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Yeah, me again. I just read most of the reviews that are currently posted. I only saw a few
flames, and those I did see wunsuunsubstantiated. And even though SesshaKenshin did have
a point about how you characterized Battosai, it\'s your story. You have the right to do anything
you want to it without having to answer to anyone.

On another note, how is it that some people think that a person could only love -one- other
person that way? I\'ve seen beautiful relationships where there are three people, all deeply in
love and lust, and only the normal relationship problems. True, these are very special people,
but it can and does happen. But that isn\'t my point.

The point is, I still want to know what happens next. I\'m thinking that the green-eyed woman is
really a Madame Butterfly type deal. I wonder how Sano would deal with that...

Thank you for reading my little rant, and don\'t let \"The Man\" bring you down. (I know, bad pun)

Ja Ne,
CybrEmly

True love is different for everyone. So how does that asshole reviewer know what you were trying to portray. I think you did an excellent job. Please, please, PLEASE continue writing. The only opinion that matters is your own.

Hey hey you\'re forgivien. I, a guy, never thought any of that stuff about you or what you wrote. You also can\'t just leave this mystry unsolved, we need to know what become of the situation with Sano and the woman he was supposedly with. It doesn\'t even havebe lbe lemonised, I just need to know what happens to Sano and Megumi\'s relationship, and what it was that Tae really saw.
Please continue this wonderful fanfic.

in my opinion this story is a great story and I say FUCK everyone else who has a problem with it...if this is something you feel is worth writing than finish it and the hell with everyone else\'s opinion. True love is in the eye of those who experience it those who commented about it are addicted the the fluff found in romance novel no true love is without real problems....anything worth experiencing is always worth fighting for.

an sad reader

End of a weary day is a wonderful story. I don\'t think you have abused the characters at all. It is very expressive and quite humorous at times. One of the best I\'ve ever read. I wish you could finish the story and solve the green-eyed woman mystery. Please don\'t be discouraged. Arigato.

I know it\'s hard to have people putting down something you\'ve worked so hard to do... I know from experience. It\'s tough to pull through with all the people bashing your stories and art and such, and it makes you feel really bad. But I truly loved your story. It\'s absolutely awesome. I wish I could see how the story ended. Please, for your fans, reconsider and continue writing this fic! Thank you, and don\'t give up! ^^ ~Eternity

sweetheart, most of the people who review are dumbass teenagers with severe dillusions of what love is and no idea about the truth of human frailty. Don\'t take it to heart! This IS a good story. You have not debased the characters in any way. That is the simple truth. if you don\'t believe me, just look at what your fellow authors scribble. Some of it is completely subliterate. You do not fall into that category. believe in yourself.

Alright, first of all, I think those people who wrote those stupid reviews were nothing but a bunch of insensitive jerks. The story is how you want it to be. You write what you want, and that is your right. I find nothing wrong with your story. I think those people can just take their stupid opinions and shove them up their asses. I\'m sorry I never reviewed now, because I might have helped keep you from getting so depressed over your story if I had expressed my opinion before. They may have the right to express their own opinions, but not when it\'s as rude as what you described.

Also, from every fic I\'ve ever read, it seems that men are turned on by sight alone sometimes, so you are justified as far as I\'m concerned.

Never lose faith in yourself.
-Phèdre Nó Delauney

You can\'t leave! Don\'t let a bunch of bullshit opinions push you in the wrong direction. You\'re not worthless. You can write about true love. Hell, I\'ve been in a \'relationship\' for several years with a man I truly love and I still can\'t figure out how to put it in words. But you did it beautifully in perfect content! Please don\'t leave if only for my sake. It\'ll keep me away from my therapist for at least one chpater.

I\'m very sorry to hear that you are putting an end to this fanfiction. For what it\'s worth, I have always enjoyed readihis his fanfiction and hope you will continue with others in the future.

Vii