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February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you can\'t just stop there!! more! I demand more!!! you have to finish this story and your flamers be damned!
you can\'t just stop there!! more! I demand more!!! you have to finish this story and your flamers be damned!
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February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
don\'t leave us in suspense. i want to know what happens between sano and megumi. please update soon. keep up the good job. good work
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February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! I\'m so excited! *waits eagerly for next chapter*
By the way, whoever flamed you didn\'t know what in the heck they were talking about. *sticks out tongue at flames*
I\'ve read this story since the start but of course...
I didn\'t realize there was a review button. *sweatdrops*
Please update soon!
By the way, whoever flamed you didn\'t know what in the heck they were talking about. *sticks out tongue at flames*
I\'ve read this story since the start but of course...
I didn\'t realize there was a review button. *sweatdrops*
Please update soon!
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hurrah for another great chapter! ^^ And oh so steamy! *fans herself* Can\'t wait for more!!
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm, this is verrry good! I have only made it through the first 5 chapters and the only reason I am stopping is because it is almost midnight and I am falling asleep at my keyboard! I can\'t wait for tomorrow so that Ican read the other chapters left (and believe me, those chapters WILL BE finished tomorrow)! So, I will start begging early: Please update! Please update! Please update! ^___^
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February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi. you have a very good way with words and the style is evident, already very mature and developed. your weakness, though, is spelling. i suggest that you use microsoft word in editing your stories to ensure that you have no basic errors and the like. for example, there is no such thing as \'presant\'. it is spelled presEnt- the same with presance; it is spelled presEnce. anyway, besides those little things, there is not much error and you are a very talented person. you will go far, what with your intelligence and vigor.
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February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh, and it\'s sequEL, not sequAl.
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so happy for you. You\'ve decided to go on! Good, because it would\'ve been a shame to lose a story as great as yours ^___^ update soon! Loved to chappie!
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your story is wonderful... and for you flamerz who dont like the storyline... read it for the sex... its good too
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January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it great sex scenes and enough angst in it. life is not easy and no life is perfect there is always going to jealously. Keep up the great work.