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Reviews for Black and White: New adventures

By : Nanapriss
  • From ANON - 1538-2S on February 18, 2013
    My apologies for the previously poor-written review. I know now that you can't really ask yoyr twin sister to write reviews for you.. besides from the horrible little faces she adds (which bug me by the way) she mispells my username.. Well, moving onto the story.. I almost forgot this fic existed.. Been waiting a long time for anothe chapter and I wasn't disapponted, but it was kinda cliché the fact that he has a ralts, that ,if i'm not wrong, it will later become a gardevoir. And Gardevoirs do turn me on.. But I would like to see more pokemon involved, with the main character (damn me! I forget his name everytime!) and with Silvia.. I would like to see her later with a swampert (I know its a Hoenn starter but please could you make this possible?) And.. I'm missing something.. Ah! nice writing, none mispelt words, none that I spotted, and I really like your writing style.Sorry for the long review. Hope you apologize my sister and her horrendous writing. Keep the good work up.
    -N
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  • From ANON - Freddy on August 08, 2012
    Fairly good story didn't notice any spelling errors (not that I pride myself on searching for them)
    But a tad lacking you didn't describe the main character though fairly good description of the others
    Can't be bothered thinking up more criticism
    I'll be waiting for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - 1358-2S on August 03, 2012
    I didnt quite got it (sorry! i dont catch things easily XP) Marius (its right spelled? ._.) Is man or a woman?
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  • From SkySan27 on August 02, 2012
    You're off to a good start. It was short-ish, but not bad at all. Good OCs and a much more real version of how some parents would react to their children doing something they forbid them to do.

    So far so good. I'm looking forward to where you go with this and hope that it ends up being a really good story. Good luck.
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