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May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing! You've done a beautiful job with it. Just from the first chapter alone--It outranks so many other fanfics and as far as adult-themed fanfics, this is among the best. You not only capture the physical aspect, but you dive into the emotional part as well-- creating a perfect balance with both. I think Kenshin's attitude in the first chapter is entirely possible for his character, especially after the events of the Jinchuu arc. I also think you've captured Kaoru and Kenshin's relationship in a way no one else has before.
Also, I'd like to say: I think it is absolutely horrible that someone would resort to personal insults towards you just because they didn't like a particular plot point in the story. There is certainly better and more respectful means to disagree with a plot point without using petty insults towards a person. I am glad that you did not abandon the story just because some people are disrespectful and childish in how they talk to others.
Also, I'd like to say: I think it is absolutely horrible that someone would resort to personal insults towards you just because they didn't like a particular plot point in the story. There is certainly better and more respectful means to disagree with a plot point without using petty insults towards a person. I am glad that you did not abandon the story just because some people are disrespectful and childish in how they talk to others.
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story... really liked it... good job... gret work...
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
お話は ｕっごく いいと 思いました。でも なたの 日本語 ちょっと 変と 思いました、全部でわないけど ちょっと 外れてると 思いまｕので 今度わ 気よ付けてください、 りがと ございました。
築山 ともみ より
築山 ともみ より
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, you\'re good! this fic\'s fantastic
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You did a excelent chapter with megumi and Sano, sano is a gentleman and he never could rape Megumi. Hope you will write a storie just for this couple because Iｴm a huge fan. love this storie you have a lot of potencial
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the way you developped the relation between sano and megumi (Iｴm a huge fan of them) you have great writting skills and I hope you could write another storie just for Sano and megumi.
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September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry you got all those hateful reviews; I personally think your story is great. Unlike most lemons I've read so far, this story actually has a very good plot. I've recently started watching Rurouni Kenshin and I think Kenshin and Kaoru are a great couple and absolutly belong together. The only thing I find unsatisfactory with the story is the formatting; its a little hard to read with all the paragraphs jammed together. Other then that, keep up the good work! I hope to read some of your other works.
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi there!!
Well I loved the first three chappies! As they are so cute! Poor Kenny a fish! Then a cursing Kaoru...Kenshin actually curses quite a bit himself. Most of it seems to be in his head BUT he does have quite a few verbal slips and Kaoru only catches him twice!!
I know alot of folks were highly put off by the actions of the battousai..but come on the guy is so hot and tempting.. I can understand the reason for that lady to push the limit. PLUS.. He is just a man and with the right influence..smells, thoughts, actions... No one would be able to resist. I think you should have gone with it from there and screw all these people who try to tell you how the battousai in YOUR story should react! Even though that chappie would have lead to some really angsty situations for K/K and not to metion the guilt on poor Oro-chan... Ahh well, I loved the lemony make up scene! Making up should always be that sweet!
hmmm....I say this and I mean it... I think...Lucky green-eyed hoe!
I knew Megumi would see the light!
500yen might have been alot back then I guess... Now that is equivalent to about $5.00 American cash. So, yah, It was alot back then.
I still do notice a lot of spelling and grammatical errors but it\'s not enough to take the attention away from the story.
It\'s Sakabatou...not ... Sakobatou
Tanuki ... not ... Takuni.
I dunno if you realized that you spelled it that way...
I\'m too picky!! Forgive me! I really do mean the best!
\"Yoshi\" also means \"Good\"
Awwwwwww!!! All and all that was such a good story! Lots of Lemony sweetness! I amazed at how you are able to write so many sex scenes in one story and not have them end up sounding the same! You have such a creative mind. It\'s great how you are able to make a great fantasy story and yet make everyday life just as great an adventure. Inspiration to me anyway. I think I will try a little harder to work on a fiction idea in my head.
NOW work on your other stories! I can hardly wait for the next chappie to \"Do you want to Live Forever\"!! If you would be so kind I have a request.. Could you possibly put some major Kaoru domination of Kenshin in your new fic? Once again one of my little weird cravings... Just like with the Kenji and Quii thing... There are plenty of things they could do and Mesu Tora could do with some domination over her Kodora...
*blushes*
I\'m so bad. I hope my comment requests aren\'t too..odd.
Lots of Love,
De Lazy Lime
Your fan,
De Lazy Lime
Well I loved the first three chappies! As they are so cute! Poor Kenny a fish! Then a cursing Kaoru...Kenshin actually curses quite a bit himself. Most of it seems to be in his head BUT he does have quite a few verbal slips and Kaoru only catches him twice!!
I know alot of folks were highly put off by the actions of the battousai..but come on the guy is so hot and tempting.. I can understand the reason for that lady to push the limit. PLUS.. He is just a man and with the right influence..smells, thoughts, actions... No one would be able to resist. I think you should have gone with it from there and screw all these people who try to tell you how the battousai in YOUR story should react! Even though that chappie would have lead to some really angsty situations for K/K and not to metion the guilt on poor Oro-chan... Ahh well, I loved the lemony make up scene! Making up should always be that sweet!
hmmm....I say this and I mean it... I think...Lucky green-eyed hoe!
I knew Megumi would see the light!
500yen might have been alot back then I guess... Now that is equivalent to about $5.00 American cash. So, yah, It was alot back then.
I still do notice a lot of spelling and grammatical errors but it\'s not enough to take the attention away from the story.
It\'s Sakabatou...not ... Sakobatou
Tanuki ... not ... Takuni.
I dunno if you realized that you spelled it that way...
I\'m too picky!! Forgive me! I really do mean the best!
\"Yoshi\" also means \"Good\"
Awwwwwww!!! All and all that was such a good story! Lots of Lemony sweetness! I amazed at how you are able to write so many sex scenes in one story and not have them end up sounding the same! You have such a creative mind. It\'s great how you are able to make a great fantasy story and yet make everyday life just as great an adventure. Inspiration to me anyway. I think I will try a little harder to work on a fiction idea in my head.
NOW work on your other stories! I can hardly wait for the next chappie to \"Do you want to Live Forever\"!! If you would be so kind I have a request.. Could you possibly put some major Kaoru domination of Kenshin in your new fic? Once again one of my little weird cravings... Just like with the Kenji and Quii thing... There are plenty of things they could do and Mesu Tora could do with some domination over her Kodora...
*blushes*
I\'m so bad. I hope my comment requests aren\'t too..odd.
Lots of Love,
De Lazy Lime
Your fan,
De Lazy Lime
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April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oro!? did you post something new de gozaru ka? um, anyway, sessha really like this story..*sniff*..but things must come to an end...*sniff*..maa,sessha would surely look forward to kanzenestuki-dono\'s new vampire fic..has sessha mentioned to you that sessha likes vampire fics? well, now, sessha has.^^ sessha hopes it\'s kaoruxkenshin pairing...ehehe^^ anyway, sessha would also like to thank you for reviewing in my fic...it really feels nice to be appreciated...and, um, sessha hopes you\'d read the others too..they\'re more \'graphic\'...ts quite long, for only one lemon...sessha would hopefully post it sometime this week,,probably one chapter at a time...*grins*
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April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your works. LOVE THEM. Screw those idiots who don\'t like it. They\'re simply jealous of your immense writing talent. I especially love how you capture the characters\' emotions, and how they seem to come to life before one\'s eyes as the story progresses. Again, I love this story, and I hope you\'ll continue to write. You\'re a very talented author, and I, for one, am extremely lucky to read a piece of work such as this. ^____^