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Sorry again, but I just have to say this, you shouldn\'t give those pricks the satisfaction of ending your fic. I want see those pricks put themselves out there and recieve flaming reviewers from stupid people like themselves. Hey if they don\'t like it, just don\'t read it. I hope you know from me you have a loyal fan and I look forward to your future works. I truly mean everything I said. Please take care and reconsider.

I´m really sorry to hear that you have decided to end this story. I really loved the plot and the fantastic way you portrayed the characters (especially k&k) and the complexity of their love. And that included the first version of the chapter in the teahouse (I don´t see anything wrong in it). Don´t be discouraged by people and please...always write what is in your heart. Thanks for sharing your story with us.
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Here\'s a big F U to all those who flamed you!ame ame on them! I was surprised when you revised that chapter. Personally I thought it was fine the way it was. Perhaps that is because I too am an older fan. Love (and life) is never a simple black and white, it is myriad shades of grey. I love my husband with all my heart, after ten years of marriage we still act like young lovers. We are soul-mates. But we are nlindlind! We both apprieciate a good-looking person. And yes, we can be tempted. We are only human after all. It is the actions we take dealing with the temptations that matter. Many of your detractors are probably rather young, and certainly idealistic in their views of love and human nature. As they get older they will see the truth and honesty in your portayal of these characters. I am sorry that you will not continue this story, I do hope you will not let the immature reactions of some prevent you from writing. As for me, \"Thank you for your fine work.\"

Oh, well... What can I say??? Three things, I guess:

1.I like the first version of chapter six. I\'ll not lie because I believe their love is absolute. The drama in that bordel shook me, but I like to keep my mind open. Like I said before, what made me accept that was the reality. I see their love as absolute because Kenshin and kaoru are caracters from fiction. They are not real. But if they exist I think things like that might happens, because Kenshin would be just human and made mistakes (Kami knows about his past mistakes so it esplain one little shake in his fidelity to Kaoru).

2.I think the comotion is because the relashionship you build between them. They seem so deep in love, most kenshin (you show his love like a sacred thing because the way he see Kaoru: a pure angel, who hold his heart, soul, hopes, who is his soul-mate), that is nearly impossible to believe he could put that down so fast. When love is so deep people think tha respect is that way too. Well, that\'s in the perfect world and for few pure souls. But if the I would like to know what might have happen if you choose to follow the first version. Kenshin debating about how to tell Kaoru, questioning his love, and then her reaction after knowing. It would be really good. That way I think their fellings should be much stronger. But this is your story and you choose the path.

3.The lemon, of course. FANTASTIC, LIKE ALWAYS!!!! They keep coming better and better. I love the passion you put when they make love. It\'s like the mix of their souls.

Big hugs from Brazil my friend!!!!

Tsuki-san,

I must say that your story is one of the best Rurouni Kenshin fanfictions out there, and I have read a lot of them. I really love your writing style: it’s descriptive, not lon long-winded. Some authors will say, this is what happened and how it happened, but do not give readers enough time to let tetaietails of the setting and things like that settle in. I am glad that you took the time to describe what Kaoru and Kenshin were feeling and thinking throughout the story and especially during the lovey dovey parts. It really takes away from the effect of the moment when some ars wrs write, he put this in there and then they were like this and BAM! it’s over!

A as as you have probably noticed, the revised version of your chapter with Kenshin at the teahouse fits really well with the whole mystery behind Sano and the green-eyed girl. Kaoru walked in on Kenshin and thought that he was being unfaithful to her, but it was only a “fleeting glance” and did not convey the whole picture. It was the same thing Kenshin was explaining to Megumi earlier about Sano. Although I really liked how you had that chapter before, I think Kaoru walking in on Kenshin strengthens the plot of your story.

Tsuki-san, you have a lot of talent for writing and I look forward to reading other works from you in the future!

Spotmarked

Great chapter. I love the way you write with emotion. Can\'t wait to read what happen with sano and megumi, and like always kk scenes. Hope you update soon. Hey if you could please e-mail when you update. Until then take care.

do not disappoint your readers, please continue your stories........

orororo....sessha finds this uh, unusual...um, kanzentsuki-dono, sessha really likes your story demo,,um...i hope you won\'t get mad at me but sessha would just like to point out some of the things he, um, disagrees..sessha humbly asks for kanzentsuki-dono\'s for forgiveness for doing this but sessha would like to diasgree to battousai\'s reaction to the woman..sessha does not agree on the tha that he was teased beyond his own restraints to have done such actions to the girl...um, he may fins her attractive alright, but i think it would ooc for the battousai to be easily swayed by another woman, aside from his kaoru-dono de gozaru yo...sessha believes that if it was battousai, he may not even find the girl attractive at all...but okay, let\'s consider that. So, battousai finds her attractive, but i don\'t think battousai is someone who\'d get turned on that easily...if battousai is someone like that, then he\'d have a lot of women even during the revolution now would he? Im sure before, a lot of women find him dangerously attractive, but he’d be cold..battousai is someone who could only lust for one woman (his wife) alone..thus, if it were battousai, shouldn\'t he be not affected by the girl\'s charm? he shouldn\'t have gone boner with her in the first place even if kenhin would think she\'s breathtaking...*sigh* gomen ne, if sessha had offended you in anyway. sessha would just like to point this out since sessha disagrees about that part...hm, wouldn\'t it be better if battousai had just came in with a cold attitude towards everyone..he might treat the girl with some respect, but i don\'t think he\'d be someone so easily to be warmed up with, after all, he might even look down for whores such as her, even if she\'s goodlooking...hm, how about she tries to seduce him, but he still keeps a straight face on, unfazed about anything, and is not “at all” affected by her seduction. Only kaoru could do that to him and arouse him….then, with a cold treatment on the girl, as the girl tries to seduce him, kaoru suddenly pops out saying about finding something….she gasps, as she looks at kenshin and the girl, completely misunderstanding…she thought that kenshin was taking a long time because they were playing…kenshin looks at her, surprised that she had come inside, then realizes their position…he’d ran after kaoru, wanting to explain that nothing happened and this and that….how’s that? Won’t you consider? Um, sessha would like to know kanzenetsuki-dono’s opinion on sessha’s suggestion……um, if ever you’re mad, um, please be ge…see…sessha would be prepared de gozaru yo…gomen nasai, kanzentsuki-dono…sessha just wanted to point this out…*bows on the floor*

OH.MY.GOD!!!!! You are back! YOU ARE BACK!!!!! I drop my jaw and it just can\'t come back to place. What a mess!!! You know, when you started to write about Kenshin reassuring Kaoru about his love and devotion I swear: I SAW THAT COMING!!!! But never THAT way. I just can\'t figure out what he\'ll do about that now, because we all know his tendences to be guilt. I know men are all out of control when it comes to attractive and easy women, and they can understand sex and love like different things far more than women can, but... Poor Kaoru!!!!

I love the drama development! Hentai fics are fun but when you get a good story together the final mixfantfantastic. I whant to know what that stupid will say NOW!!!!

Big hugs from Brazil!!!

Your friend,
Lere.

Ya knoe...all this lovin\' is going on and it\'s all good...but, I can\'t help but think: Poor Yahiko...so young and without a love of his own...(sniffles)

Great, eh...\'one shots\', babe!!

Ja ne,
KagoKitty
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