMoonHowl on August 16, 2012
    Wow, this story is really getting good. I almost lost interest when Owen went back to civilization, but this chapter made me come back to the story. You are very talented, and this story is moving at a really good pace. I hope to read more soon.

    -WWMH-
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  • From Impstar on August 16, 2012
    That last bit was actually pretty touching. I eagerly await more updates, and even more relationship development.
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  • From ANON - Skunktail on August 04, 2012
    well i enjoy the story but i am sad that you say only 1 or two chapters left, i understand setting an end point is a good thing, allows for a more concrete story structure, but it just makes me sad knowing the end is near
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  • From Coelacanth on July 26, 2012
    I'm really enjoying this story so far. I really like the premise. There are 4-5 stories that I'm always happy to see updated, and yours is one of them.
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  • From NHarem on June 21, 2012
    oh man, I've just been waiting for a while now for the next chapter and it's driving me nuts! please tell me when you plan on posting the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Vero on May 15, 2012
    I'm really glad this story is still being written. I find it an interesting read that sucks me in. I love the intelligence of the Blaziken, and I enjoy reading the slow bonding between Owen and her. His reactions to everything are extremely believable. I really wish I could adequately describe just how much I enjoy this story. I just can't tell you how much I look forward to every future installment. I really do. Please don't stop writing Mountain Storm. It's too fascinating to die.
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  • From ANON - keoushe on May 11, 2012
    Believe it or not i read all the chapters and meant to write a review a while back but have been checking this story to see if the next chapter was up yet i can honestly say that i am anticipating the next chapter spelling grammar aside its a great story and well written if grammar is ignored for now any way but you'll probably get to that sooner or later but until then i'll be w8n.
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  • From WhiteWolfMoonHowl on April 30, 2012
    I love this story so far. You're doing a great job describing the scenes and the characters, and I like how you have them interacting with each other, especially the Combusken and the trouble maker Torchic. Keep it up ^_^
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  • From ANON - Crazycat on April 30, 2012
    Love your story! Im glad youre not just jumoing into the sex. After I read this chapter I gotta a funny image of an embarresed Owen seeing a blaziken courtsgip/mating and his blaziken being puzzled about his embarressment lol
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  • From Corsair420 on March 26, 2012
    This is a bit slow, but I'm interested to see where it's going, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - madbob on March 03, 2012
    the premise is really cool and i like where this is going but you really need to work on spelling and grammar because its really distracting and those kind of mistakes just take away from what could be a really good story if you put some time and effort into it
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