rate_review Reviews

good idea.

you said that you needed a bit of fluff and so decided to write it for yourself. well thankyou \'cause this girl needed it too. yummy! my only compt wot would be that you should have condensed the story down in to one fic with multiple chapters instead of three separate fics. but that\'s not really a complaint, more of a suggestion. the writing itself was superb and just what this k/k/b lover needed. the dynamic between the wanderer and the murderer over their combined sexual tension makes for such excellent reading. thankyou again!

Never loved the Battousai more. Keep up the good work, please.

I am...at a loss for words. I have just read, what I believe to be one of the most beautifulfanfictions of all time. To call it a lemon would somehow..cheapen it\'s greatness. I adore how you describe everything, and how you make Kenshin behave as a human would. You never seem to see Kenshin get angry at mundane things do you? Such as you made him with the laundary. I think you wrote Kenshin\'s character very well, without flaw if possible. And of course your brilliant display of the ever present battosai/Rurouni struggle inside him. You are an inspiration! And I hope that I can follow in your example and write a \'lemon\' this magnificently!

Well Don Gre Great job!!!

~Anime Goddess, Lindsey

WOW... So you are going to write more aren\'t you? I mean obviously you have talent. Your story has depth... A decent depth that allows adequate build up for the ~_* climax. There are happier situations that you could elaborate on and all of us would enjoy it, as we did this little jewel in the sea of RK perversious-obsession. Usually I don\'t read... angst. Kinda brings me down. However on a scale 1-10 comparing stuff I would usually find my self reading to your little angsty piece.. I give you a 9.9 Why? Because nothing is a 10 because nothing is perfect. Sometimes it\'s good for a build up of emotions that need to be given an outlet. I\'m glad you didn\'t let your emotional down time harded you heart. There\'s just something about that Himura Kenshin... Makes everything fall into place or fall apart. Thankyou for sharing, it\'s a good thing to share.

Peace,
Mimi

WOW! This is argueably the best Kenshin/Karou lemon EVER!!
I\'m with CybrEmly01, an additional chapter of a sequal showing the afterectsects of this chapter would be very nice to see.

*Wide eyes* OOoooOOOOooo

*Wipes drool off chin* I think I need a cold shower.

Naughty author, not gonna continue? I\'d like to see the after-effects
of this. Mushiness in the dojo, teasing from Sano and Yahiko-chan.
I wonder what Megumi\'ll do when she finds out...
Throw a fit probably. *evil smile* I never did like the way she always
hung all over Kenshin. He deserves better than that woman. (It was
the nicest and most accurate thI coI could call her)

Anyways, thank you for the story. I adored the Kenshin/Kauru smut.
\'Specially the bit where they were reading each other\'s minds. *wink*
Nice touch.

Ja Ne,
CybrEmly01

That was preety good. Good job. I look forward to your others works. Until next time take care.

VEEERRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYY Nice. The sex scene was completely smoking and the romance was nicely done. ^^

Glad you took the advice and posted on aff.net. ^_^ There are still some formating issues. . .but again. . .that can be easily fixed. I still say you need a glossary for the japanese though. Otherwise, as good as it was on ff.net, if not better, \'cause they won\'t axe ya from here for posting lemons. ^_^ Keep up the good work!
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