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awww....that was so sweet... oh yeah, loved the lemon ^.~

awww....that was so sweet... oh yeah, loved the lemon ^.~

It is great story. I loved it from the beginning to the end. I wish most of the people would be like the characters in this story. The world really would be great. There are some but really hard to find. Write a new story. This one was awsome and next will be too.

Hey.... I think you\'re the best, really... and those flaming ****s can go stick their opinion where the sun don\'t shine... so who cares if there\'s spelling mistakes?! It\'s the content that counts!!! And the content is really, really, fantastic. Don\'t stop because of them, they\'re just people without enough imagination so they have to go and spit on everyone else\'s. Keep it up!

beautiful, just beautiful. continue the good work. i hope everything is going well for you right now and i\'ll continue to keep u in prayer.

I was reluctant to keep reading after the fiasco of those baka reviews for what you wrote in chapt 6 and then rewrote in chapt 7. I believe strongly that this is your story, you made it up, dreamed it up, and wrote it for the sheer pleasure and then just wanted to share it with all of us ruroni kenshin fans. I give you credit for rewriting a very, very good redo chapter but I also liked the first one as well, but they were both very, very good so I reread your story all the way up to the latest chapter and all was very good and I await breathlessly for the next chapter.

Thank you for continuing your story, I bow in supplication to your wonderful story.

Wow! I\'m *so* impressed with this entire story but especially with this last chapter. The sadness, the horror and the despair of the people trying to deal with the tragedy *really* came through. More than once I was brought to tears as I read it. Bravo! I\'m also very glad you ended the chapter on a positive note. If you hadn\'t I\'d have probably been depressed for a week! ^_^;; I really admire you being able to write the sorrowful and sad parts. I\'m trying to write the second half of a story and I\'m totally stuck because I can\'t bring myself to write the angst, sorrow and death. You wrote it so well that I\'m totally envious!

I really like how you\'ve written Sano and Megumi\'s characters. Many people write both of them as shallow and two-dimensional. Sano\'s angst because his drinking and carousing had possibly cost him his chance with Megumi, and his growth when he realized that behavior wasn\'t worth losing her over, really showed him maturing. I also liked how Megumi\'s inner conflict about why she was having such a hard time accepting the love Sano offered, helped her to mature and grow emotionally. You\'ve given their characters a lot of humanness and depth in this story. The only thing I\'d say to watch out for is that both of them are still stubborn and headstrong. Changing from being self-centered to other-centered won\'t be completed after just one epiphany - no matter how \'earth-shattering\' the revelation was. This would probably be a life long struggle for both of them so don\'t forget to give them back some of the \'fireworks\' once the newness of their relationship has worn off. ^_^

I\'m *very* much looking forward to the interaction between Xander and Sano and finding out more about the history between them and Kenshin. I also can\'t wait to read Megumi\'s reaction when she finds out that Xander\'s woman is the one she thought Sano was with that evening. ^_^

Overall, I\'m really enjoying the suspense, the drama and the spice of this story and will be eagerly waiting for the next chapter! Thank you for sharing your wonderful and vivid imagination with us! ^_^

I love this story and I know how it feels to just want to end something if you ever need ideas believe me I\'ll be glad to help in anyway possible!^_~ Keep writting! Love Ya Mai Mai

They are the best!!!!!! You have a rare talent to make KK lemons. I\'ll always say that!!!! How can you think this story isn\ood?ood?????? It is the best lemon here and you don\'t need to BORROW ideas anywhere because you are original and have a romantic heart and a sweet imagination. You don\'t write sex scenes without meaning, Heart, soul and body are a fantastic mix and that take my breath away!!!! You can see the caracter\'s flame and they jump from the PC, alive and real. Never doubt your talent and keep aprimorating your style.

love you!!!! Big hugs from Brazil!!!

Lere

NICELY done