rate_review Reviews

i think that u need to be more specific in the sex scenes. i got confused halfway through it! that is all. The rest was very good! please make more.

i enjoy your writting very much, your spelling has vastly improved, i would still rephrase the part about the sexual encounter against the post, it was not worded right, if you know what i mean, i would have stgated something like it made her feel like a virgin again, but otherwise i look forward to more of your stories, keep up the good work

yo!! This story is so GOOD!!! sessha would rate it perfect do gozaru!! I hope you update soon...sessha wants to see his \"turn\" *wink*. This is totally one of the best lemons i\'ve ever read. Anyway, are yu familiar with the story \"wild welcome home\"? yep, it\'s an rk fic...\"I\" just got it posted, again..yep, it is sessha no fic. Sessha used to post it at ff.net but they deleted my fic due to *ahem*. Anyway, sessha would like to ask for help. I don\'t know what\'s wrong, but sessha can\'t login. And actually, if you noticed, THERE WAS NO AUTHOR IN MY STORY. argh! frustrating! what\'s wrong! sessha can\'t post the other chapters de gozaru and sessha don\'t like it that his name is not posted as its author. Please help me....Oh! and please update soon too^^ you camailmail sessha at: sessha_oro@hotmail.com....(just makin sure)

Lere\'s swirling eyes @ @!!!! She roses and her head is spinning. YOU MADE THE POOR GIRL FAINT!!!!! Evil author!!!! Bad, bad, wonderful, great, fantastic author!!!!!!

That man is the most sexy beast in all the world!!!! It was your best lemon EVER!!! My palms are sweat and cold, my knees are shaking yet and I have a burning feeling in my stomach. Just fantastic!!!!! I love Kenshin, but YOUR Battousai was amazing.

Big hugs from Brazil!!!!!!

omg! i loved it! kenshin is so sweet in here >.<..i just want to go over there and grab him from kaoru...lol..update S!! M!!

Beautiful. Your emotional and physical description is top notch (you really capture how and what people tend to feel), and your tribute to Kenshin and Kaoru\'s love is simply wonderful.

It\'s me again!!!! Your number one fan! And I love the fact you choose to transform the lemons series into a story. But Ie yoe you keep the lemons coming, you know? The other couples are fun but KK will always be the best and you have a special talent to write about them.

Hugs from Brazil!!!!

...............wow...............
That\'s really, really good!! Hell, that\'s fuckin\' awesome!!! So descriptive and intense...THAT\'S how to write a damn good story!!!
KagoKitty
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i love your story, kanzen ne tsuki-san. especially the japanese terms you use.
please update soon. if it\'s not too much trouble, add a little play and mischieviousness
in the next chapter(you with me?)arigato!

great story!